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Ankahii(AR) upd ch1 10/12 pg2 (Page 2)

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Posted: 13 November 2012 at 11:19pm | IP Logged
interesting..

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Posted: 14 November 2012 at 2:41am | IP Logged
OMG the intro was amazing, so intense. I have some guesses going around in my head. I will tell you after reading some parts and tell you if any of my guesses were correct ;)
Update soon dear and Happy Diwali

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Posted: 14 November 2012 at 9:04am | IP Logged
nice concept and thanks for the pm :D

Nikki <3

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Posted: 14 November 2012 at 5:09pm | IP Logged
Wow awesome concept...waiting eagerly for ur update...Smile

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Posted: 15 November 2012 at 9:09am | IP Logged
Wowww Amazing concept yaar:-):-):-) very nice:-) Please pm me when u update ok:-):-) 

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Posted: 09 December 2012 at 10:48pm | IP Logged
Chapter 1
~Epistles~


Fight' fight' he chanted in his mind. He tried to remind himself to resist but everything was going black. He struggled to the darkness. No' he struggled hard. He was not going to give up. He was fighter, always a fighter. No. he will not lose. Not this soon. But then what's the logic in restraining the smoothest respite. Respite, which was far more welcoming than this siring pain, such relief would be far better than this drudgery.

This voiceless struggle was killing him even more. He opened his eyes and slowly turned to the window from which he felt warm stroke of wind. His vision was blurry but his eyes stuck at the lone leaf on the naked pale brown tree. Fall' the leaf was about to fall he could see that, it was struggling the way he was, holding to the tree with its last hope.

He parted his lips, he was feeling thirsty. He needed something' something to ease away the burn in his throat, which was getting worst with each ounce of breath he was taking. Was it already not enough painful for him? Then why this sudden dry burn. Water' water he remembered. He needed water to calm down the fire.

But there was no water. Simply nowhere. Where was he? He wondered. In purgatory for sure, his less conscious brain whispered softly. Of course that was the reason he was feeling as if someone has set him on fire. Distract' the word rang in his head. Yes! Distraction was best to avoid this burn. So, he again forced himself to focus on the scene outside.

The leaf tried to maintain his place while the wind augmented its attacks. No support' no one to help' how long the lone would fight. He blinked his eyes as the darkness threatened to overcome the remains of his senses. No. he chanted again in his heart it was too soon. Too soon. He tired to remember something, something which was excessively important to him. But what? He strived to recall.

He felt the first touch of panic. He was losing. He was losing to the darkness. Darkness' more cold but more inviting too, an easy choice to make. The coldness was lulling him to a peaceful sleep.  But no. no. he must restrain. He must fight. He opened his eyes wide to clear his vision as he heard the shallow echo. Someone was calling. But whom? Maybe him. But then it was so unclear. His mind was not focused enough to understand.

His lips parted to breath out and took the quick breath in. he wished he could avoid this process. It was hurting him more somewhere. Where? Everywhere, he remembered. His vision cleared for a sharp moment. He heard the voice more clear now "kya hua'. Doctor'. Doctor why isn't he replying' kya hua?" someone was shouting. It hurt his ears.

But something else caught attention of his momentary sharp senses' the voice' he knew the voice. He knew the smoothly melodic voice which was touched with panic for some reason. He wanted to speak all of sudden, to calm that voice, to tell the voice that everything is fine. But nothing came out. He tried to think straight but forget what his last thought was and then everything went silent suddenly.

He sucked in sharply as the wind slapped the leaf hard this time. His eyes zeroed as the leaf gave up its struggle and fell limply on the burning earth just like all the other leaves. Destiny' it was destiny of the leaf to fall' to leave everything it loves behind and take off towards the new world' to end a journey and start new one. Just like taking off old cloths and wearing new once.
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He looked sharply at his opponent. Every move very calculated. He moved waiting for his opponent to attack. In the flash of second he registered the blow coming his way and moved with the speed of lightening, twisting the wrist of his opponent he pinned him to ground. He looked up towards the others surrounding him still pinning the person to ground.

A moment of silent passed and he got up pulling the person along with him "so keep in mind you must pay attention towards every move of your opponent and be extra alert during fight. Got it?" he asked his students to which everyone nodded.

"Okay, class dismissed. We'll continue tomorrow"

"Ronny sir" someone called from behind.

[Ronnit Dev, known for his rough and tough attitude+ his street fight academy. His academy was the only passion he possesses. When he started the academy everyone laughed at him but he knew what he was doing. Without anyone's help he started it in one room. It was tough but he didn't failed, after all he was well known fighter of DeathZone if not most. Today, he was at the point where he has created so many well known and successful fighters yet somewhere, something was missing.]

