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Fate-Mate Thread 6 Chapter 34 (Page 147)

esmeralda111 Senior Member
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Posted: 03 December 2012 at 9:12pm | IP Logged
came across ur ff and finished it...and enjoyed the concept and the story...Smile I noticed one thing ...as hum apke hain kaun was the ever biggest film without having intimate scenes...same is the case with ur FF...and its quite a broad hint for those writers on this forum, who went into sexual details in every update...and it feels more pathetic, when u see that they can't even write a simple English sentence without serious grammar errors...Ouch and U just curse urself for even giving them a try...cz its not the sexual details but the concept, the build up, the depth, the meaningful dialogues, the choice of words: these r the things , which r so important...(and I admit there are writers, who use such details but v skilfully, subtly only to enhance the build up and they possess such mastery over choice of words that u never feel disgusted...a passing remark Wink)

keep it up sw8 hrt Clap


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Posted: 05 December 2012 at 12:32pm | IP Logged
You just can't imagine the effect of your writing on me.. you are such a delightful writer.. Explaining every little thing in detail.. making us feel what you feel.. with out getting carried away... n with out letting us carried away binding us to your writings... you are awesome... 
Do you even know I didn't sleep straight 30 hrs to read all of it.. I just can't leave every single detail you explained in a very sensual way.. 

very eagerly waiting for your next update.. I know our IPKKND? didn't end well.. though our Arnav and Khushi had a happy ending.. I just dosen't seem like an ending at all.. I can feel so much void inside me... But fine I at-least want to see our Gloomy and Tsunami getting along well n one day have an ending.. 

Thank you for writing and making me happy.. Thank you very much

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Posted: 05 December 2012 at 12:41pm | IP Logged
can't wait fr ur update dearEmbarrassed


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Posted: 06 December 2012 at 7:50am | IP Logged
This was beautiful sweetheart,


Thank u so much for the pm.

Looking forward for the next update.


Thank u 

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Posted: 07 December 2012 at 2:50am | IP Logged
dis story is very nyc

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Posted: 07 December 2012 at 3:29am | IP Logged
Hi kc it is awsome update after so much wait bt worth waiting.so cute and pure love. pls do pm me thnx

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Posted: 08 December 2012 at 10:52am | IP Logged
Where is thread 7, KC di?

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Posted: 08 December 2012 at 1:13pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by maverickmartin

Where is thread 7, KC di?

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3306379

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