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'DANGEROUS TEMPTATION" kr SS- sequel chp 5 pg 78 (Page 30)

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Posted: 19 December 2012 at 2:24am | IP Logged
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tere exam khatam nhi huye???

exams getting over on 21! kal updt milega! :)
yaay
 
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So guys heres the 6th chappy...i know bohot wait karavaya nah?? jhoote pheke math marna ha...here the update enjoy...

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                   Air of tension spread across the room,,,I was going here and there not knowing what i was doing..i unknowingly broke a vase which swayam preserved since childhood.."oh god! y do i have to screw up everything..!!" i muttered as swayam came in...he saw the broken pieces on the side table and said weakly.."did u? "...i replied a nod..looking down.."nevermind.." he said smiling..thank god i thought..and began.."u must go and sleep u look terrible...and the bite too.."

"i will survive drinking human blood...i just wanted to say that be carefull will going to get the elixir...okay...and what are u tensed about..?" he said

"i just...i dont...i am suddenly feeling so nervous,.." i said as he came forward..

"nervous about going with rey..?" swayam teased..and i hit him playfully.."come here" he said and pulled me into a warm hug..

"thanks i needed it.." i replied without breaking the hug..when HE interupted..

"kria save some time for romance after we come back..." he replied with the hands in his denim pockets and the look in his face...gosh is he jealous..?

"shut up" i replied pulling back..

We got into the car and he started driving..the ride was silent and seemed as if it was never going to end..i tried dictracting myself by looking at the beautiful scenery but coudnt help myself..i slowly saw in the rear view mirror and he was looking straight at me with those lovely eyes..there was not a blink and i was melting in his scrutiny...

"kriya.." he said..

"yeah??" i managed to say looking towards him..

"look am sorry i shudnt have attacked u guys.." he said with pleading eyes..

"i know u didnt do it on purpose...by the way i never expected an apology frm u " i said in a taunting way..

"apology from me? u shud be the one here to apologise..u killed my sister and compelled me!!" he shot back..

"why shud i?? u killed my parents..an...and...u bit swayam!!" i said raising my voice..

"u love swayam or me??" he replied with a smirk..

"i...um..i..." i stuggled to find an answer...of course i loved him...but i was falling short of words..

"look i care about him okay...he saved me so i owe him one too..and u-" before i could say a thing the car stopped with a horrible jerk..

"i guess the tyre got punchured.." he replied getting out of the car..and i sighed thanking god for interupting our convo..i slightly looked from the window and he was looking at the tyre.."what happened??" i asked...

"it got punchred and is stuck in the puddle of water.." he said..."can u press the accelerater...?" he asked...i replied nodding and he moved slightly aside so that i could accelerate..i pressed the accelarator and saw the puddle of water splash here and there...i got out of the car to see wat he was doing and to my surprise he was cover with muddly water.."oops" i replied and started running away from him at a human pace..he had a hand full of mud and he threw it on me.
"this is so not fair replied.." wiping some of it from my face and threw it at him..but he ducked and i missed my aim..

"what about this one..?" he said as i was trying to escape from him but he caught my wrist and spread it all over my hands...


"ew ew ew!!" replied pushing him in the puddling of water,,,and coudnt help but laugh at the sight..i quickly hid behind the car when he aimed at me...i scoped a hand full of it at him and it hit him right on his face...i was soo busy laughing that i didnt see him cuming he lifted me and i was gone...i was drenched wet and cover with mud all over...our most weirdest and the stupidest fight countinued for don't know how long..we finally stopped getting exhausted still laughing like retards.."hey do u hear that..?" i asked..

"hear what?" he said getting exicted..

"there is a lakes nearby...lets go.." i replied and we both set off to the lake...sometimes i wish i why wasnt i a vampire before...

there was huge lake and the air around us was purely fresh...and breathed in the fresh smelled...ah...how i loved those smell...i streched my arms slightly when i felt someone push me and there was i again...(-_-) drenched in water...

"what the hell rey!!" i said coming up to the surface...and stood in the water pouting..as he continued his laughter...

"wont you help me get out of this mess?" i said forwarding my hand with a smirk on my face..he forwarded his hand i pulled him into the water...

"now i am saying what the hell kriya?" he said coming upto the surface rubbing his eyes..i started splashing water and he enjoyed watching him getting wet...

