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|| Ishq Shava | KR SS || ch3 - pg 18 16/2/13

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Posted: 12 November 2012 at 7:21am | IP Logged

Heyaa Guys..!!!

I know I know we both have a lot of pending works

But kriti asked 4 diwaali special on kriyaansh 

So here we are...

with a brand new SS

ISHQ SHAVA

so

A VERY HAPPY DIWAALI

from me and aro to all of our readers..!!!

Love You All Guys..!!!

A short intro to the story.

Love is the best feeling no?

Past crushes or any closed one is always near to us..

People betrays but why?!

Is being with that person again that hard?

It really is..

What if people faces their past again..?

what if...



Scroll Down !

First part tomorrow only Smile


Edited by abhiyakreya - 16 February 2013 at 1:45am

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Posted: 12 November 2012 at 7:24am | IP Logged
I n d e x


Chapter 1 - Page 1

Chapter 2 - Page 12

Chapter 3 - Page 18


Edited by abhiyakreya - 16 February 2013 at 1:43am

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Posted: 12 November 2012 at 7:58am | IP Logged
hey here i am with first part kal sey mujey bohat log bol chukey hey ki they want some thing special means gift on diwali sab ney os bola tha like ... ANNIE ... KUHU ...KRITI ...PREET >>>MISH >>>> sab to me nd k as u know decide a ss i know bohat jada hi work pending hey but kya kroo dil hey ki manta nahi but today diwali hey to happy diwali to alll celebrate diwali enjoy but safe wali ... no crackers ... because it cause pollution nd also lots of problems to senior citizens nd new born child so enjoy but not create trouble for other happy diwali sarey devil rockerzzz ki taraf sey 
today diwali so i try ki tum logo ko hsa saku koi serious wala update nahi so here u go 
love u all enjoy 

CHAPTER 1 
swayam : haye kya rang hey...
rey : or kya style hey ...
swayam : ha maar dala ...
rey : mujey b ...
swayam : i want this ...
rey : kya lagti hey ...jab chalti hey ...
swayam : ab to jahi chahiye ...
rey : ha papa sey baat karni paregi nahi to jeena mushkil ho jayegi ...
swayam : j hamey milegi ...kya ...
rey : kyu nahi milegi ...
swayam : lekin tujey b jahi chahiye tu koi or dekh na kiti hey jha ...
rey : main kyu or koi dekhoo tu dekh na tujey koi mil jayegi ...
swayam : tu itna hand some hey tujey mil jayegi koi or ...
rey : nahi i want this ...
swayam : chal ek kaam kartey hey share kar legey ... i think isey koi prob nahi hogi ...
rey : right i agree ...
one girl enter : dude how cheap u guys ...
swayam : what ...
rey : hmm hmm hamney kya kiya jo hum cheap hey ...
girl : kesi double meaning batey kar rhey ho ...
swayam : kab ki ...
girl : abhi bol rhey they na sharing kar legey ...
rey ; oh hello hum girl ki baat nahi kar rhey they hum log to new car ki baat kar rhey they ...
(merey bhai ko bohat pasand hey ...)
swayam : or vesey b girls k liye time nahi hey jo wait krey or b bohat kaam hey ...
rey : chal swayam papa sey baat kartey hey ...
swayam : ha ...main b karta hhoo ...
girl : weird ...


after that ...
swayam : she is coming ...
rey : who ...
swayam : my sis or kon ...
rey : oh really kab ...
swayam : kya baat hey bohat excited ho rha hey ...
rey : main kha excited ho rha ho ...
swayam : chal ban mat ...
rey : acha kab a rhi hey ...
swayam : ajj sida college ayegi ...
rey : ok ...
swayam : chal ab college ka time ho gya hey kisi ney dekh liya to panga ho jayega ...
rey : not again ...
swayam : yes u r dazzler nd me weakling ...
rey : ya right 

