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Posted: 11 years ago

lovely part jasmine...👏

continue soon...

thanx for pm! 😊

Edited by abhiyarockz - 11 years ago
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very nice update ...
thanks for the pm ...
please update soon ...
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How will i live without you? Part 10








Kkusum is cleaning Heer's room.She finds a cover.She opens it and sees her pregnancy report.She is shocked.Heer enters the room and is shocked to see the trembling Kkusum.
H:Mummy!
Kkusum slaps her.
K:You are spoilt.This is the culture i taught you?
Tears are flowing from Heer's eyes.
H:Mummy...i did'nt do it purposefully.I was...
Abhay comes:What happened?Why are you shouting Kkusum?
Kkusum gives him the report.Abhay is shocked.He is weak.
A:I was prowd of my daughters.You made it big in the fashion world without compromising your value.Then how did it happen now?
Heer cries:I'm sorry daddy...
She falls at his feet.Abhay is trying to control his tears.
Abhay makes her get up:Don't worry.You are my daughter and i will never ignore you.I will always support you.Anyways you both are getting married soon.Kkusum...be calm.
Kkusum tries to control herself.

Prem rings up Kunal:Hi Kunal...how are you?
K:Fine yaar..
P:Tonight there is a couple's party at Sreeragh hotel.I and Heer are going.Why don't you guys join us.
K:Sure.Why not?

Kunal is waiting for Nimmo to come.
K:Nimmo...get ready fast...Ladies take so much of time to dress up.
Kunal is stunned to see Nimmo in a stylish cream frock which has black designs on it.Her bouncy hair,grey eye shadow and the black dangling earrings make her attactive.
K:Nimmo!
Suddenly Nimmo vanishes.
K:It was just an imagination.
Nimmo comes.She has worn a cream saree with sleeveless blouse.Her earrings are very long.She looks hot.Kunal can't take his eyes off her.
N:Kunal..why are you staring at me like this?
K:Nothing.
He thinks:For the first time i'm seeing Nimmo's beauty.Till now my eyes were blind.

They reach the hotel.They meet Prem and Heer.Heer has worn a white frock which has dark pink flowers on it.She has worn a tiny hairband also.She looks like pretty doll.
The press media appears before Heer and Prem.
"Famous model Heer...is it true that you are going to tie the knot with your boyfriend?"
H:Yes.We are getting married.
Heer and Prem smile at each other.
Heer's interview's live telecast is there on tv.

The song 'Dekha Teri Mast Nigahon Mein...' from the film 'Khiladi'.Kunal and Nimmo are so involved in their dance that they keep looking at each other's eyes.?Prem is enjoying.Heer is distracted.Her eyes are on Nimmo and Kunal.Because Kkusum's words about Prem being Nimmo's first love is haunting her.
Suddenly a guy behind pulls Nimmo's saree.
Nimmo is scared:Ah!
K:What happened?
N:That guy tried to pull my saree.
Kunal beats him.
N:Kunal...no...
K:No Nimmo...i have to protect you.I can't stand if anyone tries to defame your dignity.
That guy beats Kunal.
Nimmo is scared:No...
Prem beats the other guy.
Kunal's forehead is bleeding.Nimmo is upset and she stares at the other guy.That guy goes away.She wipes the blood with her saree.
N:Why did you allow youself to be hurt?Why did you fight with him?
K:Because he tried to...
N:Why are you bothered about that?That is hurting you physically.
K:I don't care about that.I want to protect you.That is my responsibility.
N:How can i be your responsiblity?Why do you care for me?
K:I agree that we are a couple only infront of others.But you are my best friend.Infact the only sincere friend i have.
Prem and Heer are shocked.
P:Strange!Their romance was just a drama.I can't believe it.
Heer is melting.
She thinks:That means Nimmo loves Prem now also?Her marriage with Kunal was a sacrifice for me?Because of me,Nimmo lost her love.She is leading a life with pretence now.
Heer is upset.

Kunal is tired.Nimmo bandages his forehead.He falls asleep.She sits near him and caresses his hair and forehead.
N:Poor Kunal...he suffered a lot for me.

