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FF:Anjaana Anjaani!! Chap5:pg.24 uptd 22/12/2012 (Page 16)

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Posted: 19 November 2012 at 11:52pm | IP Logged

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Posted: 20 November 2012 at 12:37am | IP Logged
nice update!!! continue soon!!

so arjun loves riya already??

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Posted: 20 November 2012 at 11:28pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by tani23

Neeli : awesum yaaran


loved d poetic touch in Chapter1
n chapter 2 was amazing as well


PS; pls use a bigger font...dis font size is very small...

tnx tani...i have edited n will keep in mind ur point in later updates too...!!!
tnx!!!

Originally posted by shrutisweety

fist chapter is awsome
and even secoed chapter is wounder fu
continue soon

im glad u liked both chap...surely gonna update soon..tnx!!

Originally posted by nivanthi2

WOW  WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!

tnx nivi!!!

Originally posted by fatima15

Nice update :)
continue soon

im glad u liked it..tnx!!!
will update soon!!!

Originally posted by lola123

Too good...love arjun!!
First chapter was beautifully written...wow women power zindabad...lots of ladies in d etf

yea women power zindabaad...lots of ladies...lolxx!!!
tnx for liking it specially arjun...im glad !!!
tnx fro sweet comment...!!!

Originally posted by SAIBALROUTH

Nicely written, Chapter 2 is really awesome. Eagerly awaiting next part. 

tnx for your sweet lil comment...glad u liked d chap...stay tuned...will surely update soon!!!

Originally posted by Princeess07

nice

tnk yew dear!!

 

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Posted: 21 November 2012 at 1:57am | IP Logged
amazinggg

OMG!!! the flirty arjun...

luved him!!!
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Posted: 23 November 2012 at 11:19pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by sweetdoc

Intresting nd diff ff...
Isme rathore ka character ekdum alag...aur arjun. ekdum flirty..wow
Update soon

tnx fro ur amazing comemnt...yea both r damn different ...tnx fro liking dem in dis new avtar too..!!!
will update soon!!!

Originally posted by Radhika Shah

Great start.
Thanks for the pm

tnx once agin...!!!

Originally posted by rockz.diva

heyyy superb yaar i lovd itt arjun <3 <3 <3 awww lvd hiz charecter :P amazing :)
waitng for nxt part dear

tnx fro loving arjun even in his new avaatar...tnx for sweet comment...gonna update soon!!

Originally posted by meghasingh

res..
till then this is for you..


waiting fro ur precious comment...

n tnx fro such an awesome avi on best scene till day...dis is my fav. scene of d show..!!! tnk yew!!!

Originally posted by kunchu

great start.. continue soon...

tnx dear...will update soon!!

Originally posted by littlebrat

perfect balance of characters...


waiting for next part

tnx dear for ur awesome obso. will update soon..!!

Originally posted by shah10

Amazing

thank you dear!!


 

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Posted: 23 November 2012 at 11:26pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by priya00147

Dekh neeli pehle se hi kya ready karke rakha tha mainepar tera dono updates padhne k baad woh aisa ho gya!!!
ab mahan poets k jaise tera nam bhi books niklega!!!usse pehle ye bhi le...tere liye rathore or ladki ka pehla milan
chotu ki chandni aa gya raat k party mei..aur chotu bhi chamakne lga
kavs ne sai kaha tha believe hi ni ho rha ki arjun itna flirty ho gya..!!!tum meri beauty queen ho
gulab sab serve karne wala bn gya!bhootni ka aatma ghus gya hai
shree aur chotu ko haste dekh shree ki coming bhabhi urf galaxy tab 2 ms chashmish ko gussa kyu aya..kan khade karke sab sun rai thi kya
Offce mei toh dono jyotish ban gya aur sahi bhi nikal gya..!!
aate hi mr and going to b mrs tab k bich jhagra!!
bechare ka ego hurt kar gya..
junior se sun liya toh..
rathore wali bhi aa gai etf women crime branch chief banke..
arjun toh fr shuru ho gya..riya k pas baithke
newspaper hai arjun puraaa!!!
case pe kaise shuru hote hai dekhte hai..!
thaaankuuu updatee jaaaldiii kaarnee k liyeee peeeliii
aur updates chahie
Nahii toh kya hoga ye tum samaj gaii hogi..samjhana toh pdega nai
Good job
lolxx...dat guns uff still makes me laugh like hell...tnk god mere update sne gussa thanda kar diya...!!!
btw uss tooti hue gun ke upar brown wala kya hai hai choc. cake or gobar???
 
