Pt2/3"Forbidden Fire(Devil's Tale)" Pg5/69 - Page 58

Annie di I just loved it... The feeling was just so intense and I felt I could visualize the entire scene infront of me I could also feel the emotions in the update... Really well written!!!! Love you 😊

superb update
love this devil too

nice part
what exactly maan is planning to do with geet
continue soon

Awesome update
Loved it
Haye maan kidnap geet for dinner date??
Poor geet is so scared...
Eagarly Waiting...
Continue soon

ek dham dhasu update diii
jus speechless hot n.passionate n.upar se devil difficult to handle
omg geet thinking abt fairytale hahaha
so he kidnapped her for the date :P haha devil se umeed b kya ki ja skta hy😳
im in.soo love with this devil ❤️

very nice part dear...

 It wasn't my fault that your wedding clashed with my plans. I am too mean to drop my plans for others."

OMG its another awesome part poor geet buri tarah phans gai Devil k chungal mein cant wait dear cont soon its going veryyy interesting loved the whole part awesome ,superb love u dear

amazing update..he kidnapped her jus 4 dinner..loved it

congrats for ur new thread