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'DANGEROUS TEMPTATION" kr SS- sequel chp 5 pg 78 (Page 12)

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Posted: 21 November 2012 at 11:10am | IP Logged
Wow . . . . Dat was so damn interesting Big smile
kriya ko yahan Rey jo mil gaya . . . . & wat a surprise - swayam bhi Hug
he seemed genuinly interested in her. . . . . But ye to bahot purana love lagta hai . . . . . Wink
their kiss in the prom & his love confession . . . . Shocking for her Stern Smile
gosh . . . . He's a crazy lover . . . . . Uski family ko maar diya Angry
wat a confusion Confused

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Posted: 21 November 2012 at 11:38am | IP Logged
woohh this was freakn awsm..

m loving it...

its getting more interesting...

rey is a warewolf..

first i thought k he's also a vampire..

but no..

n he killed her parents n sis...

why??

n kriya stabbed him...

ab kya hoga..

jaldi se update next part..

thnx 4 the pm...

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Posted: 21 November 2012 at 12:15pm | IP Logged
Awsome update ..!
Loved it ..!
Thanks 4 d pm ..!
Update soon ..!

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Posted: 21 November 2012 at 1:47pm | IP Logged
I read all d chapters today itself n I loved dem all..
I hold a great interest in these vampires n werewolf thingy.. I love readin stuff lik dis n urs is mind blowing.. So now kriya's a vampire n swayam.. He turned hr into a vamp.!
Probably..when she met wid dat accident.. D guy she was tokin abt durin tht drive is Reyaansh only.. N I really loved how u showed kriya's urge of blood coz she hs jus turnd into a vamp n its jus nt pissible to control ur urge in such less time.. It made a sense!
So nw she's in california n here she meets swaron n Reyaansh.. Umm I guess.. Swayam n all r responsibl fr dis sudden transfr of kriya's aunt.. They all knows something which kriya isnt aware off..
Oh.. She feels connected to Reyaansh.. It hd to hpn re!
Bt Reyaansh isnt a vamp bt a warewolf who murdered kriya's parents n sis.. Bt for some reason? Bt wht reason?? Umm is sharon too a werewolf???
Bt whts dis.. Kriya hit Reyaansh wid a wooden Stake n thr he was on ground all in pain.. Hoh.. Now wht???
Probably now swaron wud tell her d trith o somethn..
Btw whos dat gal.. D one abt whom krisha interactd.. Out of all only she got mentioned..
Kuch connection toh ho gya ya phr mera dimag kuch zada e chl rha h..

Really excited to know whts nxt..
N u'v done a brilliant job till now..
N as othrs.. I too loved d banner.. Its freakin awesome.. Prfectly goin wid d story..!

Sowie fr d late comment n tnx fr d pm :)

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Posted: 22 November 2012 at 3:24am | IP Logged
Mindblowing part
lovd it.

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Posted: 22 November 2012 at 3:30am | IP Logged
awesome ...
loved it..
 

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Posted: 22 November 2012 at 4:57am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Pihu.k11

I read all d chapters today itself n I loved dem all..
I hold a great interest in these vampires n werewolf thingy.. I love readin stuff lik dis n urs is mind blowing.. So now kriya's a vampire n swayam.. He turned hr into a vamp.!
Probably..when she met wid dat accident.. D guy she was tokin abt durin tht drive is Reyaansh only.. N I really loved how u showed kriya's urge of blood coz she hs jus turnd into a vamp n its jus nt pissible to control ur urge in such less time.. It made a sense!
So nw she's in california n here she meets swaron n Reyaansh.. Umm I guess.. Swayam n all r responsibl fr dis sudden transfr of kriya's aunt.. They all knows something which kriya isnt aware off..
Oh.. She feels connected to Reyaansh.. It hd to hpn re!
Bt Reyaansh isnt a vamp bt a warewolf who murdered kriya's parents n sis.. Bt for some reason? Bt wht reason?? Umm is sharon too a werewolf???
Bt whts dis.. Kriya hit Reyaansh wid a wooden Stake n thr he was on ground all in pain.. Hoh.. Now wht???
Probably now swaron wud tell her d trith o somethn..
Btw whos dat gal.. D one abt whom krisha interactd.. Out of all only she got mentioned..
Kuch connection toh ho gya ya phr mera dimag kuch zada e chl rha h..

Really excited to know whts nxt..
N u'v done a brilliant job till now..
N as othrs.. I too loved d banner.. Its freakin awesome.. Prfectly goin wid d story..!

Sowie fr d late comment n tnx fr d pm :)
 
Woah it surprising for me...itna bada comment! how sweet of u! LOL
 
rey killed kriya's parents because...suspense hai next upt mein malum padega :P

the gal who krisha mention was just some random gal..nothing else
 
And yeah Thank youu for the comment and like! :D
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Posted: 22 November 2012 at 6:15am | IP Logged
nice...:) very intrsting...:) thanxxx 4 pm

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