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*Hopeless Romantic -- Sooraj* (Page 3)

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Posted: 14 November 2012 at 1:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by akku8910

A nice poem from u,ami Clap.It clearly describes Sooraj's feelings and he could go on 2 any length2 bring happiness into her life.Your poem is a respite when there is a dearth of SurYa moments at the moment in the serial.

Amidi is a famous poet of dis forum ... Big smile ...So ...of course nice poem ... ROFL

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.Ami. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 14 November 2012 at 1:22am | IP Logged
Originally posted by MisscoolEyes

Ami bakudi!! A flawless composition. This one stands out for the sheer feelings it's conveying.For the sheer thoughts that is passing through the mind of theHug "Hopeless Romantic". For the strong emotions of love that it's painting here. Just brilliant!

You inspired me to write a lines myselfLOLMay I add a few lines here.These are Sandhya's thoughtsLOL

Time is just a moment when it comes to him.
 In him,I have a friend,a husband, and a soul-mate.
 Love to me means his presence in my life.
 His caring arms are my wings of life.

 With him next to me, All the paths are a bed of roses without thorns.
 With his smiling support, I can conquer the world.
 With his love, I get the power to do impossible.
 With his company, I am completely me.
 With him around, My life just seems so complete.

 He came to my life and turned  it to a heaven
 He entered my heart and taught it to love
 He touched my soul and we became "ONE".

Naina Bakudi..Hug Since I'd read your lines early in the morning, I was eagerly waiting to reply you.Star Thanks darling to appreciate my poem. I'm glad my words can help.Tongue

You always manage to inspire and spark thoughts. And lit with smiles, that I can be such an inspiration to you.Approve.

Regarding your lines of Sandy's thoughts:-
This is a gem my transformer, inverter, electron, proton, neutron, encoder, decoder..Hug Heart Hug

Your wisdom and understanding shine through this piece. Important lessons and nudges to touch any seeking soul. This was nice to read feel and absorb. Clap Star Clap.

Originally posted by farhana874

Amlu, did Sooraj ask u this way- 'dil chirke dekh li jiye'!
War na how did u write his haal-e-dil so beautifully!
Sandy toh dekhne se rahi his bleeding heart!
Nahi toh woh bhi gaati na 'main zandu balm huyi darrlingg tere liye'! Hahaha...badly need a surya scene where they will b comforting each other...both their hearts need 'love da ointment'!
Ferry...Hug..Naina ki Sir Pheri.LOL..Nah! I didn't ask Sooraj anything. I just observed his painful eyes to pen down lines..Geek..No Thankoos! SET UP! LOL Wink ! Sooraj Rathi..Embarrassed..Embarrassed..Embarrassed..Wink


Following lines are for both of you:-

You're such a sweet treasure
knowing you is such a pleasure
You're worth more than any pearls
You're such a wonderful loving girls
You're very loving and sincere
and in my heart I hold you dear.
I loved everything that you had to say
I shall take your words to heart
So that I may never fall apart!

Edited by ami_dabh - 14 November 2012 at 1:42am

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.Ami. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 14 November 2012 at 1:31am | IP Logged
@Fizak, Juna, Ashita, Rumela:- Thank you so much for your lovely appreciations. *Ahem Ahem* I'm flying over the cloud without wings as I've superman -- hub to hold me. Wink LOL ROFL

Originally posted by ayeshi_101

Perfectly described about Suraj's situation...!!! Bechara hopeless romantic...!!! LOL I wish Suraj would write something like that n give it to Sandhya...!!! I sometimes wonder is it cvs plan from b4 to show Sandy's character like that I mean hardcore n bad in romance type unlike other daily soap heroines..!!! Confused
Nice poem Ami di...!!! U have such a talent... One in a million type...!!! Clap
Thanks Shirin bakudi..Hug! @Bold:- Shocked. Nah! But still thanks a lot for your kind words. I dunno what's heading in CV's mind regarding sandy's character. Did you notice her saree color in yesterday's episode??? It was suiting her as well.--- Saint Sandy..Approve

Edited by ami_dabh - 14 November 2012 at 1:41am

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Posted: 14 November 2012 at 1:33am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -SamiR-

Nicely done one minute poet! Star Clap I hope she knows, but I'm also getting hopeless after each epi Wink

Another question Suraj should ask Sandhya: 'kitabein bahut si padhi hongi tumne ... magar koi chehra bhi tumne padha hai?' Ouch
It took me almost half an hour to write this poem.Big smile. Thanks for your lubly praiseworthy comments and I agree with your song selection..Clap Star Clap

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Posted: 14 November 2012 at 1:41am | IP Logged
I'd prefer to reply SheeBz in one post. Big smile

Woh Samir aunty "kabab main haddi" ban gaya o/w both of yours comments were in tandem.Evil Smile

Originally posted by Deebz

I sincerely believe only hopeless romantics are still watching the show!

