I was waiting for 1 more res! ๐ stupid me๐
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1st things 1st...
Mashallaah honestly there's nthng to be changed loved each and single word of it...
sach bolu mai khud poems likhti hu bt I dnt like reading anyone elses poem unless title is interesting bt recently tera aur Sammy ka padhti hu selected logo ka hi padti hu hayeee m ur pankhi yaar sach mai<3
Actually mai khud ki poem read karna pasand nhi karti๐คฃ I havent read anyone else with poetry on IF yet!!!
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I had told you the above thing just few minutes back via PM... anyways...
Omg I absolutely love the PROLOGUE wowww.. tune toh mujhe bhi piche chod diya neelu๐ (Referring to POEM)nothing else๐
Love love love it... I wonder already kon do khush naseeb h voh jinhe unka pyaar mila...โค๏ธ๐ณ
Ohh before I move on... I'm your biggest pankhi yaar๐ค๐คฃ
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YOU blew me up!!!! Seriously you did... with the CS...<3 ek ek ko kya describe kiya hai...
and sachi bolu I didnt like 'SHRU' ka CS...๐ but I seriously, honestly and dil se sachi... I LOVE IT...you have definitely described me somehow๐ I don't know how you did it but yayyy... but yar I wish mai Forensic karti but..but but... I have no regrets coz I'm IT SPECIALIST... woahhhooo IF ke emotions kitne kaam pad jayege mere emotions bayan karne k liye sachi... I loved Rathore and Arjun's CS...๐ hayeee and also Chinki's๐๐
but haan Wigyaan ko muthi mai rkha matlab? I didnt get it...๐คฃ I'm nt that brainy tho๐
"Par aaya ek din aisa
Jisse isne bhi seekha
Ki zindagi bhi kabhi hoti hai
Garam pawan ke jaisa
phir bhi ye rehta tha bilkul free"
^^ I wonder who๐๐ณ๐
"Ladko se thi isko ek chidh
Bataana chahti thi duniya ko
Ladkiya bhi kar sakti hai wo
Jo ladke karte hai ab tak ko
Jaane Kyun tha iska yeh swabhav"
This is absolutely me darling.. definitely...ek ek word is me!!! I'm serious๐
Khuda kare tera ye Anjaana
Mile ek din us Anjaani se...
Jo dikha de unhe
Apni asli pehchaan..
Aur hum dua karte hai
Tum pohche us mukaam par.
Jaha tumhe koi chu bhi na sake...๐๐ณ
Over all I'm in love with this. Muaaahh and a big Huggieee๐ค
phew I'm done with the comment..๐ sorry thoda bada hai..๐
I wish I could clap for you all day.. voh bhi kam hota to actually appreciate your work babes!!! You Nailed it!!๐๐
Edited by funkylicious - 11 years ago
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