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~Beautiful Eyes~ My new poem~ (Page 2)

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Posted: 15 November 2012 at 2:24pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by shesherkobita

Staring into your eyes should be a crime,

No plea bargain...guilty as charged... hhheh

Like looking through open doors,
revealing secrets, like opening kitchen drawers.


I just loved this metaphor... I am not very romantic..I love this odd but wonderful nugget in your poem!

I loved your poem as usual... Sorry to hear your writing will be sparse. I will miss it. good luck with your studies. 


Thanks soo much! Embarrassed Glad you loved these particular lines! Big smile Oh whyy may I ask? Smile I am a total romantic! Obsessed romantic! Blushing Thanks for reading it, sorry for not being able to update you with other ones! I will try my best but studies come first cant sacrifice them as much as I love IF! Ouch Heart Confused 

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Posted: 15 November 2012 at 2:24pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by maneesha28889

wow awesome!!!!!!!
Beautiful lines!!!!!!!Big smile
Thanks soo much! Happy you liked my poem! Big smile
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Posted: 15 November 2012 at 2:26pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by f.s.m

Awww this is damn Aweosme ... Beautiful lines ... Very well written .. Always loving your Poems .. Mashallah ... 
What !?! We gonna miss your poems Cry ... 
Thank you bro! Big smile Glad you loved it! Embarrassed Sorry fawaaz bro actually exams are nearing I cant compromise them now! Cry I have to let the poems go for a bit! But I will try and write some more soon! I promise! Big smile
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Posted: 15 November 2012 at 7:25pm | IP Logged
im a fan of ur work
u r superb!!!!

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Posted: 17 March 2013 at 8:39am | IP Logged
Now this was amazing. Every word can be attached with his eyes. So true

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Posted: 17 March 2013 at 9:24am | IP Logged
Originally posted by EkSapnoKiPari

im a fan of ur work
u r superb!!!!
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Posted: 17 March 2013 at 9:26am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ShivTRSS

Now this was amazing. Every word can be attached with his eyes. So true
Thanks Aashna for your lovely comment, hehe yeah his eyes are mesmerising so I wanted to write on his eyes! Wink Embarrassed

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