Originally posted by MisscoolEyesNaina Bakudi.. Since I'd read your lines early in the morning, I was eagerly waiting to reply you. Thanks darling to appreciate my poem. I'm glad my words can help.
Ami bakudi!! A flawless composition. This one stands out for the sheer feelings it's conveying.For the sheer thoughts that is passing through the mind of the
"Hopeless Romantic". For the strong emotions of love that it's painting here. Just brilliant!
You inspired me to write a lines myself
May I add a few lines here.These are Sandhya's thoughts
Time is just a moment when it comes to him.
In him,I have a friend,a husband, and a soul-mate.
Love to me means his presence in my life.
His caring arms are my wings of life.
With him next to me, All the paths are a bed of roses without thorns.
With his smiling support, I can conquer the world.
With his love, I get the power to do impossible.
With his company, I am completely me.
With him around, My life just seems so complete.
He came to my life and turned it to a heaven
He entered my heart and taught it to love
He touched my soul and we became "ONE".
You always manage to inspire and spark thoughts. And lit with smiles, that I can be such an inspiration to you..Regarding your lines of Sandy's thoughts:-This is a gem my transformer, inverter, electron, proton, neutron, encoder, decoder.. Your wisdom and understanding shine through this piece. Important lessons and nudges to touch any seeking soul. This was nice to read feel and absorb. .
Originally posted by farhana874
Amlu, did Sooraj ask u this way- 'dil chirke dekh li jiye'!
War na how did u write his haal-e-dil so beautifully!
Sandy toh dekhne se rahi his bleeding heart!
toh woh bhi gaati na 'main zandu balm huyi darrlingg tere liye'!
Hahaha...badly need a surya scene where they will b comforting each
other...both their hearts need 'love da ointment'!
..Naina ki Sir Pheri.
..Nah! I didn't ask Sooraj anything. I just observed his painful eyes to pen down lines..
..No Thankoos! SET UP!
! Sooraj Rathi..
@Bold:- Following lines are for both of you
You're such a sweet treasure
knowing you is such a pleasure
You're worth more than any pearls
You're such a wonderful loving girls
You're very loving and sincere
and in my heart I hold you dear.
I loved everything that you had to say
I shall take your words to heart
So that I may never fall apart!
Edited by ami_dabh - 14 November 2012 at 1:42am