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Fate-Mate Thread 6 Chapter 34 (Page 130)

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Posted: 18 November 2012 at 3:22am | IP Logged
Hey KC

i dont have anything to say about the update.it is PERFECT as always..
Whenever I see your PM , my heart jumps in joy..and when i start reading the updates, I really cant say what i feel...the happiness is beyond the word...its a fairy tale and beautiful like a fairy tale..i like its slow pace progress...so i can enjoy the journey...

Your Arnav and khushi makes me smile when i am sad..they make me believe in love, believe in people when I have lost hope...

your story makes me believe fairy tale is still true...and makes me dream...


but I have one question..we now have some idea about how Arnav feel for khushi..he may not realize it yet but close to it.But what about khushi?what she feel about Arnav? is it only frndship for her? I am really curious about that.  


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Posted: 18 November 2012 at 3:23am | IP Logged
Arnav is soo in love - no denying it!! I love this gentle progression in their relationship - can't believe it's only been a matter of weeks that they've known each other!

And Khushi - her tears, thanking him for being in her life! I had tears...everyone who feels alone in this world should have someone like this. Her life isn't easy and has not been easy, but Arnav has been like a guiding light I think. Their burgeoning friendship/relationship is just written so sweetly, so gently...I swear reading your work is like a major stressbuster!

ASR...what can I say? He's up there with the all-time greats as a character! And he's been brought to life on screen perfectly! However, for me and I'm sure the rest of the readers, he lives on in work like this - thank you so much for giving us this story! And if I ever need a visual I'll go watch an old Love Scene from when the show was good ;-) !


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Posted: 18 November 2012 at 3:34am | IP Logged
wow...that was a marvelous updateClap
the magic u create between them though they are not committed...its simply beautiful...the way she reminds him ur wish is my command..the way he makes sure every wish is fulfilled.its fantasticBig smileHeart.. i hope the last statement doesn t change equations between themConfusedi just want them realizing their loveSmileupdate the next one soon dearSmile


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Awesome, amazing, fantastic update Clap  Worth for the wait. Thanks a ton buddy for the Maha update Smile


Originally posted by karmachameleon

She didn't know why but the first time everything felt weird.

Confusing.

Why did he come there just to give her ice cream? Was that normal? She didn't know. Even though he had always done so many things for her, why was this one the hardest to digest?

He looked at her with those eyes of his. That wasn't a statement. That was a question. She was questioning his arrival. He looked at her with questions, with surprise, with shock. Why did she ask him that? Had he done something wrong?

Khushi: You NEVER throw ice cream!


                  Loved the way Tsunami came to fulfill the wish of Gloomy. Though Arnav hasn't realized that the feelings for her is LOVE, I liked the way he immediately rushed to fulfill  even the tiny wish of hers.  

"You NEVER throw ice cream!"  She's still a kid.


Originally posted by karmachameleon

And touched his fingers''.

And he felt that again''

The wave of currents'..

The sudden charge'..    

The unexpected rush'..

 

Just by a mere touch from those hands who were too busy snatching ice cream from his hands'.

With a blink of an eye, her touch was gone and his hands were free now''

Not only from the ice cream but also that sensation'..

His mind stopped working until he heard'..

Khushi: Mmm''

He just stood there staring at her, just enjoying the eating Gloomy.

He had seen so many different sides of her. The hungry Gloomy. The depressed Gloomy. The happy Gloomy. The singer Gloomy. The dreamy Gloomy. The student Gloomy. The strong Gloomy. The independent Gloomy. The foodie Gloomy. Even the high Gloomy.


                 Love the way he is admiring each & every action of her. Wow, how many names he has for her. Although I love all but 'the high Gloomy' is my favorite. Hey, KC which one of these names do u like the most?

                   Hey dude when r u going to give us the surprising story about the first kiss of Gloomy. Want to know how Arnav felt at that moment. Does he treasure it? No rush, but waiting desperately to read it.


Originally posted by karmachameleon

He looked at her with the same yearning in his eyes and said'..

ASR: Yes, not all'..

Khushi: This is my Paris, right here, the ice cream, the church light and your company.

 

He saw her face and noticed her satisfaction, how she found happiness in all the little things around her. What she had, he could never have that kind of satisfaction in his life.

It was the first time he saw her and realized how she had everything without having anything.

And he had everything, yet nothing.


             It couldn't be put better. The very instant I read these lines, my love for ur writing has increased immensely.

                      But Gloomy ur company is his 'ECSTACY'

 

Originally posted by karmachameleon

He looked at her''

Her face''.

Her twinkling eyes''..

Her half eaten ice cream''..

Her lips''.

Pink''..

Glossed with vanilla''.

