Posted: 23 November 2012 at 11:26pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by priya00147Dekh neeli pehle se hi kya ready karke rakha tha mainepar tera dono updates padhne k baad woh aisa ho gya!!!
lolxx...dat guns uff still makes me laugh like hell...tnk god mere update sne gussa thanda kar diya...!!!
ab mahan poets k jaise tera nam bhi books niklega!!!usse pehle ye bhi le...tere liye rathore or ladki ka pehla milan
chotu ki chandni aa gya raat k party mei..aur chotu bhi chamakne lga
kavs ne sai kaha tha believe hi ni ho rha ki arjun itna flirty ho gya..!!!tum meri beauty queen ho
gulab sab serve karne wala bn gya!bhootni ka aatma ghus gya hai
shree aur chotu ko haste dekh shree ki coming bhabhi urf galaxy tab 2 ms chashmish ko gussa kyu aya..kan khade karke sab sun rai thi kya
Offce mei toh dono jyotish ban gya aur sahi bhi nikal gya..!!
aate hi mr and going to b mrs tab k bich jhagra!!
bechare ka ego hurt kar gya..
junior se sun liya toh..
rathore wali bhi aa gai etf women crime branch chief banke..
arjun toh fr shuru ho gya..riya k pas baithke
newspaper hai arjun puraaa!!!
case pe kaise shuru hote hai dekhte hai..!
thaaankuuu updatee jaaaldiii kaarnee k liyeee peeeliii
aur updates chahie
Nahii toh kya hoga ye tum samaj gaii hogi..samjhana toh pdega nai
btw uss tooti hue gun ke upar brown wala kya hai hai choc. cake or gobar???
yaar pri...tnk yew so much for such a small comment...!!!
i hope u make it more small next time...!!!
yea welcum fro such a fast n early update..!!!
similarly will update soon...n will surely pm evry1!!!
haan samajh gayi nahi kiya to kya hoga!!!
tnk yew once again!!!
Originally posted by -sree13-
sun neeli pehle toh main ne socha teri sir phod du..kyun ki tune pm time se nehi bheja aur main late ho gayi fir tujhe isliye chod rahi hoon kyun ki yeh dhasu update ne mujhe rok li...teri sir phod du toh yeh update nehi milenge na..!!!
awesome,brilliant,mindblowing poetic touch in 1st chap how you describe the party & the entry of Shru I was also partying in exitement yayyy shru agayi
shree & shru 1st encounter...!!! ETF office toh WWE ka akhara lag raha hai.. yeh ETF har koi aurat ki kabiliyat pe shaq kyun karta hai??? Pehle Arjun aur ab Shree..!!!! Shru yaar ab shree ki band bajaane ka mauka aa gaya
chinki bhi aa gayi..great going ab ayega majaa Rathod ki bhi nikal padhegi ab toh
Last but not the least for the song..this is one of my all time favs..I have came to this update for the song atleast 20 times
Iss baar chod diya..agli baar pm nehi kiya na time se toh teri khaair nehi tu dekh liyo abhi compensate kar jaldi update karke,samjhi ya samjhayun?? exactly...sir phoda toh no update...!!! tnk yew tareeka diya tum logo ko rokne ke liye!!!
tnx fro liking each n evry thing poem as weel as prose...!!!
yea shree ko pitne ka tym aayega...lekin bohot jald ye pathar maum na ban jaye...!!!
haan choptu or rathod dono ki nikal padi...
dis song is my fav too...!!! tnkx for liking it...!!!
wil update soon...!!!
tnx for such a small comment looking further fro such more!!!
Originally posted by prava55663
words seem too short to express my feeling...
loved the update..
CS..what will i say..superb..clap!!!
loved the chap 1 awesome entry of all...
chap2 shree was so cute..loved shru riya rathore and chinki...
loved all...loved your writing..plzz cont soon...
plzz pm me when you update...
Loved the song effect...i love the song..
tnk you so much n so much...for liking each n evry part from pro to chap 2...!!!!
will surely update soon n pm when done...!!!
tnx fro liking d song...!!!
tnk ye wso much fro ur sweet comment...it really means alot...
Originally posted by kaveriw2008
No i just can't imagine...
Mein to sapane mein bhi arjun ko flirt type imgine nahi kar sakati...ek baar rathore ko flirt samjh sakati hoon kunki i want rathore as flirt...*smile*...par arjun...na na...
Ha riya ko rude imagine kar sakati hoon...shree ko as sir bhi imagine kar sakati hoon par arjun...na na... tu sab imagine kar sakti hai ...i kno...tere ss ke guttery update sdekhe ...toh arjun ko to maine bas flirt dikhaya hai...!!!
nautanki...pata hai arjun ko no flirty se zyaada tu kya kehna chah rahii hai i kno...tujhe rathore flirty chahiye...!!! shaitan...!!!
teri umeed poori karne ki koshish karungi...ill try!!!
tnx for ur sweet funny comment...!!!
Originally posted by sashashyam
MY dear purecure,
One thing you do NOT have to do for Anjaana Anjaani is apologise for any aspect of it. I have never come across anything quite like this, and I find it extremely novel, and not just the narrative but the introductory verses and now the music playing as one reads. You are truly an original!
Dear shyamala aunty,
Thank you so much for your sweet comment. Your comment's each & every word work as an motivation for me which helps me in continuing the SS further. I hope I keep rocking as per everyones expectations.Thanks once again & yes, no apologies from now on.!!
Originally posted by vidya.anand
I dont know how i missed this...this is really really amazing...
the poems were fabulous...
I am a great fan of such rhyming lines... and this was such a treat!!!
WOW...mind blowing and out of the world...too gud yaar...
tnk god u catched it...if not then i wldnt hav got ur precious comment...!!!
im glad u liked it specially d poem n its rhyming sequence...!!!
tnk yew so much fro ur sweet comment...!!!
Originally posted by samiya.059 tnx fr liking d poem...!!!
Perfect is the word which came to my mind after reading chap 1.oh wat a fab poetry. Ab toh aapse islah leni padegi miss neeli.it was just awesome.
The way u wrote is just out of this world.coming to chap 2 shree -shru fight was so cute n chinki rathore part was just too nice.
Waiting for next chap eagerly
n mujhs ekya islah logi...maien aapse aur shru se islah leke hi to likhna shuru kiya...aur aap humse...ye to aapka badappan hai!!!
tnx for liking poem as well as prose...n d couples too...!!!
will update soon...!!!
tnk yew yaar fro awesome comment!!!
Originally posted by Queen.Bee
nice update!!! continue soon!!
so arjun loves riya already?? tnx fro liking it...wil upadte soon!!!
& Arjun loves riya...hmmm...no...not really...not yet!!!
Originally posted by alee001
OMG!!! the flirty arjun...
tnx fro liking specially flirty arjun!!!
tnx fro ur sweet lil comment!!
Edited by purecure - 23 November 2012 at 11:56pm