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Posted: 13 November 2012 at 11:46pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ankita2804

WOWww... Clap Clap Clap Star  StarStar 


OMG...Superbbb... 
the most interesting Start to everything,,,,
what a great CS yaar... Monkey Icons Cici


m to totally fidaaa...  Day Dreaming  Heart  Day Dreaming  Heart  Day Dreaming  Heart  Day Dreaming  
but I gues..when u will update next  I wont b able to read (going back to hostel) ...

bu plz.. PM pakka karna... bohot interesting lag raha hai... will try not to miss it anyhow Monkey Emoticon Cici 



woww...wat a sweet n cute comment...!!!
 
im gla du like it at such extent dat u r fida on it...tnk yew so so so much...!!!!
 
bt dtas sad...u not gonnab here...i mena u going to hostel...gonna miss u dear...bt surely gonna pm d update links ...n yea try not to miss it!!!!
 
tnk yew once agin fro sweet comment...n yea dose emoticons wer damn cute...i liked it!!!

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Posted: 13 November 2012 at 11:47pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by fatima15

awesome start :)
continue soon
tnk yew dear...gonna update soon!!

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Posted: 13 November 2012 at 11:47pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Moumimon



ohh...a big wow...
Great work you have done...
awsome Prologue & CS..lovely...
Waiting for the story...Update it soon...
tnk yew so much fro such a lovely comment...im glad u loved it...!!!
 
story will b updated soon...stay tuned dear!!!

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Posted: 13 November 2012 at 11:52pm | IP Logged
tum boht slow hai..jldi kr thank yew session..ni toh agla thread pahucha dnge!!! ROFL

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Posted: 13 November 2012 at 11:56pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by SanchayitaM

Neeli... I love u .. You are too good...*hugs*...

Originally posted by SanchayitaM

Neeli... Main ne na ek poem likhi hai tere liye... Maine sachi likhi hai god swear... Yes! I hav confirmed it pinchin myself... My 1st eva poem.. Neeli plzz no joota-chappal.. Tu ne hi kaha tha ekdin perfection not needed, only what matters is to try... So, here it goes:::
Ek bhondu si ladki hai, hai thodi is pagli...
Neelima naam hai usska, par sab usse bulate hai pyaar se Neeli.
Anjaana-Anjaana kahani hai usski hi creation...
Jo bass mann mein chhod de chaap, with its very first contribution.
Bass duya hai ki woh bitaye ek safe, sound and prosperous Diwali...
And likhte jaaye yunhi to make her concepts flourish proudly and happily...:D

Originally posted by SanchayitaM

Neeli now abt the story, brilliant story... Awesome, loved the poems... I wonder how did u create so many poems.. Omg! Mere liye toh its impossible...! U know I wll read it again... I loved it neeli... Update soon... N yeah! Happy n prosporous diwali to u n ur family...
Take care... I love u sis!!!

First o fol tnk yew...sor such a sweet comments one aftr d other!!! i love u 2 ...*huggies*

 
second thing, yea i remembered saying abt perfection npractice...n im proud dat watevr i said i wasnt wrong n u proved it...writing dis sweet little poem...especally dese lines...brought a huge smile on my face...
 
Ek bhondu si ladki hai, hai thodi is pagli...
Jo bass mann mein chhod de chaap, with its very first contribution.

n yea u too celebrate happy n safe diwali...tnk yew sor sweet wishes...n ur poetry...on 1st try is cute one...if u keep on writing...u will b definitely writing awesome poems someday!!!

n yea Nothing is impossible...because impossible itself says "im possible"...!!!

im glad u loved d poems...n d storyline...surely gonaa update soon...!!!
 
tnk yew for ur wishes...n stay tuned..!!!
 
n yea ur dat sweet little poem...took away my heart...tnk yew so much itni taareff ke liye...it was jst amazing dear!!!
 
luv u sanchi di alot...!!!

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Posted: 14 November 2012 at 12:04am | IP Logged
Originally posted by samiya.059

'Shuru ki jab hamne padhni kahani tumhari yaad aagayi hame film anjana anjani
Shayari se he samajh gaye ehmiyat iski
Dil hai bechain padhne ko agay ki kahani iski
Poetry mein he diya taruf kirdaro ka
Aur poetry mein he samjhaya pesh-e-lafz iska
Lagta hai aage b aap is tarah likhoge achi si shayari
kyunki ati hai hame aur apko samajh zubaan sirf shayari
Dil ki baat kehne ke liye liya zyada waqt
Magar yakeen hai maaf karne mein nahi lagao ge zyada waqt(sorry for commenting late)
Now now kahan se shuru karo chalo pehle happy diwali to u too.
Meine socha abi kuch nasar(prose) mein hoga lekin yahan toh ahle -sukhan ki zuban mein he pura qaseeda likha gaya tha.
I really really liked it neeli.the way u wrote prologue n introduction was amazing.wating for next chap.just wanted to tell u
'koi chand sitara hai
koi phool se pyara hai
koi khushi ka ishara hai
hame bas itna batana hai
woh naam tumhara hai'
omg...sami u jst took my heart away...seriously im having teary eyes...reading suchh an awesome n beautiful comment ever...!!!
 
i dont hav words to say u anything...fro such a beautiful shayri...saying jst a thnak you wldn't b enough!!! (bt dats ol i cld do...)
 
tnk yew so much dear...teri shayri ke ek -ek alfaz ki keemat aur ehmiyat hai ahem hai mere nazdeek...
 
ill surely try to include shayris in coming up chaps...bt i can never compete to u!!!
 
n special thanks fro ur last few lines...
 
'koi chand sitara hai
koi phool se pyara hai
koi khushi ka ishara hai
hame bas itna batana hai
woh naam tumhara hai'
 
u touched my heart...giving a huge smile & making my day...!!!
 
tnk yew fro such a sweet n musical comment!!!!
luv u dear!!!

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Posted: 14 November 2012 at 12:06am | IP Logged
Originally posted by tani23

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Originally posted by tani23

@neeli : wow Dear amazing 

i dint knew ki u also write poetries...

luved d poetic ishtyle 

Luking fwd to it 

thanks for d PM


tnk yew fro sweet comment...gonna upadte n pm soon...
n poems...haan bas abhi abhi shuru kiya hai...tnkx fro liking it!!!

Kitni modestyWink .. ...agar yeh teri poems ki start hain ...

then i m thinking ki Jab u will b gr8 poet "Neelima" tab kya hoga LOL

Then , u wud b writing MORE MORE MORE amazing Poetries ...

kitne amazing poets hain yahan par...Clap
modesty n Gr8 poet Neelima... lolxx...!!!ROFL
 
bt tnx for it...kya pata ho bhi jaaoon...Tongue
 
par mere pehle to shru aur sami banenge grt poets...!!!!Wink
 
haan yahaa pe bohot saarein amazing poets hai...tnk yew!!!

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Posted: 14 November 2012 at 12:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by priya00147

tum boht slow hai..jldi kr thank yew session..ni toh agla thread pahucha dnge!!! ROFL
bas ho hi gaya...aah rahioi hoon..chal!!!

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