Hopeless Romantic -- Sooraj

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Posted: 13 November 2012 at 11:18am | IP Logged

I've just penned down few lines where Sooraj asking Sandhya whether she knows how much he loves her? Day Dreaming

Who knew?
That one grin; that her face
Could snip my heart so promptly
So perfectly enchanted
And I don't wanna be reclaimed.

Does she know?
That every time she arrives into a room
A host of butterflies soar within me?
And every time she departs
Does she know that I can't breathe?

Does she know?
That I would do all I can
With all my durability
With all that is given me
Just to see her felicitous?

Does she know?
That when her heart cracks
My heart cracks
When her tears rolled out
My tears roll too
But she may never envision that
I'm very good at lacing my notions.

Does she realize?
Just how much she means to me?
How much she's valuable to me?
That I don't wanna alive without her?
That she's priceless the pain, the tears, and the broken hearts?
That she's so much more than she opines?
That I love her?
That I'm still here?

A hopeless romantic, I give hope to others
But retain none for myself.

Edited by ami_dabh - 13 November 2012 at 11:21am

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Posted: 13 November 2012 at 11:22am | IP Logged

Ami fantastic wa

Loved specially this

That she's priceless the pain, the tears, and the broken hearts?
That she's so much more than she opines?
That I love her?
That I'm still here?

A hopeless romantic, I give hope to others
But retain none for myself.

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Posted: 13 November 2012 at 11:26am | IP Logged

Ami what a wonderful tribute to the love that Sooraj has for Sandhya and wish she gives it to him at times he craves for the most...

Your last line is so touching and I really feel the need to give Suraj a big hug and wipe out all the helplessness and hopelessness that he is feeling from Bhabho's rejection of his token of love for her...

A hopeless romantic, I give hope to others

But retain none for myself

Edited by Juna04 - 13 November 2012 at 12:00pm

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Posted: 13 November 2012 at 11:36am | IP Logged

Amlu, did Sooraj ask u this way- 'dil chirke dekh li jiye'!
War na how did u write his haal-e-dil so beautifully!
Sandy toh dekhne se rahi his bleeding heart!
Nahi toh woh bhi gaati na 'main zandu balm huyi darrlingg tere liye'! Hahaha...badly need a surya scene where they will b comforting each other...both their hearts need 'love da ointment'!

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Posted: 13 November 2012 at 12:36pm | IP Logged

Nicely done one minute poet! Star

I hope she knows, but I'm also getting hopeless after each epi Wink

Another question Suraj should ask Sandhya: 'kitabein bahut si padhi hongi tumne ... magar koi chehra bhi tumne padha hai?' Ouch

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Posted: 13 November 2012 at 2:18pm | IP Logged

Perfectly described about Suraj's situation...!!! Bechara hopeless romantic...!!! LOL

I wish Suraj would write something like that n give it to Sandhya...!!! I sometimes wonder is it cvs plan from b4 to show Sandy's character like that I mean hardcore n bad in romance type unlike other daily soap heroines..!!! Confused

Nice poem Ami di...!!! U have such a talent... One in a million type...!!! Clap

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Posted: 13 November 2012 at 3:13pm | IP Logged

Ami beta ek doubt hai... I know you will say lekin main hot seat main nahi hoon.,aap ho. Does not matter sirf ek prashn ka uttar de do. You claim not to be a romantic and always say you write such poems for us and that you are only exploring your creative potential Wink

That to my critical mind does not find acceptability. I cannot believe a poet can write poems without undergoing those emotions oneself. Now that's bad Ami beta you accuse SamiR of hiding his/her identity but you hide your romantic feelings inside and express it through poetry claiming it is only for our consumption. Wink

Jokes apart. Very nicely written poem bringing out the real emotions of Suraj for Sandhya. Bas ek hi baat hai tum use samaj rahi ho per Sandhya ko kab mhare chore ke sentiments samaj main aayege. Confused

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