 

He said''

ASR: I am sure''

 

Oh! boy Arnav I think u r falling for her Blushing  Don't let her go man. Better realize sooon that  ITS LOVE

 

Originally posted by karmachameleon

He arched his eyebrows, involuntarily''..

In shock, in surprise, in embarrassment'''.

 

He couldn't get himself to say anything'''.

He looked away''..

 

He didn't want to say 'yes'

That wouldn't be possible'..

 

He couldn't say 'no'

That would be lying''..


These lines were awesome. U have beautifully portrayed his brewing feelings for her.

 

Originally posted by karmachameleon

ASR: You are NOT calling me Genie or lamp or anything like that. Tsunami was fine'.at least better than Genie!

Khushi: Nope! It's Genie now.

 

She walked to him, lessening her distance, increasing his heart beat''.

She looked him in the eye and said'.

 

Khushi: And as far as I remember I thought my wish was your command?

 

Time stood still''

So did they''..

 

Few inches apart''.

Few heart beats apart'''

 

So close yet so far'''.

He saw her eyes'..

Questioning him for his own words''

Demanding answers for his very own statement''.


Heart Heart Heart

 

Originally posted by karmachameleon

He didn't know why he didn't say no to her that day''.

Did he know now why he didn't want to say no today?

 

It was her, asking for something''

Openly''..

He had done things for her without even her asking'''

How was he going to refuse her when she actually asked for something''

 

 

It was about the person who decided to give him those names''.

Gloomy!

 

A smile spread on her lips, a big one''.

He saw her lips again''.

Still glistening with sweetness''..


 Arnav u couldn't say no to her that day or today or any other day because she's the angel Blushing unknowingly dwelling in ur heart Heart


Originally posted by karmachameleon

ASR: You look good when you are happy.

Khushi: I look good when I am happy because you are around. You should always stay with me''

 

She stopped talking. She corrected herself''

Khushi: I mean''I just meant''.

ASR: I will!

 

That's all he said. He didn't want her explanation following that statement. He didn't want any change of statement. She asked him to stay with her and he just wanted to let her know his answer'..


      Khushi u rightly said "You should always stay with me''"  Blushing Liked it when he said I will & when he didn't want a change of statement.

 

Originally posted by karmachameleon

Khushi: That's surprising. You have never noticed the moon?

ASR: No. What's the big deal?

Khushi: It feels like forever ago when I used to just sit and admire the moon for many countless hours''..

 ASR: Gloomy?

She turned around''.

With her eyes filled'..

With some pain''..

And some clear liquid'.

And it spilled''

Just one drop from each eye''.

 

She quickly wiped it and murmured'..

Khushi: Sorry!

''.it has been forever since I was given a choice''.by anyone''or by life''..


                 The poor girls longing for choice squeezed my heart Cry

 

Originally posted by karmachameleon

Another tear rolled out of her eye'''

Hurting him more than her''..

Khushi: ''I am just so grateful that I have you in my life'..I have never had a friend like you''.thank you for coming to my life''thank you!

 

Saying that, she hugged him''

Leaving him in utter surprise'..

Utter confusion'..

Utter shock'..

 

It wasn't the first time she had hugged him while crying''

But it was the first time she had hugged him thanking him for coming into her life'..

 

This was different'..

This was special''

This was new'..

This was good''

This felt nice''..

 

Before he could even hug her properly, she broke the hug and moved back. She wiped her face properly and said'..

ASR: What? An anti-depressant or the reason for depression?

Khushi: The reason for my smile.

 

   I was so touched by the fact that he could feel her pain more than her. He is truly her 'SOUL MATE' Embarrassed




Edited by fleurs - 18 November 2012 at 4:09am

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Originally posted by karmachameleon

He held her hands and closed her palms, making two fists, he stood in front of her and said'.

ASR: Pick one.

She looked at the right fist and said'.

Khushi: This.

ASR: DAMN IT!

Khushi: What happened?

ASR: That was the Genie one.

She just looked at him and saw his irritated face and started laughing'..

She finally controlled her laugh and said'.

Khushi: You didn't have to do it''

ASR: Let's just say you are one lucky person''

Khushi: I know I am. I am the luckiest.

Khushi: Or, you could have just lied.

ASR: Lied?

Khushi: Yes, not tell me which hand was for which name.

ASR: I don't want to lie''.I mean I don't prefer lying to''even if I did lie'..it was''I''..

He tried telling her but he couldn't. He didn't know why. He wanted to tell her everything before she found out from anyone else but somehow he couldn't get himself to utter those words.


       It was so nice of him to give her the liberation of naming him just to see a smile spread across her face


Originally posted by karmachameleon

Khushi: Good. You should always take my side. Shhh!

