Swaron~OS...rose day updated pg3

hello evry1..
ths my frst os...i hv nvr wrttn ...any such thing before...
i ws jst inspired by ppl of IF..so wntd..to try..i knw i cnt match the lvl of u ppl..bt jst wntd to c hw bad i cn write 😆
so here it:

some intro:
-sharon nd swayam r couple..only rey knws abt it..
-its rose day..boys hv reached the venue...nd girls r taking tooo long to get ready..
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sharon...hw long wil u take to reach..i cnt bear a second without u..swayam said..
swayam..it takes time to get ready..kya koi aur ladki aa gyi h..no na..c vicky he isnt calling neha nd disturbing her agn nd agn..evn u shld..w8..she ws shouting on swayam(bt she ws nt angry..she ws jst in a mood to tease her love..nd she ws actlly enjoying it..)
whn rey saw swayam..in a corner..laughing..nd his phn in his hand..he ws nt listening..wht othr person ws speaking..
he wnt near him..nd asked thrgh actions..whts d mttr..swayam..??
he said controlling his laughter..ary kch nhi siren on..rey gave a smirk..nd placed d phn on his ear..nd went frm their..
and tht ws al..she hs heard..wht he jst said...
fun soon turned into anger..
wait a second wht did u jst cal me...??
Siren...
no no no..sharon...hw cn i cl u tht..
u toh r my princess...my love..my swtheart...(boys r too gd..in it..chnging d tpc)
she blushed hard..
thn wht ws tht..siren on h..she questioned him...??
ary vo toh mai rey ko bol rha tha...
oh..accha byee...nw let me get ready.
byee..princess
sharon...to whm vr u talking...?? nd y were u blushing so hard..?simmi questioned..
neha asking d same..
sharon...oh no..hw cn i tell thm..tht i nd swayam...v r a couple...no i cnt..(agn blushing)
sharon...simmi brght hr bck..frm hr thghts..
nthng nthng...i ws jst saying...
wow..simmi u look pretty..saying ths..she wished to change d tpc..
nd ys she succeed..
nd wht abt neha..neha questnd..
ys ys u too..luk gorgeous..
expct simmi..evry1..forgot...fr whom sharon ws blushing..
she ws luking at her with those suspected eyes...
thy al finally gt ready..nd lft fr their destination...
precap:
sharon reached d venue..nd saw swayam surrouned by 10 girls..nd accpeting roses..
how ws it guyzz...??
too bad..?..bt plz cooperate..my first
wrtting..plz..
imp note:
pg 2- http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3287488&TPN=2Edited by ambuja4 - 11 years ago

Cute start though this part was really small

But it was quite funny, especially the siren bit😆

Do continue and PM me wen u do😊
Edited by Neeti96 - 11 years ago

nice start ...😊😊

[QUOTE=Neeti96] <font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3"><font color="#9900CC">Cute start though this part was really small</font>

<font color="#9933CC">But it was quite funny, especially the siren bit😆</font>

<font color="#9966CC">Do continue and PM me wen u do😊</font></font>
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thnq...
vl try to make nxt part long..
😛

Nice one but its chota update its fun when he called siren . Next update should be big one please

This content was originally posted by: kanchan06

<p align="left"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#990000" size="6">nice start ...😊😊</font></p>
<div align="left"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#990000" size="6">keep writing and info me when u update it</font></div>

thnq..
ya vl surely..infrm u..!!

This content was originally posted by: bhanumathitanha

Nice one but its chota update its fun when he called siren . Next update should be big one please

thnxx...
ya nxt 1 vl b a big one..!!

That one was really funny when both Swayam and Sharon were changing the topics to avoid falling in a trap. And the precap seems interesting with Swayam accepting the roses like really?
Update soon and PM me

This was an awesome update...loved it please PM me when you will update next.😊

This content was originally posted by: Rutu

That one was really funny when both Swayam and Sharon were changing the topics to avoid falling in a trap. And the precap seems interesting with Swayam accepting the roses like really?
Update soon and PM me

yea..
..vl definetly pm u.. 😊 Edited by ambuja4 - 11 years ago