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JEENA ISI KA NAAM HAIN |updated 13 on pg 37|*NEW* (Page 7)

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its very well written 
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Originally posted by anushruthi

AWESOME ss
i found it very good
its very well written
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EEE KADAAAKKK HOTA...
I MEAN KHUP BHARI HOTA...
MALA NHAVTA MAHITI TU ITKI BHARI WRITER AHES...
HMM...
KAY BOLU...
NO COMMENTS..
FIRST I THOUGHT TO CUMMENT IN ENGLISH...
MAG MHANLA APAN PUNEKAR TAR WHY NOT USE OUR LANGUAGE HEHEHEHE...
ANYWAYS AWESUM UPDATE...
ANI HO UPDATE SOON...
AND PM ME...

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Originally posted by MAHI1198

<font color="#FF0000" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="5">EEE KADAAAKKK HOTA...
I MEAN KHUP BHARI HOTA...
MALA NHAVTA MAHITI TU ITKI BHARI WRITER AHES...
HMM...
KAY BOLU...
NO COMMENTS..
FIRST I THOUGHT TO CUMMENT IN ENGLISH...
MAG MHANLA APAN PUNEKAR TAR WHY NOT USE OUR LANGUAGE HEHEHEHE...
ANYWAYS AWESUM UPDATE...
ANI HO UPDATE SOON...
AND PM ME...
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Just read both chapters together loved it dear
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CHAPTER 3

Manyata introduced her friends to uday. Uday had also made a friend…quite a good 1….he sat with him for those two days… so Uday was no more friendless….Uday asked Manyata out that night….and Manyata agreed widout hesitating…

They made a plan of long drive…both took order of a large size pizza,packed it took two bottles of coke as Manyata strictly avoided uday to drink and drive…they reached at  a cliff…both sat on the bonnet of the car and started their talk…

U: so M….born and brought up in kolkata???

M: yup…

U: par tum aisi typical bongo types nai lagti….

M: dats bcuz my family is from Bombay..

U:gr8….main bhi Bombay se hi hu… waise tum ho kiski beti??

M: Brijraj Chauhan and Komal Chauhan…

Uday coughed hard spitting out his drink….

U: wat????

M:yes wat happened??

Udays pov…

Oh shit….Uncle Brij Aunty Komal iske mumaa dadaa hain?? Yani ki ye Princess Manyata hain….what….mission accomplished….main successful ho gaya??..oye balle balle..party sharty ka time Neeraj bhai chal aaja… Par ek naam ke do log ho sakte hain ye coincidence bhi ho sakta hain…. Ughh…pata lagana padega…mr.holmes ke duplicate…

U: waise wo karte kya hai??

M: mom is a house wife or dad businessman hain. mere dad ke chain hain restaurants ki…ROYALTY karke naam hain..actually DEVGADH & CO. enterprise ki yeh ek stream hain…Yaha Bengal main hain…aur delhi main bhi hain…toh wo ye sambhal the hain…

UV: (pov) ye bhi same…matlab DEVGADH & CO. main itni badi strem dadi sa ainvy kisiko sambhal ne nai degi..wo bhi Delhi..the capital aur West Bengal….

U:hmm…

M: mere bare main chodo kuch aur bolte hain

U:accha thik hain batau abhi yaha upar sky main kitne stars hain???

M:Uday… plz… u r hopeless…just shut up…

And there merry talk went on….

~~In devgadh palace~~

Neeraj,Unnati,j,vijay all were there…..to meet dadisa…

They came out in the sitting room now

J:oh my god.. dat was gr8(laughing heartily..)

N:haan yaar..

V: bechara uday waha kya kar raha hoga??

UN: uski chinta maat karo.. unhe kisi ki bhi kami mehsus nai hogi

N: waise ab daadi sa ko unki poti ki kami mehsus ho rai hain.

V: naani sa ko humare madat ki jaroorat hain.

J:humari naani sa bahot strong hain…. Unhone khud ko 18 years sambhala hain… bas ab aur thore saalonka intejar hain. Wo bhi in 18 saalonki tarah beet jayenge.

N: j bhai pehli baar sahi keh rahi hain…

J: NEERAJ…………….. HOW CUD U CALL ME BHAI????

N: oops…. Sorry baby…mujhe aisa nai kejna tha..(he thot for a second)Main kehna chahta tha Vijay banna kya kehta…

J: tum mujhse baat bhi mat karo.. baby  bulane ka haq tum kho chuke ho…… she sits on the sofa facing away from neeraj.

N: (wid drama…kuch  jyada hi drama) nai….main lut gaya barbaad ho gaya…

(went on his knees before J)…

(song from hulchul-2004)

iski adaye katilana, iski nigahe aashikana
dil pe mere bijalee gire, jab lehra ke chalatee hain
college me sabko tarsaye, yeh naa kisike hath aaye
yeh hai koyee jwalamukhee, gusse me aag ugalti hain
rang gora gora ang mastana, yeh toh hur hai
chadhti jawanee husn ke nashe me, yeh toh chur hain
yaro jara keh do isse, aaise naa tewar yeh dikhlaye
rampam ramba ramba ho – (3)(vijay-unnati join in)
dekho jara dekho kya hai ladkee
puchho jara puchho kyu hai bhadakee
hai dekho jara dekho kya hai ladkee ho o

Neeraj finishes the song and gets up. He looks at j with worried eyes.

