FF - Diwali Celebration? Or? - Page 3

Posted: 11 years ago
Wowww super super super Gisel... The treatment by TA 👏 Ipdi than sila pera we have to handleee..It was very niceee... The slapss hahaha awww soo sweeet... Really apdiye real ah parkara mathiri irinthichu 😃

Part 4 venuma vaa?? Of courseee 😆
Posted: 11 years ago
Part 3 was great Gisel!  If you want and if you have time go for another part. 
Posted: 11 years ago
Beautifully picturised and written Gisel 😃 👏... part 4 illama eppidi ... please do continue ... waiting impatiently...
Posted: 11 years ago
Very Nice Gisel.. well handled by Ta and cute samadanam by T.. hmm waiting for part 4..👏
Posted: 11 years ago



(I wanted to end it! But, all your encouragement has let me take the story to the next level!😊 Thank you so much!)

Tamil, "Ena kutti kuttima? Ula iruta iruka😳? Kavala padatha enum 10 masathila veliya vanthirlam😳.
Thulasi, "Ena ga.."
Tamil turns to look at her confused face and gets up.
Tamil, "Ena kuttima?" putting her hair which has fallen on her forehead, back behind her ears😳.
Thulasi looks at the happiness and joy in Tamil's eyes and is not able to speak anything. 
Tamil shoves her, "Ena?" Thulasi comes back to reality.
Thulasi, "Illa athu epdi kutti kuttima? kutti Tamil a kuda irukulam la😳."
Tamil, "Illa enaku ponnu than venum😕."
Thulasi, "Ein?"
Tamil, "Yen ponnu engineer😕. Yen pondattiyum engineer😊. Nalla irukum la😕."
Thulasi looks at him with love through her tears😳 and is not sure what to say.
Tamil, "Actually yen ponnuku ena aganumo agatum. Doctor, engineer, lawyer, dancer, singer elam ava wish👏. Ava appa ava ena aganumo avala nala padiya padika vepein athuthan en vela⭐️. LKG seat lan vangi vekanum la😆?" looking around for his phone😆.
Thulasi, "Oruvela payana iruntha?😳"
Tamil, "Hm..payana iruthalum...No problem👏. Ponnugal mathika solli kuduthita pochu matha elam avanai pathukuvan👏.
Thulasi looks at him with total love😳. Tamil looks at her, "Ena ma?"😳
She hugs him😳. He smiles😳.
Tamil pats her shoulders, "Payana ponnagirathu mukiyam illama. Nama kolantha arogiyama oru koraiyum illama porakanum👏. Athuthan mukiyam⭐️. Doctor ena sonnanga🤓? Ena lan sapadanum nu sonnangala? Nalaiku rendu perum seinthu doctor ta polam😲.
Thulasi gets shocked and still can't decide whether to tell him what the doctor told her😡. 
Tamil continues, "Enuma oru vela yum nee seya vendam elam amma pathukuvanga😆. Padikira velaya nee paru. Kolantheiku thevayna vishayangala nan pathukurein😳. Ethavuthu saptuya?"
Thulasi, "Ama. Vara valila saptututhan vanthein."
Tamil, "
Oru nimisham iru itho vanthirurein." and goes inside😕.
Thulasi decides that she has to tell him everything, no matter what, so that she will feel relieved.
(Sikiram solliru!!!
Just then someone knocks at the door.

(Intha GW adanga mata pola irukai😡. I wonder what her reaction will be once she knows she will have to do all the work😆.)

Part 5!


Edited by Gisel - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
Aww super parts Gisel, great👍🏼 ippidi oru lovely dad for kutti Kuttima, aww so sweet. Can't wait for the next part...
Posted: 11 years ago
my god so many plans now itself...😳😳
so much love n affection towards their cutie-pie...
its touching
oh oh...interruption huh...wish tuls will tell tamil all what d doc said fast
👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely!!!  Is it GW at the door?
Posted: 11 years ago
Tamil brings a glass of milk with kunkuma poo shreds over it and gives it to Thulasi😳.
Thulasi looks at it and sulks😊, "Vendam ga. Ippo thena juice kudichein."
Tamil places it in her hands, "Athu nala ena. Enuma than unaku naraiya strength venum. Intha kudi."
Thulasi unwillingly takes it. Someone is still knocking the door😡. Tamil, irritatedly, goes and opens it.
It is the kids of the neighbourhood, "Vanga uncle! Antha patasa nangalai kolutha appa amma vida mateingiranga😡. Please vanga.
Tamil turns to look at Thulasi who has slowly kept the milk in the table😆. Tamil cutely morachifies but then smiles, "Va kuttima. Seinthu poi Diwali kondadalam😳.
(Now I totally understand why one whole week is just one day in Thendral😉!
Tamil goes and takes her hand in his hand and says, "I love you😳.
Thulasi looks into his eyes and is glowing😳. 
One of the kids clears his throat, "Pothum pothum...public."😆 Tamil turns around and raises his hands as if he is going to hit him😆. Everyone laughs and run outside. 
Thulasi also laughs and Tamil smiles seeing her laugh after a long time😳. He holds her hands and both of them come out the house. For the first time, Thulasi notices the beautiful surrounding with crackers and sparkles😳. 
Everyone in the neighbourhood turn to look as Tamil takes Thulasi in his arms and makes a grand entrance to the middle of the road, both of them totally lost in their eyes😳. Once they are in the middle of the road, Tamil slowly revolves her just as crackers add sparkle to the scene. 
(Me totally flat, when I was imaging this scene😆!)
GW looks at all this astonished😈 and looks around to see everyone in the neighbourhood admiring the couple.
One of the kids, "Hello uncle! Ithu ula nadanthatha vida romba public!"😆
Thulasi comes back to her senses first and looks around to see everyone staring at them, "Aiyoo kela vidunga. Elarum pakuranga.
Tamil, "Pakatum. En wife nan thuka kudatha?
Thulasi, "Aiyoo. Vindunga." trying to wriggle free.
 Tamil, "Seri. Seri." and lets her down so slowly and carefully😳.
Everyone around giggle. Thulasi straightens her saree embarrassed. 
Tamil still in cloud nine😛. The kids come and hit him and take him to burst the cracker😆. Thulasi laughs😳. 
Tamil fires the cracker to the sky and turns to look at Thulasi who looks back at him, both of them smiling😳, whereas everyone looks up into the sky at the cracker😳.

Next day morning, it is a Sunday
Tamil wakes up a tired, sleeping Thulasi and tells her to get dressed🥱.
Thulasi also gets dressed unwillingly as she is feeling so sleepy.
They have their breakfast, with Tamil making a fuss and feeding Thulasi with fruits, juice and stuffing her up😆.
Then, they go out in their bike.
Thulasi happily asks, "Enga ga poram? Koviluka?😳"
Tamil, "Illa hospitalku😲. Doctor ena lam sonnanganu enakum theriyanum la😲. Approm nee enalam sapadanum. Nee enalam panna kudathu.🤔"
Thulasi goes back to the 'Thulasi' mode. She keeps her hand in her head realising she was so happy yesterday night that she forgot to discuss things with Tamil.
By then, they have reached the hospital. Thulasi doesn't get a chance to speak to him. Before she can even think, they are in the doctor's room and the doctor greets Thulasi, "Vaa ma Thulasi. Neenga than Thulasi oda husband a? Nurse, antha abortion form a eduthutu va.😲"

Part6!
Edited by Gisel - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
Great going Gisel.. Haha both good and bad comes together for TT.. superb title.. hmm interesting.. and yes Gisel.. waiting for 6th part...😛

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