She made me so mad that I told her that no matter how badly Jassi needed a makeover, Armaan fell in love with HER, for who she was, without changing her, not any other hot women in his fashion house.

What would he think of me? He will think I am like those desperate girls. I am so mad at myself and Manny.  SO MAD.

He read her note. All of it. He read it again. Which part of the note caught his eyes, he didn't know. Which part of the note confused him, he didn't know. Which part made him speechless, he didn't know. Which part he liked, he didn't know. Which part was so true, he didn't know. Which part wasn't, he didn't know that either.

ASR: Who is Armaan?

Khushi: Huh?

ASR: Who is Armaan?

Khushi: What are you talking about?

He pointed at Armaan in her note and asked''

ASR: This? Who is this?

Khushi: Armaan!

ASR: I can read that. Who is that?

Khushi: Jassi's boss!

ASR: Who?

Khushi: Why are you talking about him?

ASR: Why are you talking about him?

Khushi: What are you talking about?

ASR: Forget it!

Khushi: How do you know?

ASR: I know because''.you are the luckiest ' right?


      Loved the way he admired her note. Did  Arnav question about Armaan out of unknown possessiveness or out of sheer curiosity?


Originally posted by karmachameleon

Manny: I just talked to the boss, he loved your concept, so did I'..

Khushi: Your boss liked the idea too?

ASR: He is your boss too and yes he liked your idea, very much actually.

Manny: Okay? I will also call OUR boss and inform him to attend the meeting.

Manny: Well, you are in for treat Khushi''he already likes you'.

Khushi: Likes me?

Manny: I mean your concept. Be on time tomorrow.


   Is Gloomy going to meet Mr.India? Shocked R we also in for a treat KC? Wink

 

Originally posted by karmachameleon

He opened the door and walked in''

He was too busy doing something on his phone when he heard the most unexpected voice''

The most melodious voice''

The most harmonious voice''.

The most pleasant voice''

 

And saw her''..

She was actually there''

So late at night''..

What was she doing there'''..

She didn't even call him''..

At least not right now''..

        Bring her soon into ur life Arnav so that every second u can hear her melodious voice

 

Originally posted by karmachameleon

Was this a dream? 

Looking as pretty as ever''.

She wasn't wearing what she had worn this morning''.

Had he seen her in pink before? He didn't know''.

She looked angelic''

Just perfect'''.

She started rushing down'''

Walking down''.

Or running''..

Down the stairs'''.

Towards him'''

He heard her again''

Do you know for how long I have been waiting? Where have you been?

Another few flights and she was almost down the stairs''.

He stood still''.

Too shocked to react''.

Too surprised to respond''..

Her hair was open''.

Her face looked delightful'..

She was smiling''.

She looked radiant''..

Just like an angel''.

Dressed in pink''.

Walking towards him'''

 

She got to him''.

Or just ran to him''.

And embraced him''

Without any warning''..

Or any explanation''..

 

It was her''

So close to him''.

Embracing him''.

Happily''.

 

Why? He didn't know. He didn't want to know.

He couldn't hold himself''.

He quickly snaked his arms around her waist''..

Embracing her back''

 

Without even knowing the reason for this sudden hug'..

Without even knowing the reason for this pleasant surprise''

Without even knowing the reason for this unexpected shock''

Without even knowing the reason for this''

 

THIS.

 

Her being there''.

Her running to him''

Her embracing him'''.

 

He felt her body so close to him''.

In a different way'''

He wanted to hold her like that''.

For now''

And

Forever'''

 

He could hear her heart beat'..

He could feel her breath''

 

He could feel her arms around his neck''.

He could sense the closeness between them''.

They were both quiet''.

Just enjoying that moment''.

For their own reasons''..

 

Until he heard...

Khushi: I love Mr. India!


         Oops! Sorry but I couldn't stop myself from quoting the whole part. Each line has its own essence. I could neither pick one nor leave one. When he missed the first hug I felt sorry  for him. I was like OMG no''..Broken Heart but when he hugged her back immediately the 2nd time, my happiness was beyond bounds Big smile Blushing Hug

Edited by fleurs - 18 November 2012 at 4:08am

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Posted: 18 November 2012 at 3:46am | IP Logged
ah..you just left me breathless.!

you know you always left me confused..!!

after reading your update m always in doubt about which

part was ma favourite and which was not 'cuz as always i love each

n every bit that you write. it was so amazingly soothing and beautifully written.

i was in ma 'aww' session the whole time i was reading it. arnav is sooo devilishly

cute n sweet.! now i too want a guy like him BAS.

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Posted: 18 November 2012 at 3:52am | IP Logged
ohh 34th part i didnt get any pm Cry
anywys nw i will read it Wink

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