J: baas, ho gaya?? Ya bacha hua gaana bhi sunana hain.

Saying his she gets up and storms away, leaving Neeraj, vijay and Unnati in a confused state.

~~KOLKATA~~

The night was at its midst when uday and manyta realized that it was very late. They had finished their pizza and coke. They sat in the car. Manyata led him to her house. His car halted by a grand mansion. Mansion to be dreamed off. Manyata closed the car door and bid him farewll and rushed leaving the admiring uday behind. She knocked the door which was hurriedly opend by her mother. She hugged her daughter with full force. She cupped her face. "Kaha thi aap beta. Aap ne bataya tha aap ko der hogi, par itni der?? Yeh sahi nai hain." She said complaining. "mumaa, andr toh aane dijiye. Aisi bhool fir nai hogi" Manyata replied holding her ears. Komal removed her hand from her ears and pulled her in gently, and closed the door behind them. Uday was seeing all this and was smiling to himself.

He as soon as went home, just turned on his cell and called his Neeraj bhai.

U:Neeraj… (he screamed in his ear)

N:ughh…. Uday… kaano main chillaneki kya jaroorat thi?? He askd irritatedly.

U: baat hi kuch aisi hain bhai… shayd… mission successful ho gaya.

N: wat?? Bhai kitna mazak karega… pehle hi j ne mood kharab karke rakha hain. Upar se tum mazak uda rahe ho??

U: nai Neeraj. Tumne mujhe foto bheji thi…us camp wali rit?? He said reminding Neeraj

N: haan toh uska kya?? Accha accha ab samjha…. Wo foto send karna humara side mission tha kya… mujhe laga tum 'mission p' ki  baat kar  rahe ho. (mission p=mission princess)

Uday slammed his hand hard on his forehead.

U: NEERAJ…. Main 'mission p' pe hi hoon. Ab meri baat suno, aur beech main interrupt mat karo.

N: ohk bhai.. he said in a rather confused tone.

U: dekho who foto main  jo ladki hain who Manyata hain. She is my frend in college. Ussay milne ke baad, or rather pehchaneke baad, I asked her for a night. She agreed. We took pizza and coke and went for a long drive. We stopped the car at a cliff ans sat on the bonnet. I asked her about her family

 N: bhai ab aur patience nai kiya jaata. Ful suspence thriller laga rakhi hain aisi baat kar rahe ho….

U: ughh.. saara maja chaupat kar dete ho…. Usne kaha ki who brijraj aur komal chauhan ki beti hain…… that means she is princess Manyata…

N: hahahahhahahhaa……(he laughed till he was out of breath)

U: kya hua Neeraj… has kyu rahe ho??? This is my first mission. Mujhe isse pele aisi cheezonka experience nahi hain. On the top of that, kisiko bhi pata nai hain ke I am here for a mission to find Devgadh's princess. She is been pushed away from Devgadh, from her motherland, from her people, from her Riyasat. No one has a rite to do so, but still its done. Tumhe pata hain ke uncle and aunty they themselves took her away. There are so many things to be solved. Meri padhayee ho gayee hain. I don't need to study. Fir bhi for the missions sake I hav to be in this damn Kolkata university. Aisa kya paap kiya hain humne?? Aur upr se tum has rahe ho??? How cruel u are Neeraj… bye… don't talk to me….

Saying this Uday abruptly ended the call

N: hello bhai… m sorry… bhai suno..bha…

Neeraj was stopped by the fones beeping sound. He pressed the red button with utter disappoint ment. Today his fate had shown him a very bad day. It played with his 2 beloveds. First j then uday…Neeraj was  very sad and on the verge of crying

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Yuvraaj Udayveer Singh had came to know that his best uncle and aunty had a daughter on the day wen he performd the rituals of being a Yuvraaj. Generally, the royals are crownd between the age from 18-25(in my story). Now the time had came for Manyata to be crownd as in a matter of weeks she was going to be 18. Uday was crowned on his birthday as the Yuvraaj of jaygadh, also vijay was crownd as Yuvraaj of Viratgadh. Uday was very restless wen he came to know about the truth. He immediately wanted to find the princess. So, he went of on the mission. He shared every thing wid his bro Neeraj, and this mission was no exception. Infact they both had planned about this. Now within a day's time. Uday was successful in finding the princess. He came to know from dadisa that she uncle and aunty wre in Kolkata. And there he was….at the last padhav of his mission

So guys this is the end. Hope this wasn't boring.

PRECAP: plans of Neeraj and uday to confirm that brijraj and komal Chauhan, i.e. manyata's mom and dad are the Maharaj and maharani or no.

Sorry if I bored u. I didn't mean to do so. I was alittle busy on my os. To tell me how is this chapter.sorry for mistakes.

Do like and comment.

Signing of

Yours lovely

Prankz aka Sanju.Wink

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You are an awesome writer
Love reading your stories
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