"a revenge tale rey!! " i replied...with a wide grin and was about to get out of water when he caught my wrist and pulled me by my waist...i shivered at his touch..he slowly ran his hands over my bare arms sending tickling sensations aross my body..i gasped as he twisted his fingers on my jean's loops and caressed my half covered stomach..i coudnt help but let out a moan in pleasure..i caught his hand becoking him to stop and got out his grip but he wouldnt let me escape so easily... 

                                     he tilted me towards him raising his eyebrows in a questioning way and slightly moved the zipper of my top drawing random designs on my back...i stiffened at his touch...it was so magical...so different...as if i was experiencing this for the first time in my life...my thoughts were ultimately interupted when i felts his lips on mine...i cleched his hair tightly experiencing the new feeling while his hands did his work...he finally broke one of our finest kiss...and moved the hair falling on my nape aiming at them...gradually moved my hands on his chest which were bare as he kept the top buttons open..i was losing my senses,,.i wanted him badly...but i wanted him to stop...i loved him madly but i was falling short of words..i wanted to be in his arms but i was feeling nervous...i wanted to kiss him badly but i wanted everything to be slow with him...so that i could cherish each second to the fullest...he pulled and lifted my chin..

"shall we give this a try..?" he asked in his oh so sexy voice...i saw this as an opportunity to show my feeling which i had locked up since i got to knw he killed my parents but with a reson...without answering i crushed my lips against him and started exploring a new world,,,but had to pull back unwillingly..

"i take it as a yes" he said giving a sheepish smile...

we sat beside the lake resting on eachothers shoudler watching the round sun drown into darkness and the cresent moon emerged from it accompanied by twinkling stars which grew into a zillion...althought it appeared only few...

"lets put up a tent..and go to sleep.." he said breaking the silence..

"yeah right!...wait what?? tent??" i questioned

"yeah where will we sleep then..? there not even a single motel nearby.." he replied

"but i dont have a tent,,," i replied

"u can share it with me.." he said relying with a smirk..

"keep ur thoughts with u mr. reyansh.." i replied...

"what?? we are just going to sleep...what did u think ha?" he teased...

"stop it.." i said going blood red..

We both put up the tents and i dozed off dreaming about him...next moring we got up early suddenly remebering about our mission "SAVE SWAYAM"...we quickly packed out stuff but i felt weak..coz i didnt have blood since a long time

"hey do u want something.." he asked...

"no I'm fine...i just didnt hunt any animal for blood u see.." i replied in a tone of assuracne..

"i am so not gonna let u starve like this...here have my blood.." he said forwarding his wrist...

"what??? hell no!! and please keep ur wrist away from me or else you will end up with no blood.."

"u can compelle me..." he said winking...

"i will never ever make that mistake again...i can't afford to loose you rey.." i replied saying the truth controll my hunger..

"even i cant afford to loose u...so u stay here...i will get some blood for u okay??" he said smiling to which i nodded...

He went away to hunt some animal and i was getting bored...and was lazy enough to go with him...i stood up streching my arms when i felt someone's palm on my mouth and everything blacked out as i felt someone hit my head.

 

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"phew" finally updated! waiting for ur likes...:) enjoy winter! -much love
 


Edited by devilish11 - 20 December 2012 at 2:37am

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Posted: 20 December 2012 at 2:13am | IP Logged
me toh loving it...

ab kis villain ko ghusa diya tune?????

its going so good...

just loving it...

lake mein romance... mast!!!!!!

and finally a full fledged confession...

yayyy!!!!

awesome chapter...


Edited by kriyansh24 - 20 December 2012 at 2:32am

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Posted: 20 December 2012 at 2:22am | IP Logged
awsum update thanx for d pm

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Posted: 20 December 2012 at 2:38am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kriyansh24

me toh loving it...

ab kis villain ko ghusa diya tune?????

its going so good...

just loving it...

lake mein romance... mast!!!!!!

and finally a full fledged confession...

yayyy!!!!

awesome chapter...
 
Thanku Thanku! :D
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Originally posted by Pinkpearly

awsum update thanx for d pm
 
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Posted: 20 December 2012 at 2:52am | IP Logged
good it is... update res of the chapter soon...

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Originally posted by sweetydiyafrien

good it is... update res of the chapter soon...
 
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