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Lost in Your Eyes(Arshi SS)parts 1 to 28 (Page 66)

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Posted: 25 November 2012 at 5:13pm | IP Logged
OMG so intense!

The emotions, the conversation...Cry I'm actually crying!! The vivid image of a sobbing Arnav at the wheel and the homeless family huddled away trying to survive the rain and his reckless driving!

I can feel Arnav's frustration and on the other hand I can sympathise with Khushi's guilt. There is no right or wrong...just a matter of who will be hurt...

Cannot wait for the next part. Khushi is wrong in thinking that marrying Sheetal will make everything better - who wants to be married to someone who doesn't want you? That is far more hurtful in the long run than wounded pride...

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Posted: 25 November 2012 at 5:16pm | IP Logged
brilliant update as usual
loved it
poor arnav and khushi
continue soon
thanx for the pm
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Posted: 25 November 2012 at 5:18pm | IP Logged
Khushi is being stupid, she wants Arnav to marry Sheetal.

This will cause three people to be unhappy

Arnav and Khushi loves one another,

 why can't she see that he loves her more than anything.

I hope he doesn't marry Sheetal  because he will just be messing up his life.
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Posted: 25 November 2012 at 5:24pm | IP Logged
Omg I feel so bad 4 arnav
Awsam update

Edited by rokaya - 25 November 2012 at 5:24pm
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Posted: 25 November 2012 at 5:32pm | IP Logged
so emotional.
i hope arnav will cancel the wedding
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Posted: 25 November 2012 at 6:36pm | IP Logged
beautifully written
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Posted: 25 November 2012 at 6:45pm | IP Logged
OH MY GOD..

yeah story kaha ja rahe hai pata nahi mujhe.. but i am so loving it..

every single bit im imagining sarun.. vividly..

awesome..

waiting 4 next super update..

let me scream again.. I LOVE U for writing this.. will love u more..
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Posted: 25 November 2012 at 7:03pm | IP Logged
Wow! This is pretty interesting and I love the dynamics of all the characters and the layers and confusion. Very well done. Continue soon.

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