FF - Diwali Celebration? Or?

Oru Chinna Karpanaiya...

Doctor, "Unga blood pressure romba high a iruku and romba anemic a vera irukeinga😲. Intha mathiri time la baby a carry pannurathu avalo safe illa😲. Athumatum illa neengalum romba yosikirathu nala. Abortion pannurathu than nalathu. Yena ithu elam seri aganumna neenga complete rest edukanum. Collegeku elam poga mudiyathu."

Thulasi starts crying😭.

Doctor continues, "Nalaiku unga husband a kuttituvanga, avaru oru sign potta pothum karuva kalaichirulam😲."

Thulasi continues crying😔. Just then a nurse comes running in, "Doctor antha room no4 patient ku pain vanthudichu." Doctor excuses herself and hurries. Thulasi tries talking to her but she has left. Thulasi comes out crying and confused.
Just then a guy dashes into her😡. Thulasi gets ready to fight. But, the guy gives her a sweet box😕, "Sorry ga. En wife conceive airuka athan thala kal puriyala😳. Kalayanam ai 8 varushathuka approm."His wife comes near him and puts a hand over her husband's shoulder and gives an uneasy yet happy smile😳, "Sorry. Tamil Nadu lai ya famous lawyer nan than ana kolatha illathathu...."stops and controls her tears. Her husband comforts her😳. She smiles again, "Neengalum conceive airukeinga pola. Congratulations!"

Thulasi takes the sweets, "Thank you." and congratulates them and then fakes a smile😒 and leaves still confused. She takes an auto to her house.

Scene shifts to TT's house...

The house is decorated with flowers and lights😕. Thulasi gets down from the auto and is surprised wondering what is happening. She sees GW coming out of the house fully dressed up who smiles at her sarcastically😕. She enters the house.
GW, "Nilu.😕 Poi kala kaluvitu veetukula vaa.😕" Thulasi is so confused but does what GW says. She enters the house and sees the house well decorated. Tamil comes out of their room in full vetti sattai and smiles on seeing Thulasi and gives her a beautiful saree, "Intha, Thulasi". Thulasi silently takes it.
Tamil notices the sweet box in Thulasi's hand, "Ada neeya sweets vangitu vanthutiya?😕" and takes it. Thulasi is still standing there.
 Tamil, "Po Thulasi. Poi saree mathituva." and sends her inside the room. She changes and comes out😳. Tamil is busy preparing something. Thulasi notices that, Tamil hasn't commented on her saree because he always does.
There are many sweets on the table and Tamil is lighting an incense stick😕. Thulasi comes and asks, "Bedroom la katil yen thani thaniya iruku?😲"

Tamil, "Athu onum illa Thulasi. Una than nan nalla disturb pannurein la. Athan enuma ippidiya irukatum😳." and goes outside. Thulasi still stands there remembering Deepa telling her about Tamil knowing about everything😳. Tamil turns, "Ena Thulasi angaiya nikira? Va😕." Thulasi, "Ethuku ithu elam? Puthu dress? Decoration elam? Kasa ethuku waste pannureinga😡?" Tamil, "Nee nala padikira studentnu theriyum ana athukaga itha kuda celebrate pannalana eppidi😳?" Thulasi comes out and stands near him.
*Bang*
Thulasi is startled and holds on to Tamil's collar and hugs him in fear😳.

Tamil smiles sarcastically and releases himself from her grip and walks outside the gate😭. GW has just made a rangoli and kept deepams over them😊.
Thulasi comes out and sees everyone in the street celebrating with crackers and the whole place is lit up.
Tamil plays crackers with the kids of the street😳.
GW mingles with the other ladies of the street and everyone exchanges sweets and everyone is laughing. Thulasi stands alone.
Tamil walks up to her, "Happy Diwali😊! Po poi padi. Sorry for disturbing you!" and gives her a gift box and goes back to play with the kids. Thulasi opens the box frantically. She sees a "Friends forever" showcase piece. She tries to call him. But the smoke has caught up with her and she faints😲...

Part 2!

Edited by Gisel - 11 years ago

too good gisel..but waiting..it seems incomplete...

Yes it is!

Still writing...Will be back with Part 2 soon...😉

All those TV series here in US will have an episode to celebrate the festivity of the occasion. They will bring in Halloween, Thanksgiving, Christmas into the episode when is closer to that occasion.

Namba serialnga than will never have anything like that. Deepavali, Pongal, Navarathiri any good occasion they will continue with Alugai, sandai, plots etc. I used to wonder why they don't do it.

Nice to read this Gisel. Happy celebration + current issue. Very well written...

Good one Gisel😉. Story mixed with current track and people's exact emotions... Waiting for next one.

Haha awww niceee one Gisel 😃 Ippo situation and Thuls mind very well captured. Loved the way how TA behaved. Thuls should feel badd 😆 Waiting for your next part 😛

Gisel, nice FF with current track.. Good one.. waiting for next part..

The smoke is catching up with her and she is feeling dizzy😲.
She somehow manages to hold the gate railing and calls, "Ena ga...😭"
She holds her throat as she is feeling very uneasy😲.
Everyone is busy having fun😭.
Tamil lights crackers and the kids are happy because it is him who is sponsoring the crackers. They come to him and hug him and kiss him😳.
 Tamil smiles but when no one is looking he changes his expression to being sad again.
A kid, "Vanga uncle. Intha maha pataka va fire pannunga. Ithu apdiya vanathila poi doom nu poi super a irukum.😊"
Tamil, "Itho varein da" and turns to see if Thulasi has gone. He notices Thulasi struggling to stand up straight and is holding the railing and her throat.
He hurries forward, "Ena achu, kuttima?" and holds her shoulders with full concern😳. Thulasi looks into his eyes. Both of them look at each other😳. "Sorry..Thulasi. Ula porana po."and let's go off her. Thulasi is so shocked at how he said sorry for calling her 'kuttima' and tears up, "Ena ga.." The kids come and call him. He looks at her and turns to go. She is all the more shocked. She is getting nauseated at the same time and...and...and...she vomits on Tamil😛. (New shirt pocha?) Thulasi holds her mouth controlling herself and looks at him with fear and goes inside the house crying. GW sees this and comes to him, "Ena thimir avuluku. Un puthu dress a ipdi nasam pannitale. Avala.."😡Tamil looks at his dress, "Konjam vaiya muduriya👏. Po anga poi entha kudumbatha kedukalamnu paru😆. Ippotheiku ula vanthuratha😉." and he goes inside the house. GW is so shocked at how he is still supporting his wife😛 and turns to go and sparkles from a puspanum falls over her😛 and she jumps in fear🤣.

Scene shifts to the washbasin where Thulasi is trying to vomit.
She is feeling nauseated but no vomit is coming😭.
Tamil goes and holds her head from behind massaging her head😳.
Thulasi looks up at the mirror to see Tamil standing there😳.
She turns to him and sees that she has spoiled his shirt😛.
Tamil notices that she is seeing his shirt, "Itho oru nimisham. Lemon eduthutu varein."😳 and goes and changes his shirt.
 Thulasi looks at him still confused at how to start a conversation.
Tamil goes to the kitchen and gets a lemonade😳.
She drinks it looking at him😳. He doesn't look at her at all. When she almost finishes her drink Tamil asks, "Abortion panalaya? Illa panathu nala ipdi aiducha?😲"
Part 3!
Edited by Gisel - 11 years ago

Aawww Gisel thanks for yet another super FF of yours.