Beautiful composition Ami. Really love this one. Sandy please be kind to mhaara chora! Ab aur mat bhaagna door door!

Naina, Thank you for looking into Sandy's heart. Nice poem!  Her feelings are deep but alas, they are buried way too deep in her heartCry 
Thanks a lot my senior V to like this poem. How could I forget to write haal-e-dil for your lubly chhora in the absence of JAM..Ouch.. Dekhte hain sandy par uska impact hota hain ki nahi in upcoming episodes..Day Dreaming

Originally posted by shehjar

kya baat hain amli ..lovely poem .Star
u know what i like about it the most.chal guess kar

@ naina lovely reply .thanks for giving us sandys side . Clap
No Thankoos balloon bua.LOL. I think what you like about the poem is that I've used simple wordings??Day Dreaming

@Both:- Beautiful reply by your nanhi sipaahi.. She's also emerging as a dashing poet like me.Cool.I always knew -- there is spark in her writing skills.. She thinks very deeply.. Star

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.Ami. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 14 November 2012 at 1:54am | IP Logged
Originally posted by UMDU

Ami beta ek doubt hai... I know you will say lekin main hot seat main nahi hoon.,aap ho. Does not matter sirf ek prashn ka uttar de do. You claim not to be a romantic and always say you write such poems for us and that you are only exploring your creative potential Wink  That to my critical mind does not find acceptability. I cannot believe a poet can write poems without undergoing those emotions oneself. Now that's bad Ami beta you accuse SamiR of hiding his/her identity but you hide your romantic feelings inside and express it through poetry claiming it is only for our consumption. Wink Jokes apart. Very nicely written poem bringing out the real emotions of Suraj for Sandhya. Bas ek hi baat hai tum use samaj rahi ho per Sandhya ko kab mhare chore ke sentiments samaj main aayege.Confused
When you write "beta".. I always feel like you're referring to beta versions of the software. Shocked.LOL. ROFL.

What can I say to clear your doubts??? -- I just observed painful eyes of Sooraj to write down this piece. I still deny I'm not at all hopeless romantic like all of you. I've always expect to get something in return if I love someone in context to life partner or boy friend -- that's why i always afraid to tag myself as hopeless romantic. As far as I understood the term, it means you love someone unconditionally.Big smile.

Whether SaMir is aunty/uncle/girl/boy I lead up to an individual's choice -- It's indeed unsolvable mystery like Barmuda Triangle.. LOL

I like to expand my horizons since I firmly believe in 21st century one talent isn't enough to survive. You've to be multi-talented..Approve

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Posted: 14 November 2012 at 2:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -SamiR-

Originally posted by ami_dabh

I'll reply all of you as soon as I get free time. Main hoon bahut busy. Geek

@Samir Aunty - Ab Jyada jumping jack mat kar.. You're in your age of Aamir-Salman-Shahrukh. Kahi chot lag gayi toh will be difficult for you to recover. Evil Smile

Ouch! Ouch Hamarey saath saath bechare Aamir (Haila), Salman (ooi maa), and Shahrukh (k-k-k-kirann) ki bhi taang-pulling ho gayi Shocked. You said this before, but now it's my turn to sing ',,,shikaari khud yahaan, shikaar ho gaya' Ouch ... But I'm still waiting for your answer Wink LOL

Good reply from Sandhya's side MisscoolEyes! Clap I hope she transforms those thoughts into spoken words Day Dreaming
I know you proud of being of khan's age.. I remembered you told me once about it. Dunno exactly when n where..Day Dreaming..AK47 is an old rifle.Shocked.

I'm a M-4 assault rifle so bach ke rahiyo I'd killed Osama.Approve.

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Posted: 14 November 2012 at 2:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by akku8910

A  nice  poem  from  u,ami  Clap.It  clearly  describes  Sooraj's  feelings and  he  could  go  on  2  any  length 2  bring  happiness  into  her  life.Your  poem  is  a  respite  when   there  is  a  dearth  of  SurYa  moments  at  the  moment   in  the  serial.
Thank you Akku di/aunty..LOL. I'm glad you liked my poem. Hug

Originally posted by AHLMH

Amidi is a famous poet of dis forum ... Big smile ...So ...of course nice poem ... ROFL
My little sistah.Hug. Don't comment like this when someone share their views.Tongue It's not possible that everyone likes it.Big smile .

Like a principal of duality, Everything has its pros n cons.Star

Aur haan, You wanna visit GUJ..Day Dreaming. So what are you waiting for ?? Book your tickets of train -- Shatabadi Express(Mumbai to Ahmedabad) and I'll book your return ticket in newly started double Decker train..Big smile.. Chal aaja..I'll take you to safari of Gir forest..Star

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