later in day ...
one girl enter in college

girl : i need to go loo/...but girls loo hey kha ...
at last she find girls looo but some locked its door from inside ... no one opening it ...
means inside fight going on in b/w dazzler nd weakling girls ...
girls : hey girls open the door apni fight khi or ja key con. kroo na ... please ...
voice : hey u go some other place not here...
voice2 : kyu ki ajj in dazzlers ko to m gonna kill ...
girl : what the hell of this weakling nd dazzler ... girls see its urgent its nature call control nahi hota ... please open the door ...
again other voice : so what ... we r not gonna open the door ...
girl : u r nuts main kha jau ...
voice : why don't u go in boys loo ...
girl : what i think right i have to go in boys loo ... roney sey to better idea ... hey ...
other hand ...
rey : where is alll girls abhi tak ayi nahi or boys kha hey ...
swayam : ya kahi kuj ...
rey ; wait sharon nd other washroom gyi thi ...
swayam : what baki b wahi hey oh no ...
rey : run ...
in side washroom ...
sharon : u gwars ...
vish : dude hum gwar hey to tum to hum sey b gyi guzri hoo koi word bolney hi nahi ata ...
neha : right u r vihu ...
rinni :  bol to sahi rhi hey ...
simmi : shut up nd u wo short forms hey...
vish : oh poora bolney main problem hey kya ...
sharon : how dare u 
nd here sharon nd vish start pulling eachother hairs nd neha nd simmi also doing same but rinni as usual confused ...


other hand new girl enter in boys washroom ...
as soon as she enter boys start shouting nd start running because some boys r taking shower afetr there sportce prectice ...
girl : easy guys ... m just going to use ur one bathroom ...
one boys : girl loo hey na ...
girl : ha but wha koi weakling vs dazzler fight chal rhi hey vesey towle sambhal k ...


other hand here rdx is princi nd karan is vp ...
peon enter : sir bhara ...
this time karan nd rdx both sitting in same cabin ...
karan : kya hua ...
peon : wo girls washroom ka door close kar k fight kar rhi hey ...hey or ...
rdx : what or kya ...
peon : or ek lari larko k washroom main ghus gyi ...
karan : kya ho rha hey j sab ...
rdx : tum chalo hum a rhey hey ...
after 15 min everyone standing in rdx 's cabin means weakling nd dazzler girl ...nd new girls ...
rdx : r u out of ur mind ...
girl : no sir  not out of mind out of control ...
rdx : tum log kar kya rhey they ...
rinii : sir jada kuj nahi pulling hairs of each other ...
karan : lekin kyu ...
rinni : wo kya hey na sir boys ki trha stunt nai maar saktey na to pulling haire is easy job ...
sharon : shut up ...
karan : or app kya kar rhi thi boys washroom main ...
girl : sire bola na out of control ...
karan : kya ?
girl : wo kya hey na main girls loo main gyi thi ... lekin koi door open nahi kar rha tha ... nd then they said ki boys loo use kar loo to vesey b app 

