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Originally posted by shasha4ever

Hey Manish!!! Sorry yaar, im late... But tum ff continue karo, with Anish, Princi,etc etc.. Big smile

Thank you and all the best... For your ff...  Big smile
Waise, ff ka name is catchy...

you really dont need to be sorry dear..and ya abt continuing the ff I am writing it...will upload it once done...
and ya the name the credit goes to the original writer Chaichil Big smile
Thanx a lot for the comment Big smile

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Part 3: Kuch Kuch Hota Hein

Suvreen, Yuvraj and Diya drove back to Annie's place. On the way both Suvi and Yuvi were lost in the events that happened in the mall. They did not know how to face each other. They were thinking about their eyelock...the lady's comment on them, Diya calling them her parents, and so on...They were nervous...

They stared at each other but faced straight as soon as the other one caught them doing so...they pretended to be normal but then their their heart was on a roller coaster ride which did not allow them to behave normal...

They reached Annie's house...Suvreen had Diya sleeping on her lap...and she was finding it difficult to get off the Laila...Yuvi noticed her discomfort and said:

Yuvi: Rukh Topper..

Suvi stopped struggling...Yuvi got off the Laila and went towards Suvi's side...He gently picked Diya on his arms...Suvi got off the vehicle..while getting off she slightly sliped and went close to yuvi and Yuvi in a sudden reflex wrapped his arms around her waist to save her...they got lost in each other's eyes. While they were sharing this romantic moment they did not notice that Naro had come outside talking to someone on  her phone as she did not get signal inside. Seeing the two:

Naro: Suvi...yeh kya kar rahe ho thum? (with a naughty smile)

Suvi and Yuvi startle out.

Yuvi: Arey naro thum...wo kuch nahi topper bas fisal gayi thi tho isilie maine isko pakda..aur kuch bhi nahi...

Naro: acha tikh hein...waise mujhe laga ki mein kahi kabab mein haddi tho nahi ban rahi..? (she is in no mood to give up)

Yuvi and suvi feel embarrassed and slight red takes its nap on suvi's cheeks...

Suvi: Naro thum bhi na...bas kuch bhi kehthi rehthi ho?

Naro was about to continue with her teasing but her phone saved the two embarrassed souls...if the teasing would have continued for long then for sure Suvi would be painted red and Yuvraj would have to reconsider the name he gave her-Topper and change it to Tomato...

Naro picked the call and walked away from there...Suvi silently walked towards the entrance of Annie's house with Yuvraj following her carrying the doll Diya...

They enter and find that Annie, Rathie and Mannu had settled themselves in front of the home teather and were watching Kuch Kuch Hota Hein...Annie sees Yuvi and Suvi enter:

Annie: arey thum log aa gaye...aur yeh kya? Diya so gayi..yeh ladki bhi na...issne kuch kaya bhi nahi...

Yuvi: Thum kaho tho mein isse jaga loon (completely unaware about how to deal with kids)

Suvi: Kya pagal ho kya? So rahe bache ko bhi koi jagatha hein kya? Kudh ko cheetah bhulathe ho..lekin akal se tho bilkul gadhe ho...

That was it...after all how could Suvreen let go such an awesome chance of infuriating the cheetah..and how could cheetah take such an insult from the Topper...Their rantings begin...

Yuvi: dekh topper thu zyada bakh bakh math karo..samji?

Suvi: acha mein bakh-bakh kar rahi hoon...aur thum..ithna bhi nahi janthe ki ekh bache ko kaise sambalthe hein...

Yuvi: haan nahi pata mujhe...waise mein har roz kissi bache ka papa bane ka practice nahi karta tere saath...

Yes, unknowingly he had told a lot...but words once said cannot be taken back...now he had to find a way out...

Annie, Rathie and Mannu who had heard all this were shocked to hear what they had heard...Suvi was embarrassed and happenings in the mall all recollected...this time her heart was surely on a F1 race...Yuvi was thinking of how to keep the three wide open mouths closed...suddenly something strikes him..after all he is not that big a gadha as his topper had remarked him to be...

Yuvi:  Chal mein abhi issko room mein sula deta hoon...(he very well knew that suvi would also be the target to questions thus he decides to help her out as well)...topper mujhe tho pata hi nahi ki room kaha hein...tho chal mere saath dikha mujhe...

Suvi for the clever girl she is...understood very well to what yuvraj was hinting...they both silently walk off from there...the three were too shocked to notice this...

After the two had left..Naro enter after her talk with her parents in Assam...She comes and shakes the socked Annie...

Naro: arey thum theeno ko ho kya gaya?

Annie, Rathie and Mannu come out of their shocked world...

Annie (super excited) : Naro...thumhe pata hein kya hua?

Naro: nahi..

The four sit down with Annie narrating to Naro what had just happened...Kuch Kuch Hota Hein in the Background...

Yuvi and Suvi...enter the room Yuvraj slowly puts Diya on the bed...

Both are embarrassed does not know how to face the four chirping birds downstairs...more than that they do not how to face each other...Not wanting to go downstairs without a proper explanation...Yuvi walks to the balcony of the room..Suvi too follows him...

It was 8:00 clock and the place was lit with the enormous full moon...

Suvi: Yuvraj...ab hum kya kare..(she was slowly coming to herself)

Yuvi: Mein kya jaantha hoon..?? (he was a lil frustrated for what happened)

Suvi: acha thum nahi jaanthe (a lil irritated with Yuvi's reply)...tho kyun kaha thum ne aise...zara bolne se pehle soch bhi nahi skathe kya?

Yuvi: haan mein sochon..waise tab tho thu muje gadha keh rahi thi na tho main kaise soch skatha hoon bala (in a sacarstic tone)

Suvi: gadhe tho thum ho hi..

They continue with their never ending fight...they absolutely don't know where to romance...when they had to romance in this romantic night they fight...(but they are Yuvreen after all with the hidden romance in all their fights)...one thing is tho sure...kuch kuch hota hein...

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Hope you guys liked it..!!! Please do let me know how it is...Your comments do matter a lot for me...they provide the motivation that I require..!!!! And dont foget to hit on the like button if u it is worth to...Wink

 



Edited by Manish_Shetty - 15 November 2012 at 5:13am

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Posted: 14 November 2012 at 7:20am | IP Logged
AAye!!!..nice update manish!! good one bro Big smile

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Originally posted by akshayR

AAye!!!..nice update manish!! good one bro Big smile


thanx a lot bro..!!!! Big smile

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luvly update bhaiya luvd the title Embarrassed

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amazing update mani...loved ur way of writing...update soon

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nice update..continue soon!
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