beauty queen...lolxx!!!!LOL
 
yaar pri...tnk yew so much for such a small comment...!!!Tongue
i hope u make it more small next time...!!!Wink
 
yea welcum fro such a fast n early update..!!!Wink
 
similarly will update soon...n will surely pm evry1!!!
 
haan samajh gayi nahi kiya to kya hoga!!!
 
tnk yew once again!!!
 
Originally posted by -sree13-

sun neeli pehle toh main ne socha teri sir phod du..kyun ki tune pm time se nehi bheja aur main late ho gayi  fir tujhe isliye chod rahi hoon kyun ki yeh dhasu update ne mujhe rok li...teri sir phod du toh yeh update nehi milenge na..!!!  
awesome,brilliant,mindblowing poetic touch in 1st chap   how you describe the party & the entry of Shru I was also partying in exitement  yayyy shru agayi 
shree & shru 1st encounter...!!!  ETF office toh WWE ka akhara lag raha hai..  yeh ETF har koi aurat ki kabiliyat pe shaq kyun karta hai??? Pehle Arjun aur ab Shree..!!!!  Shru yaar ab shree ki band bajaane ka mauka aa gaya 
chinki bhi aa gayi..great going ab ayega majaa  Rathod ki bhi nikal padhegi ab toh 
Last but not the least   for the song..this is one of my all time favs..I have came to this update for the song atleast 20 times  
Iss baar chod diya..agli baar pm nehi kiya na time se toh teri khaair nehi tu dekh liyo  abhi compensate kar jaldi update karke,samjhi ya samjhayun??

exactly...sir phoda toh no update...!!! tnk yew tareeka diya tum logo ko rokne ke liye!!!
tnx fro liking each n evry thing poem as weel as prose...!!!
yea shree ko pitne ka tym aayega...lekin bohot jald ye pathar maum na ban jaye...!!!
haan choptu or rathod dono ki nikal padi...
dis song is my fav too...!!! tnkx for liking it...!!!
wil update soon...!!!
tnx for such a small comment looking further fro such more!!!
Originally posted by prava55663

words seem too short to express my feeling...
loved the update..
prologue...brilliant..

CS..what will i say..superb..clap!!!

loved the chap 1 awesome entry of all...
chap2 shree was so cute..loved shru riya rathore and chinki...

loved all...loved your writing..plzz cont soon...

plzz pm me when you update...

Loved the song effect...i love the song..
 huggiees
 

tnk you so much n so much...for liking each n evry part from pro to chap 2...!!!!
will surely update soon n pm when done...!!!
tnx fro liking d song...!!!
tnk ye wso much fro ur sweet comment...it really means alot...
Originally posted by kaveriw2008

No i just can't imagine...

Mein to sapane mein bhi arjun ko flirt type imgine nahi kar sakati...ek baar rathore ko flirt samjh sakati hoon kunki i want rathore as flirt...*smile*...par arjun...na na...
Ha riya ko rude imagine kar sakati hoon...shree ko as sir bhi imagine kar sakati hoon par arjun...na na...

tu sab imagine kar sakti hai ...i kno...tere ss ke guttery update sdekhe ...toh arjun ko to maine bas flirt dikhaya hai...!!!
nautanki...pata hai arjun ko no flirty se zyaada tu kya kehna chah rahii hai i kno...tujhe rathore flirty chahiye...!!! shaitan...!!!
teri umeed poori karne ki koshish karungi...ill try!!!
tnx for ur sweet funny comment...!!!
Originally posted by sashashyam

