FF:Anjaana Anjaani!! Chap5:pg.24 uptd 22/12/2012 - Page 7

Originally posted by: fatima15

awesome start :)

continue soon

tnk yew dear...gonna update soon!!

Originally posted by: Moumimon

ohh...a big wow...
Great work you have done...
awsome Prologue & CS..lovely...
Waiting for the story...Update it soon...

tnk yew so much fro such a lovely comment...im glad u loved it...!!!

tum boht slow hai..jldi kr thank yew session..ni toh agla thread pahucha dnge!!! 🤣

Originally posted by: SanchayitaM

Neeli... I love u .. You are too good...*hugs*...

Originally posted by: SanchayitaM

Neeli... Main ne na ek poem likhi hai tere liye... Maine sachi likhi hai god swear... Yes! I hav confirmed it pinchin myself... My 1st eva poem.. Neeli plzz no joota-chappal.. Tu ne hi kaha tha ekdin perfection not needed, only what matters is to try... So, here it goes:::
Ek bhondu si ladki hai, hai thodi is pagli...
Neelima naam hai usska, par sab usse bulate hai pyaar se Neeli.
Anjaana-Anjaana kahani hai usski hi creation...
Jo bass mann mein chhod de chaap, with its very first contribution.
Bass duya hai ki woh bitaye ek safe, sound and prosperous Diwali...
And likhte jaaye yunhi to make her concepts flourish proudly and happily...:D

Originally posted by: SanchayitaM

Neeli now abt the story, brilliant story... Awesome, loved the poems... I wonder how did u create so many poems.. Omg! Mere liye toh its impossible...! U know I wll read it again... I loved it neeli... Update soon... N yeah! Happy n prosporous diwali to u n ur family...
Take care... I love u sis!!!

First o fol tnk yew...sor such a sweet comments one aftr d other!!! i love u 2 ...*huggies*

n yea u too celebrate happy n safe diwali...tnk yew sor sweet wishes...n ur poetry...on 1st try is cute one...if u keep on writing...u will b definitely writing awesome poems someday!!!

n yea Nothing is impossible...because impossible itself says "im possible"...!!!

Originally posted by: samiya.059

'Shuru ki jab hamne padhni kahani tumhari yaad aagayi hame film anjana anjani
Shayari se he samajh gaye ehmiyat iski
Dil hai bechain padhne ko agay ki kahani iski
Poetry mein he diya taruf kirdaro ka
Aur poetry mein he samjhaya pesh-e-lafz iska
Lagta hai aage b aap is tarah likhoge achi si shayari
kyunki ati hai hame aur apko samajh zubaan sirf shayari
Dil ki baat kehne ke liye liya zyada waqt
Magar yakeen hai maaf karne mein nahi lagao ge zyada waqt(sorry for commenting late)
Now now kahan se shuru karo chalo pehle happy diwali to u too.
Meine socha abi kuch nasar(prose) mein hoga lekin yahan toh ahle -sukhan ki zuban mein he pura qaseeda likha gaya tha.
I really really liked it neeli.the way u wrote prologue n introduction was amazing.wating for next chap.just wanted to tell u
'koi chand sitara hai
koi phool se pyara hai
koi khushi ka ishara hai
hame bas itna batana hai
woh naam tumhara hai'

omg...sami u jst took my heart away...seriously im having teary eyes...reading suchh an awesome n beautiful comment ever...!!!

Originally posted by: tani23

Kitni modesty😉 .. ...agar yeh teri poems ki start hain ...

then i m thinking ki Jab u will b gr8 poet "Neelima" tab kya hoga 😆

Then , u wud b writing MORE MORE MORE amazing Poetries ...

kitne amazing poets hain yahan par...👏

modesty n Gr8 poet Neelima... lolxx...!!!🤣

Originally posted by: priya00147

tum boht slow hai..jldi kr thank yew session..ni toh agla thread pahucha dnge!!! 🤣

bas ho hi gaya...aah rahioi hoon..chal!!!

Neeli mujhe di matt bol.. Look u study in 2nd yr... I suppose! N me in 1st yr... N i shameless girl always adress u tu-tu.. N u sayin me di... Its the worst thig eva.. Plzz.. Plz.. Matt bolna.. Naitoh i'll say neelima ji n aap... Will u like that?

Originally posted by: SanchayitaM

Neeli mujhe di matt bol.. Look u study in 2nd yr... I suppose! N me in 1st yr... N i shameless girl always adress u tu-tu.. N u sayin me di... Its the worst thig eva.. Plzz.. Plz.. Matt bolna.. Naitoh i'll say neelima ji n aap... Will u like that?

nahii ...jo bulana hai bula...di bhi theekh hai...lekin ji n aap...no never i hate dat...!! ok 5n nahii bulaoongi...n u olso no need to call di...1 saal ke farak se kuch nahii hota...!!! Edited by purecure - 11 years ago

Originally posted by: purecure

nahii ...jo bulana hai bula...di bhi theekh hai...lekin ji n aap...no never i hate dat...!! ok 5n nahii bulaoongi...n u olso no need to call di...1 saal ke farak se kuch nahii hota...!!!

thanks.. M relieved..!!!