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OS - Goodnight!!!! (Page 18)

ridizzz IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 14 November 2012 at 8:22am | IP Logged

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smittap Senior Member

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Posted: 14 November 2012 at 9:18am | IP Logged
Beautiful OS. I am definitely interested in your works. Please dont stop even after IPKKND stops. Let atleast 1 good thing continue.
Thanks for the PMs.

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paru_rox IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 14 November 2012 at 9:59am | IP Logged
Very cute OS ... enjoyed reading it immensely 

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ranjanatripathi IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 14 November 2012 at 10:48am | IP Logged
Please continue with your writing...they are so fresh and bring back the romance so missing in the actual serial...

Originally posted by SamiyaIPKKND

Some of you requested another part of my  OS - Begin Again or if you haven't read it you can read it as a standalone OS

OS- Good Night


"Bye Sir... thanks for dropping me off although it was really not needed... I would have managed on my own" 

"shutup khushi... get out"

"I want overtime pay for today... no actually the whole week... you made me work way past my hours the whole week... but today was the limit..."

"get out khushi... now!!!"

"rakshash laad govorner" she mumured to herself as she got off the car.

Arnav watched from his car as she huffed and puffed while getting down from the car and made it to her front door not once even looking back at him.

It was a little after midnight.

She was right in demanding a pay for the whole week. 

She deserved it!!

Not that there were a lot of work in the office. Actually the work load were bare minimum now but still!! 

He had realized that he felt for Khushi a long time ago. At first he denied his feelings - she was a middle class girl for crying out loud!! He stayed away from her, behaved very rudely with her even scolded her for things she hadn't done!! One thing he realized he couldn't fire her.. staying far from her was a torture for him.. Then he realized her tears affected him big time. He was loosing control. So he did something he had to do he left for London for a month ... That was not a good idea!! He missed his coffee!! He missed how his Delhi Office Cabin smelt.. He missed the constant chatter that could be heard in his cabin if he left the door slightly open.. He missed a clumsy girl hurriedly bring him stuff he asked for! He missed her notes and sticky reminding him of meetings and stuff in general.. He missed her stammering and frightened look when being scolded... He even missed her desk  which looked like Devi Maiya's mandir...

When he came back he got the shock of his life... She was engaged to be married... He sighed in relief but something started eating him up... he couldn't bear it... She was engaged the whole of freaking eight months before she gave her resignation... her fiance didn't want her to work.. But as luck would have it her marriage broke... within a week he offered her her previous job back and she accepted..

that was a month back... ever since then he realized he needed to tell her before her parents fixed her wedding again... he needed to make his move... 

Alas!!! He couldn't!! He was tongue-tied!! Arnav Singh Raizada was bloody tongue-tied!!! He kept her more and more late in the office loving the feel of her around him but that was it.. he couldn't utter one word to her

Tonight he had made up his mind that he will tell her today no matter what!!! He stalled her till 12 at night while she wailed about how she is overworked and treated like a slave!! 

Again!! Everything went futile and now here he was sitting in his car alone staring at her front door... watching as she turned off her bedroom light

*sigh* bloody fool!!

He should have kissed her!! He should have bloody kissed her!! He should have grabbed her by her arms, pushed her against a wall and kissed her senseless, breathless 

He should have kissed her so leaving no doubts about his feelings for her

No!! Tonight is the night of decision.. he'd either have her or loose her today


He didn't see her closing the door, running towards her bedroom and then turning off the light

She rushed to the window and watched him from there

Wondering what went wrong
Praying that you wouldn't go

She wondered "what the hell was wrong with him?" 

She sensed the vibe today... like he wanted to tell her something

she waited the whole day... even stalled her work and was happy when he told her they'd have to work late

but no!! Stupid laad governor!!

Please devi maiya don't let him leave!!!

When Khushi had joined AR she had a huge crush on him... they had a good boss/PA relationship... suddenly everything changed... he started behaving rudely with her, pushed her away... she knew she didn't even have the aukad to think about him... so after two years of pining for him when her family fixed her marriage she accepted it...

Now that she was free again she felt a change in him... 

Life is short!! Why not give in to temptation once!!


He turned of the ignition and got down from the car..

His steps determined and rapid

He arrived at her front door

About to knock when she opened the door

And met him at the front door

He stared at her while she stared back


He kissed her!!!

He grabbed her by her arms... pushed her back against the wall and kissed her!!

He put all his words in his kiss!! like there was no tomorrow

She snaked her arms around his shoulders and kissed him back with such passion that was possible for a girl being kissed for the first time!!

Breathing heavily they broke apart and Arnav said in his husky voice with a smirk

"I forgot to say goodnight"


"I'll see you tomorrow in the office... be on time or will cut your salary"

pecking her lips for the last time he left from there but not before he turned back and winked at her.

Life was breathable again!!


Inspired by the song "kiss me goodnight" by Gloriana... amazing song... do listen

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tv_watcher Goldie

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Posted: 14 November 2012 at 11:30am | IP Logged
tooo gud yar...loved itThumbs Up

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ara_000 IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 14 November 2012 at 12:35pm | IP Logged
awwwsummm...luv luv luv luv it...hayeee its way tooo good..!
Beautifully written :)

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thechaigirl IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 14 November 2012 at 2:35pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by SamiyaIPKKND

Originally posted by memyselfandrshi

Hey buddy as usual it was awesome...checked my inbox this morning. Its like a Diwali Gift for me buddy...

Thank you

To answer your question you already know I would love to read anything you write buddy. Atleast this way people like you who really care for the show are keeping the good old days alive...for me it wil always be Barun=Arnav so write away this fan of yours is not going awayLOLitne asani se peehcha nahi chodungi

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Diii</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">you don't know how much your comments make me happyHug</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">I love you dammit</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">*happy wala rabba ve*</font>

Wahi Toh I read that part and was like y is this girl asking...ofcourse we will read, we love ur writing and we luv u dammit...

Waise just so tat u know ...m still living in hopes of getting a 3 rd OS for tornado :p yea m greedy

Edited by memyselfandrshi - 14 November 2012 at 2:35pm

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-DobByDoDgeR- IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 14 November 2012 at 2:59pm | IP Logged
That was beautiful...
Write more like this please...

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