MY dear purecure,
One thing you do NOT have to do for Anjaana Anjaani  is apologise for any aspect of it. I have never come across anything quite like this, and I find it extremely novel, and not just the narrative but the introductory verses and now the music playing as one reads. You are truly an original!
Shyamala B.Cowsik
[QUOTE=purecure]

Dear shyamala aunty,
 
Thank you so much for your sweet comment. Your comment's each & every word work as an motivation for me which helps me in continuing the SS further. I hope I keep rocking as per everyones expectations.Thanks once again & yes, no apologies from now on.!!
 
Purecure
Originally posted by vidya.anand

I dont know how i missed this...this is really really amazing...
the poems were fabulous...
I am a great fan of such rhyming lines... and this was such a treat!!!
WOW...mind blowing and out of the world...too gud yaar...


tnk god u catched it...if not then i wldnt hav got ur precious comment...!!!Wink
im glad u liked it specially d poem n its rhyming sequence...!!!
tnk yew so much fro ur sweet comment...!!!
Originally posted by samiya.059

Perfect is the word which came to my mind after reading chap 1.oh wat a fab poetry. Ab toh aapse islah leni padegi miss neeli.it was just awesome.
The way u wrote is just out of this world.coming to chap 2 shree -shru fight was so cute n chinki rathore part was just too nice.
Waiting for next chap eagerly

tnx fr liking d poem...!!!
n mujhs ekya islah logi...maien aapse aur shru se islah leke hi to likhna shuru kiya...aur aap humse...ye to aapka badappan hai!!!
tnx for liking poem as well as prose...n d couples too...!!!
will update soon...!!!
tnk yew yaar fro awesome comment!!!
Originally posted by Queen.Bee

nice update!!! continue soon!!
so arjun loves riya already??

tnx fro liking it...wil upadte soon!!!
 
& Arjun loves riya...hmmm...no...not really...not yet!!!
Originally posted by alee001

amazinggg

OMG!!! the flirty arjun...

luved him!!!

tnx fro liking specially flirty arjun!!!
tnx fro ur sweet lil comment!!


Edited by purecure - 23 November 2012 at 11:56pm

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Posted: 01 December 2012 at 2:01am | IP Logged
Unresed on page 12... A post fter chap 2... Plzz..chk.. Sorry for being late... I know its height of being late... Sorry!

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Posted: 02 December 2012 at 2:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by SanchayitaM

Here is the flirty Arjun::

n the panic-stricken Rhea...

superb update...!!
I am so sorry for being late in un-resing my comment... Sorry sorry sorry... Holding ma ears...!!
Flirty Arjun... Omg!! I wished to witnessed one... Meoowww...!! Wink
n kharuss Rhea...!! Wow! Gr8 yaar... Nice thinking!!
N Shree n Shru's fight...!! That sir n madam wz juz awesome...
N teri bhabi ya behen...??ROFL was mind blowing...!!
I loved to read this one... Because it has some sort of your touch everywhere... There's something faboulas in your touch!! Love that neeli neeli thing... Prevailing everywhere..!!
Poem wz too good...!!
Now plzz plzz update the 3rd chap asap.. Cant wait!!
Take care n update sooon.. Meooww (4 the pm)!!
Love you sistah!!!!Hug
 
frist of ol...di spictures really indicated what i meant to say...n got dfat u really got d really expressions of it...!!
 
it's ok dear...no probz u late...bcoz ur comment brought a grt smile on my face...!!!
 
d best thing...is dat u really got or understod d neeli's touch...!!! sanchi sis yunhi thodi bualti hoon...!!!
 
tnx fro liking each n evry part of it...n my touch in it...!!!
 
will update soon...!!!
 
ur every comment...whetehr u comment early or late...will never loose it's value...n is great motivator for me...!!!
 
love u sistah!!!

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