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Fate-Mate Thread 6 Chapter 34 - Page 98

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Posted: 11 years ago

I just loved it...


their love is like sparkling wine...the days pass by and better it tastes and brighter does it shine...

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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi KC, are they only together a week? Yes it does seem like months!

Really good update and normally I would never ask you to move your storyline forward faster than you wanted to but this issue on the show will result in loss of readers! Every line you write I see Barun and Sanaya as Arnav and Khushi! I cannot imagine any other faces! This story as I told you before has great potential for a book of script. Look at the movie Student of the Year and see how as students the concept can take off based on your story!

Yes as the show moved on it would be great to have this story move in tandem with the show but the show is stalled and may never get back on track with Barun so you have to look at keeping this story alive via a blog! Too good a story to only have it on IF! I think that is why your readers are feeling like the story is not moving fast enough! 

Like where you are going with her meeting Mr. India soon and I can just imagine what comes next!

Please update soon. We need this version of Arhi to keep us going! 

Cheers
Maya Di





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Posted: 11 years ago
wow! nice update...πŸ‘
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Posted: 11 years ago
edited my comment on page 117
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing...
thnx 4 the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
this story is soo cute, i love them both so much!!
 
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Posted: 11 years ago
again late at ur new thread... Always wait for ur update... Its lovely...Pls update again soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow just wow πŸ‘
i simply love the unknown bond between the two. 
asusual great update 
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesum FF
Read whole in a day
Khushi speaks so much
I mean i  can go without talking for whole day n she gets headache in jus 10 mins hahahahahahahah
Arnav is really different here
I dnt knw but i feel its high time he strt opening up to Khushi
She always says her pain he never he jus keeps it in his heart n fight that nt right i feel
Love Khushi n her obssession with bollywood n TV hehehe
Plz add me to ur PM list
Posted: 11 years ago
KC CHAPTER 35 ON NEW THREAD EEEK