samaz saktey ho to main boys washroom gyi per maney only washroom use kiya kisi ka rape thora kiya ...
karan : kisney bola tha apko ... boys ka use karney...
girl : sir kya ...
karan : washroom ...
girl : oh washroom in main sey tha koi door band tha na to dekh nahi payi ...
rdx : kisney bola ...
now everyone pointing toward each other ...
karan : tum sab ney bola ...
all : no sir ...
karan : to kisi ney to bola ...
rdx : ha acha jis ney bola wo do kadam agey ho jao ...
everygirl step backword only rinni left ...
karan : to apney bola ...
rinni :_-----------
karan : main apsey bol rha hoo rinni ...
rinni : maney kya bola ...
rdx : u girls ... 
karan : tum sab ko punishment mileyga ...
girls _______________
rdx : ha j jo tum logo ney divide create kiya hey na usi main change kartey hey ...
sharon : matlab ...: matlab next ek week k liye dazzlers weakling nd weaklings dazzlers .. bane gey thats it ...
simmi : no sir ...
karan : ok then two week ...
rinni : sir ...
karan : teen week ...
sharon : ok  ...
rdx : ja saktey hey app ...
karan : nd app new hey na apka name ...
girl : kriya sikhawat ...
karan : next tim dyaan sey nd wel come to st. louian ...
kriya : thankx sir ...
after girls leave ...
rdx : let see ab college ki hwa kis taraf behti hey ..
karan : bohat kuj change honey wala hey ...
other hand ...
sharon : u more on s 
vish : respect we r dzzlers now dekhna ab main kya karti hoo ...
simmi : arghh ...
then kriya enter ...
neha : hello me nahia who u r ...
kriya : kriya ...
vish : me vish vesey friends 
kriya ; of course ...
vishu : u know ab bohat mza ayega ...
kriya : matlab ...
neha : matla ab dazzlers bnagey weakling nd we wakling bney gey dazzler ...
in canteen 
rey nd swayam also got the new ...
rey : tufaan aney wala hey ...
swayam : ha mujey lag rha hey ...
rey : but wo new girl kon ho sakti hey ...
swayam : wo pakka kriya hogi whi esa panga means usi k pass guts hey boys loo main ghus ney k ...
rey : hmmm...
other hand girls enter in canteen ...
nd boys aslo enter 
viky : kya hua dude 
rey : tum logo ney poori movie miss kardi ...
nil : matlab ...
simmi : matlab ajj sey three weeks tak hum log weakling ...
viky : what ...
rinni : yes ...
bharat : swayam kya ...
neha : today sey thee week hum log dazzlers ...
amar ; kya bol rhi hey ...
vish : scah hum log dazzlers ...
kriya enter : bhai ...
swayam : oh my shona ...
dazller aks weakling : bhai ...
swayam : yes my sis ...
weakling aks dazzlers look toward them 
rey smile ...
then weakling nd dazzlers ki look look ...


ok for today its done 
hope u enjoy 
thora bohat hasey b hogey 
ok 
so like nd comment 
aj k din to galli mat dena 
sarey kaam schor k jha update doing main 
abhi agar tum enjoy na kro to mera koi phayada nahi likhney  ka Ouch
wee r waiting for ur review Embarrassed
love u guys 
K nd AROMA 
love u all 
DEVIL ROCKERZZZ
happy diwali again ... have lota of fun Wink




Edited by aromakriyaansh - 12 November 2012 at 10:05pm

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Posted: 12 November 2012 at 8:19am | IP Logged
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aww tum dono ne mere liye ek new ss start kiya

aww that so sweet...

par main toh ek os se bhi kaam chala leti...

coz update toh mahine main ek baar milna hai...

isse acha os hai...

ok do one thing ise os bana ne max 4 parts rakhegi chalega...

Allah miyaan Whats wrong with me...

main concept k baare main bolna toh bhul gyi...

Btw intresting concept////

ekdum masahalla

and update was mind blowing

reyam talk was really amazing 

they are talking about car...

ek sec toh mujhe bhi laga...

that they are talking abt girl...

wow kriya enter boys washroon...

really she have guts man...

is update k baad toh lagta hai aage update fadu honge...

waiting for the next update

update soon


Edited by Kriti_rox - 15 November 2012 at 9:16pm

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unresed..!!..

nice concept..loved it..!!..
n wo reyam wala part to mast tha..LOL
thnx for the pm..!!>...


Edited by esha_arsha - 16 February 2013 at 3:47am

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Posted: 12 November 2012 at 8:38am | IP Logged
nice one...

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Posted: 12 November 2012 at 8:45am | IP Logged
Smile

intrstnggg intro girlsBig smileBig smileBig smile

waitinggg 4 1st chappy,,,,,,,,,update jaldiBig smileBig smileBig smile


Edited by kuhu_Arsha - 12 November 2012 at 8:52am

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Posted: 12 November 2012 at 8:46am | IP Logged
I am for sure gonna kill u both

u two aint updating any of ur pendimg works n to add up to our miseries here we hv one more


I really doubt whether we'll gt an update even for at least one per year...


hate u both... for ur delays...

Arh!!!! m so damn frustrated with u two...

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