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Posted: 11 years ago
D concept seems interesting !!!! 😛 ... come on,Fati...continue soon !!! n what about ur other ff...love u😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: pakpearl

D concept seems interesting !!!! 😛 ... come on,Fati...continue soon !!! n what about ur other ff...love u😳

Awww Love u too Api.Embarrassed
I am happy that u liked it. Now I will update soon after ur comment. Was waiting for it. The other one will also be updated.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey Guys I am here with my first update of this FF.
Thank you to all my friends who loved the character sketch and the concept of this FF... 😳
Its a little short one but next time I'll givea  bigger one for sure.😊
 
In a big shopping mall...
 
Girl: Ouch. Andhe ho kya dekh kar nahi chal sakte?

Boy: To yeh main apke liye bhi keh sakta hun

Girl: Main dekh kar hi chal rahi thi lekin tum tum hote kaun ho mujse sawal jawab karne wale?

Boy: Is nacheez ko insaan kehte hain jo shayad apke liye bohat new word hoga kyun k app logo ko to insaan ko sirf istemal karna jante hain.

Girl: Just Shut-up? Samjhe. Main tum jaiseon ke mun nahi lagti.

Boy: Ji ji apka to apna standard hai na?

Girl: Han hai aur tum jante bhi nahi ho k main kis k bte hun?

Boy: Nahi janta aur na hi janna chahata hun.

Girl: How dare u talk to me like this?

Boy: Talk? Hah I don't even wanna see u people around me.

Girl: What do u mean by U PEOPLE? Han. Tell me? Baatao mujhe

Boy: O hello! Main apke baap ka personal nokar nahi hun jo apke har sawal ka jawab dun. Got it? (He showed her finger)

Girl: Baap? How disgusting is that. Cheap useless people.

Boy: Madam hum bhale hi cheap hon par at least apki tarah dusron ko istemal nahi karte.Ap logon ko to bas paisa kaya hai yehi sikhaya jata hai.

Girl: What?? Wahtever I don't care aur main yahan tum jese duffer se kyun baat kar rahi hun?

Boy: Mujhe pata hai kyun k aik jese log apne aap ko pehchante hain.

Girl:You'

She was about to threw venom through her words when she heard someone calling. The voice came from behind her. A girl can be seen struggling with a lot of hand bags.

2nd Girl: Di'. Di kab se bula rahi hun.

1st Girl: han kya hai? Aur sare shopping bags tune kyun uthae hue hain yeh bodayguard kahan hai?

2nd Girl: Wo Di maine hi unse kaha tha ke..

1st Girl: Tu kab sudhrege? La mujhe de

2nd Girl: Nahi Di main bilkul theek hun.

As the second girl came forward she slipped and laned in his arms'..

They met each other by Gunjan's sister arguing with Samrat.Let see what it will lead to.😉

Stay tuned for further updates'..
Leave ur suggestions and feedback

 

Love

 Fatima❤️

Edited by HSFA - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
EDITED had ho gai angel again edit karu 

I Wish i can stop my laugh at this time.. what i gona coment now i didnt felt LOL u can understand ryt😆😉
 
Girl was rude or not 🤣 let me decide it.🤔 I am going to react same like her 🤣So m going to support her..she was right.. that boy should have look first to move in a mall 🤣 or give him spectacles na😉

Par i want to mention dialouges were awesome isi lea meri hansi ni band ho rahe comment likhtey huwey specially da one ek jasey log ek dosrey ko pehnchatey hain LOL goes same wid us 

For ruining the story  of course not feeling gud
But of course tmhey mjhsy zyada tu kisi chez k parwa ni na 

N sajan in each other arms stoped at really bad point

cant wait to see their story

update was nyc 

update soon
hope u wil not mind now 

see ya 


Edited by MSluvsSI - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
That was awsum...loved it...thnks 4d pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: MSluvsSI

EDITED had ho gai angel again edit karu 


I Wish i can stop my laugh at this time.. what i gona coment now i didnt felt LOL u can understand ryt😆😉
 
Girl was rude or not 🤣 let me decide it.🤔 I am going to react same like her 🤣So m going to support her..she was right.. that boy should have look first to move in a mall 🤣 or give him spectacles na😉

Par i want to mention dialouges were awesome isi lea meri hansi ni band ho rahe comment likhtey huwey specially da one ek jasey log ek dosrey ko pehnchatey hain LOL goes same wid us 

For ruining the story  of course not feeling gud
But of course tmhey mjhsy zyada tu kisi chez k parwa ni na 

N sajan in each other arms stoped at really bad point

cant wait to see their story

update was nyc 

update soon
hope u wil not mind now 

see ya 


🤣🤣 First Let me control my laugh Sweetheart
U are just too much 😆aaj na tumhe kuch ho gaya hai 🤣🤣
The emoticons u used are so cute and funny just like my Jaan 😉I can understand ur condition mine is the same. 😆
The girl was rude okay?🤣 Bechara mera Sam 🤣
Han bilkul yeh dialouge likhtey huwey I also thought about us 😆😳
Ek lagaun ni to aqal thikane a jaye gi. I am not felling gud and all.😆 Zayda senti mat ho. Its u who matters the most to me.🤗 BAS.😉
Yeah Sajan in each other's arms
Mujhe pata tha. Thora suspence rahne do My Sweetheart😆
I can't mind anything that u say. 😳❤️
Love u too Jaan<3
 
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Posted: 11 years ago
I was shocked 2 c Gunjan like that😲😲...but,thank God 😳😳 ..it was her elder sis..o my poor Sammy😕..kaisi saali mili hai usko😉...very well-written,Fati Angel😳 (Meri.m I allowed 2 call her so??)
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome start fatima😳bt baht short thaa😆
eagerly waiting fr d next updt..want a longer one..😳cont soon nd thanx 4 d pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: pakpearl

I was shocked 2 c Gunjan like that😲😲...but,thank God 😳😳 ..it was her elder sis..o my poor Sammy😕..kaisi saali mili hai usko😉...very well-written,Fati Angel😳 (Meri.m I allowed 2 call her so??)

Of course api you can call her angel too😆but  cant call her MY Angel😉Smjh gae na😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: MSluvsSI

Of course api you can call her angel too😆but  cant call her MY Angel😉Smjh gae na😳

Fati,u r surprising me with your talent😛 Appi,Meri is SATAN!!!