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Posted: 19 November 2012 at 9:42am | IP Logged
FATI.IT SOUNDS SO AMAZINGTongue PLS CONTINUEBig smile

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Posted: 19 November 2012 at 11:03am | IP Logged
Originally posted by chulbuli94

FATI.IT SOUNDS SO AMAZINGTongue PLS CONTINUEBig smile
I am happy that u liked it. I will continue soon.Smile
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Posted: 19 November 2012 at 3:45pm | IP Logged
D concept seems interesting !!!! Tongue ... come on,Fati...continue soon !!! n what about ur other ff...love uEmbarrassed

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Posted: 19 November 2012 at 3:52pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by pakpearl

D concept seems interesting !!!! Tongue ... come on,Fati...continue soon !!! n what about ur other ff...love uEmbarrassed
Awww Love u too Api.Embarrassed
I am happy that u liked it. Now I will update soon after ur comment. Was waiting for it. The other one will also be updated.Smile

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Posted: 22 November 2012 at 4:36pm | IP Logged
Hey Guys I am here with my first update of this FF.
Thank you to all my friends who loved the character sketch and the concept of this FF... Embarrassed
Its a little short one but next time I'll givea  bigger one for sure.Smile
 
In a big shopping mall...
 
Girl: Ouch. Andhe ho kya dekh kar nahi chal sakte?

Boy: To yeh main apke liye bhi keh sakta hun

Girl: Main dekh kar hi chal rahi thi lekin tum tum hote kaun ho mujse sawal jawab karne wale?

Boy: Is nacheez ko insaan kehte hain jo shayad apke liye bohat new word hoga kyun k app logo ko to insaan ko sirf istemal karna jante hain.

Girl: Just Shut-up? Samjhe. Main tum jaiseon ke mun nahi lagti.

Boy: Ji ji apka to apna standard hai na?

Girl: Han hai aur tum jante bhi nahi ho k main kis k bte hun?

Boy: Nahi janta aur na hi janna chahata hun.

Girl: How dare u talk to me like this?

Boy: Talk? Hah I don't even wanna see u people around me.

Girl: What do u mean by U PEOPLE? Han. Tell me? Baatao mujhe

Boy: O hello! Main apke baap ka personal nokar nahi hun jo apke har sawal ka jawab dun. Got it? (He showed her finger)

Girl: Baap? How disgusting is that. Cheap useless people.

Boy: Madam hum bhale hi cheap hon par at least apki tarah dusron ko istemal nahi karte.Ap logon ko to bas paisa kaya hai yehi sikhaya jata hai.

Girl: What?? Wahtever I don't care aur main yahan tum jese duffer se kyun baat kar rahi hun?

Boy: Mujhe pata hai kyun k aik jese log apne aap ko pehchante hain.

Girl:You'

She was about to threw venom through her words when she heard someone calling. The voice came from behind her. A girl can be seen struggling with a lot of hand bags.

2nd Girl: Di'. Di kab se bula rahi hun.

1st Girl: han kya hai? Aur sare shopping bags tune kyun uthae hue hain yeh bodayguard kahan hai?

2nd Girl: Wo Di maine hi unse kaha tha ke..

1st Girl: Tu kab sudhrege? La mujhe de

2nd Girl: Nahi Di main bilkul theek hun.

As the second girl came forward she slipped and laned in his arms'..

They met each other by Gunjan's sister arguing with Samrat.Let see what it will lead to.Wink

Stay tuned for further updates'..
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Love

 FatimaHeart



Edited by HSFA - 22 November 2012 at 4:58pm

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Posted: 22 November 2012 at 4:37pm | IP Logged
EDITED ROFLMAO emoticon (Laughing Emoticons)had ho gai angel again edit karu forehead slap smiley

I Wish i can stop my laugh at this time.. what i gona coment now i didnt felt LOL u can understand rytLOLWink
 
Girl was rude or not ROFL let me decide it.Ermm I am going to react same like her ROFLSo m going to support her..she was right.. that boy should have look first to move in a mall ROFL or give him spectacles naWink

Par i want to mention dialouges were awesome Rolling on the Floor Laughing emoticon (Laughing Emoticons)isi lea meri hansi ni band ho rahe comment likhtey huwey specially da one ek jasey log ek dosrey ko pehnchatey hain LOL goes same wid us ROFLMAO emoticon (Laughing Emoticons)

For ruining the story  of course not feeling gudcute kitten sorry smiley
But of course tmhey mjhsy zyada tu kisi chez k parwa ni na smiling tongue smiley

N sajan in each other arms singing happy smileystoped at really bad pointcrossed arms smiley

cant wait to see their storycrazy tongue hanging out smiley

update was nyc clapping happy smiley

update soonimpatient smiley
hope u wil not mind now smileys shaking hands smiley

see ya i love you spray paint emoticon




Edited by MSluvsSI - 22 November 2012 at 5:12pm

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Posted: 22 November 2012 at 9:04pm | IP Logged
That was awsum...loved it...thnks 4d pm..

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Posted: 23 November 2012 at 1:10am | IP Logged
nice update

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