Originally posted by: -DEATHmusic-Brilliant update thanx
Read all the chap in one go OMG! u had an overdose of me it seems!!
Manyata blurted out that she loved Uday when she was drunk was so cute yeah but now she doesnt remember anything
I know that Shreya is being a good friend but she is coming between Manveer😡 yeah, she is oblivious to what is written in the destiny
Update soon asap.
Originally posted by: catty2000Superb update Prankz 👏 thanx V
Loved it 😳 aww... m glad u loved itManveer scenes were cute ! glad u found them cuteUday is really sweet here ! as always. sweet n sour 😉Manyata's dialogues were a bit funny 😆 a bit only??Continue soon ... asapThnaks for the PM ! pleasure is all mine
thanx for the like n cumnt. best of luck fr 10thOriginally posted by: MAHI1198awesum
thanx
e ata tujhe exams pan sample... ho
now u can give updates quickly na... a bit 😛
awesum update once again... thanx!
uday's way too sweet... sweet n sour n sexy😉
and manyata is a seriously lovely girl... aww... she is a darling
loved it loads do pm me on next update... ofcourse i'll
aww.. thanx for such a beautiful appreciation. i am flattered😉😉 pleasure is all mine. thanx for the like n cumnt. u read everything in one go? i must appreciate! u had a overdose of me!Originally posted by: humairaa1Hey, u write lovely and I loved the whole concept as well as the chapters
Thanks for the pm 😊
thanx for the like n cumnt.Originally posted by: pia.rahaheyy u wrte lovelyy!!!!!!!! aww.. thanx! i am flattered manveer scnees were fab,and teh bst aprt was manyta in a drunken state in uday's car!!!!!!!!! lolz. glad u like dit shreya and uday's talk wa salso sweet!!!!!!!! aww.. so nice of you cnitnue soon!!!!!!!!! asap
Originally posted by: bushra..manveervery nyc awsome loved it glad u loved it
zabardast maza agaya lolz. thanx
update soon plzz... asap
i loved ur writting so awsome i am flattered
brilliant u r the sach a
good writter keep it up... thanx for the compliments!thanx for the like n cumnt
Originally posted by: ...navina...Awesome update Sanju. thanx navi Very interesting !!! aww.. glad u found it interesting Loved the beginning , when Uday was completing Manyata's sentences ... I thought it was really cute😳. only thought? didnt u reallt feel that it was cute?? A drunk Manyata was very entertaining😆 ... yeah, she can be very much at times can't believe she told Shreya to vacate the back-seat😉. she also had drunk a bit of mountain dew n had said to herself "aaj kuch toofani karte hain" It was a great update , thanxplease continue soon , asap... thanks for the PM😊. pleasure is all mine
Originally posted by: annesha18awesoem thanx
the come back update was too goodd aww.. glad uy like dit
manyat drunk and cionfeses her love for uday
was super cute thanx
wanna read more of it but sadly it all ends here
thc for the pm pleasure is all mine
do update asap yeah, just now
Originally posted by: -Zina-Awesome Wonderful Update!!👏
thanx
Loved it loads😊
aww... glad u loved it
Hayye i loved ManVeer moments😛
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Manyatas drunk confession 😳
aww... so nice of u
What is this shreya's problem Jealous😡
nah, she isnt getting jealous! she just doesnt know things...
Lol i was cracked 😆by manyata's dialogue of clearing the back seat😳
hahaa...
Too good update👏
i am flattered
please Update soon😃
asap
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Thanks for the PM.😳
pleasure is all mine
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