FF - Diwali Celebration? Or? (Page 2)

Gisel Goldie

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Posted: 13 November 2012 at 3:14pm | IP Logged
The smoke is catching up with her and she is feeling dizzyShocked.
She somehow manages to hold the gate railing and calls, "Ena ga...Cry"
She holds her throat as she is feeling very uneasyShocked.
Everyone is busy having funCry.
Tamil lights crackers and the kids are happy because it is him who is sponsoring the crackers. They come to him and hug him and kiss himEmbarrassed.
 Tamil smiles but when no one is looking he changes his expression to being sad againOuch.
A kid, "Vanga uncle. Intha maha pataka va fire pannunga. Ithu apdiya vanathila poi doom nu poi super a irukum.Smile"
Tamil, "
Itho varein da" and turns to see if Thulasi has gone. He notices Thulasi struggling to stand up straight and is holding the railing and her throatOuch.
He hurries forward, "
Ena achu, kuttima?" and holds her shoulders with full concernEmbarrassed. Thulasi looks into his eyes. Both of them look at each otherEmbarrassed. "Sorry..Thulasi. Ula porana po."and let's go off her. Thulasi is so shocked at how he said sorry for calling her 'kuttima'Ouch and tears up, "Ena ga.." The kids come and call him. He looks at her and turns to go. She is all the more shockedOuch. She is getting nauseated at the same time and...and...and...she vomits on TamilTongue. (New shirt pocha?) Thulasi holds her mouth controlling herself and looks at him with fearOuch and goes inside the house cryingOuch
GW sees this and comes to him, "Ena thimir avuluku. Un puthu dress a ipdi nasam pannitale. Avala.."Angry
Tamil looks at his dress, "Konjam vaiya muduriyaClap. Po anga poi entha kudumbatha kedukalamnu paruLOL. Ippotheiku ula vanthurathaWink." and he goes inside the house. GW is so shocked at how he is still supporting his wifeTongue and turns to go and sparkles from a puspanum falls over herTongue and she jumps in fearROFL.

Scene shifts to the washbasin where Thulasi is trying to vomit.
She is feeling nauseated but no vomit is comingCry.
Tamil goes and holds her head from behind massaging her headEmbarrassed.
Thulasi looks up at the mirror to see Tamil standing thereEmbarrassed.
She turns to him and sees that she has spoiled his shirtTongue.
Tamil notices that she is seeing his shirt, "
Itho oru nimisham. Lemon eduthutu varein."Embarrassed and goes and changes his shirt.
 Thulasi looks at him still confused at how to start a conversationOuch.
Tamil goes to the kitchen and gets a lemonadeEmbarrassed.
She drinks it looking at himEmbarrassed. He doesn't look at her at allOuch
When she almost finishes her drink Tamil asks, "Abortion panalaya? Illa panathu nala ipdi aiducha?Shocked"

Part 3!

Edited by Gisel - 14 November 2012 at 7:44am

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Smiles-20 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 13 November 2012 at 6:49pm | IP Logged
Aawww Gisel thanks for yet another super FF of yours.

I really like how it has the current track in it and the way you mixed things.

I don't know why but I'm getting a little mad at Tamil for how he's the last line is sad to hear.

The doctor saying 'karavu kalaichirulam' sounds so scary!

What is 'puspanam'? 

The FF feels so real like I'm reading an update not a fan fiction...please third part quick. 

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Gisel Goldie

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Posted: 14 November 2012 at 12:57am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Smiles-20

I don't know why but I'm getting a little mad at Tamil for how he's the last line is sad to hear.

What is 'puspanam'? 
Actually I want Tamil to be like thisLOL, for a while! To behave like a friend and how Thulasi wins him back would be romanticWink or even she being in pain like vomiting and stuff, where he can't be angry at her and goes back to herWink!
Haha! I kind of liked the last lineTongue!
That's why I put it there...oru aruva kolarula I have put that I have to take the story forward...I'm thinking...will be back soonWink!
Puspanam is "flower pot" cracker...

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vjayam Goldie

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Posted: 14 November 2012 at 1:45am | IP Logged
nince one gisel...agree with the silent treatment..just wish the CTs show like this..and the vomit part..too good..nice one to get the interaction back..
waiting for the next part anxiously...

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sss283 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 14 November 2012 at 2:47am | IP Logged
Nice one...two parts ...coolThumbs Up
eager to see how thuls n tamil now interact with each other
Day Dreaming

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TTfan Goldie

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Posted: 14 November 2012 at 4:09am | IP Logged
Great going Gisel.. feels like watching it.. well written..Clap and it is good that TA is being that way.. hope they show some similar kind of story further in Thendral too..

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MindFreezer Goldie

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Posted: 14 November 2012 at 4:42am | IP Logged
Tnx Gisellu for the super update!Tongue

Wow yesterday, so an fantastic episode la, naan ippidi oru episode not expectLOL, athuvum Thendral ille...he o no it is FF from GiselluLOL
Gisel enne solle venum, it was amezing!Star Can't wait for the next part...

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Pearl. IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 14 November 2012 at 5:13am | IP Logged
Thanks Gisel for part 2. Super cute was TA behaviour. Good silent treatment. Being silent will make her guilty. Good Good. Hope they show some scenes in the episode like ur FF.
Superb da! Waiting for next one.

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