"Yes" he called the person in nodding his head.

"Sir aapke liye letter aaya hai" the person handled him a white envelop.

"Letter?"
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"Sorry sir" the employ whispered looking at his angry employer.

"Do hell with your sorry Mr. Bhatnager."

[Josh Sen, his middle name was perfection. He strongly believes in punctuality and discipline. In the short career of five years he has taken his family business to new heights and won 'Youngest Achievers award' 3 years back to back. His life was just as he wanted, absolutely perfect, but yet something was amiss.]

 I told you to finish it soon, toh ab tak yeh hua kyo nahi'" he stopped in middle hearing the knock on door.

"Come in" he replied sternly and saw his secretary walking towards him timidly "sir aapke liye letter aaya hai"

"letter?"
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"Shruti? OMG I don't believe it look at you. Tum ab tak ready nahi hue. Show is about to start. Hurry up. Fast."

Her phone beeped and she put it to her ear "yeah okay" she ended the call and turned to others in the room "okay guys time to go. Neetu" she called and her assistant brought a pair of glasses and shampion bottle. Raising the toast, they finished it in one go as they heard their group being announced.

"Go go go guys do your best" she closed her eyes and prayed to god.

[Ashwariya Rantej, a beauty with brains. Being diva of college she was never one of those shallow girls who could do no better than flaunting their dresses and looking for a new arm candy every day. Being Dramatics Head of her college and the only daughter of well know Film Producer Mr. Shuakat Rantej  she would have easily made her way in Bollywood but she decided to make her own way, her own journey. She was always very ambitious and passionate towards her work. Her imaginative mind and creative approached led her towards success. She was content with the appreciation and reorganization she earned through her directorial skills and her drama group yet she was missing something badly.]

Her assistant came to her and handled her a white envelop "mam yeh aapke liye aaya hai"

Her brows pulled together "letter?"
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Kalpana was busy making kababs in kitchen for her mother-in-law forgetting all the scolding she received from her good for nothing MIL. When suddenly she felt someone's presence and turned 90 degree.

"maa aap" she saw her MIL and sighed in relief, while the MIL took a slow step towards her. Kalpana come alert. Her MIL's expression's where murderous as if she was planning to fry kalpana in the hot oil.

*thish*

"aaa" the person shouted pulling his hands over his head in protective gesture. After a moment everything went silent and he looked up from his notebook  "arrgh.." he walked up to his window.

"arre kaminno, ullu ke pattho ab aana yeh ball lene tumhare is weekly show ka climax na likh diya toh. Sale mere hi khidki ka kanch tod dete hai kamine kahiin ke" shouted a person holding a ball in his hand. Turning back he moved carefully "arre ramlal yeh saaf kar yahaan se kanch pair me lag jayega"

The servant came and cleaned the mess while the person made himself comfortable on sofa, adjusting the laptop in his lap. He forgot what scene he was writing. 'So, the mother 'in-law was about to fry her bahu' he read what he wrote just few seconds ago.

[Kalpesh Kalra, the Drama Company himself. Kalpesh was a famous TV serial writer. Drama was always part of his life. Everything in his life was dramatic even he come to this world dramatically i.e in rainy, windy night, his parents got stuck in the middle of a storm and he was delivered in the very car his father was using to get his mother to hospital. His best buddy was also very colorful person so was he well the only difference was kalpesh was literally colorful. Kalpesh was living very quiet and peaceful life apart from the Sunday special Dhamaka episode of this 'window-shisha-breaking'. Yet, from inside he was very empty and lonely.]

He was about to write the next scene when his servant interrupted him "sahab yeh  letter aaya hai"

He took the white envelop from ramlal "Letter?"
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Hey folks,
Thank you so much for your support. Here is the first chapter of my new ff. hope you will like it. Don't forget to press like button and do leave your comments. It means a lot to me. Will try my best to update soon.
Love you
SonuSmile






Edited by -SmokySapphira- - 13 February 2013 at 8:09am

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Posted: 10 December 2012 at 4:13am | IP Logged
really nice n very suspicious!sabko eksaath letters mile? kuch to baat hai!hmmm...*FBI dimaag takes over* :P
aaah jst kill the suspense already n tell us whts gonna be in the letter!plz! :D
update real sson plz:) i love the way u write!:D its very unique and perfect! :D

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Posted: 11 December 2012 at 2:27am | IP Logged
nice starting

update soon

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