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You Hold My Heart- Arhi OS (Page 2)

Lavi_961 IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 13 November 2012 at 8:19am | IP Logged
Grt thought disha ji.. Loved it.. Thnx

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Posted: 13 November 2012 at 4:05pm | IP Logged
I'm so sorry i didn't comment before Disha...

But my oh my i have so much praise for you right now!
You have undeniably possibly created, in my eyes, the most beautiful re-telling of that moment between them.

You've prolonged it, tweeked it and made it so much more passionate then how it is originally portrayed in the show. Hats off to you completely! Clap

I just love how you've echoed Khushi's thought whilst she merely stared at his sleeping form... You made it seem do deep and precious - You've managed to illustrate the raw emotion that should have been there.

I keep repeating myself but it's honestly just that good.

AND THAT KISS! I have no words, that was just intense and oh-so passionate... A real Arnav and Khushi kiss Wink

I loved it the the core Disha! And I'm glad to know you'll be carrying this on!!!

And one final comment... I commend you on your song choice. Maroon 5 are my ultimate favourite! Hug

Fantastic Clap
Shay X

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Posted: 13 November 2012 at 5:37pm | IP Logged
simply brilliant.loved it'

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Posted: 14 November 2012 at 8:57pm | IP Logged
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Posted: 16 December 2012 at 6:36am | IP Logged
that was beautiful
loved it
looking forward to them dealing with sheetal
plz continue soon
take care

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Posted: 16 February 2013 at 8:21am | IP Logged
this is nice,Thumbs Up
do continue soon...Smile

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esk1990 Senior Member
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Posted: 18 February 2013 at 7:52am | IP Logged
wen s part 2 cmin up...???? wil u pm me...??? plz plz plz...???

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Posted: 04 May 2013 at 10:54pm | IP Logged
Ahhh I loved this!

It was just perfect <3

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