Nimmo is standing near the window.
'Nimmo!'
She turns back.Kunal is standing there.
N:You woke up so fast?
K:Ya..
Nimmo tries to tie her hair.
K:Leave it like that.Your pony tail is cute.But when you keep your hair lose you look more beautiful.
She leaves her hair open.He goes closer to her.He caresses her face.
Nimmo is shocked:What are you doing Kunal?
K:You asked me why i care for you.I thought about that.I got an answer also.I wanted to tell that soon.Otherwise i will lose my peace of mind.Because i love you Nimmo.
Nimmo is shocked:What?
K:Yes,i love you Nimmo.I believe in love.Love is a beautiful feeling.I feel that when i'm with you.
Kunal stands very control to Nimmo.Nimmo is losing her control.Her emotions burst out.
N:I too love you Kunal.
He is surprised.They both smile at each other.
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
heer is pregnent.. hope premeer get married soon...
luv kunal's confession
pls cont soon
thnx for pmEdited by kiran_28 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi..hav just caught up with all part..
srry i was nusy with clg stuff and missed this..
amazing ff dear..
update soon..
thanks for pms 
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Posted: 11 years ago
Jasmine 🤗

part 9
Beach scene and then at the party are really sweet
Dada ji is a cool guy 😎
Nimmo Kunal are cute - love the friendship they share.
PH are v. cute.
aww Heer cried - it's really sad she got upset.
Glad Prem took care of her and made her smile again 😃
Heer's mom suspecting that something is wrong is interesting.

part 10
wow emotional outburst from Heer's parents is understandable but wish they didn't scare Heer 😕
Her having enough sense finally is a good thing. Glad he said he'll support her.
Prem inviting Kunal to go to the party is cool
Hehe PH bombarded by the press 😆 Glad they survived it.
Kunal standing up for Nimmo is v. sweet.
Sigh Heer mistakes the relationship Kunal and Nimmo shares.
wow finally both Kunal and Nimmo confessed their love and are ok.
Lets see what is up with PH world and hope Heer remains calm.

Thank you. Great updates.👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow... kunal confessed to nimmo and heer parents know about her pregnancy... looking forward to know what happens next
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very nice update ...
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How will i live without you? Part 11






Kunal is wearing his shirt.Nimmo enters the room.Kunal looks at her.She is shy to face him.
K:Nimmo...come and put buttons for me.
N:Why you can't wear it by yourself?
He pulls her towards him.His forehead is touching her forehead.
K:I can...but only if you put it for me i will be satisfied.
She blushes.She is putting the buttons for him.They both are smiling.
K:Now i'm satisfied.
Nimmo and Kunal giggle.
N:Come early..there is a party in my house.
K:Sure..

Heer goes to Abhay and Kkusum.
H:I want to tell you an important thing.
They are anxious to hear it.
H:I don't want to marry Prem.
They are shocked.
A:After all the arrangements are made..why are you talking like this?
K:Prem is not good?
H:I don't love him.That's all.
K:What?After bearing his baby you are saying that you don't love him?
H:I don't want to talk anything more.
She leaves the room.Kkusum cries:What happened to this girl?
Abhay comforts her:Don't cry..what is the use of crying?

Party...
Nimmo wears a grand green saree with green stone gold ornaments.Kunal is flattered.
K:You are looking gorgeous.
She smiles.
Prem is waiting for Heer.Heer comes along with a stylish guy.She has worn a blue party wear.
N:That is Yudi...Heer's childhood friend.

Heer walks as if Prem is not present there.She sips wine.
Prem goes near her:It is not good for our baby.
H:Our baby?Now onwards it is Yudi's baby.
Prem is shocked:What?
H:I realised that you are a loser.You may be a good officer.But not rich like a successful business man.so i decided to abort the baby and concentrate on my career.So that i can make a lot of money.
Prem is shocked.He pulls her towards him.His eyes are wet.Heer controls herself.
P:How can you think of killing our baby?
H:I met Yudi.He is rich.He is willing to accept my baby also.So no abortion.
Heer moves away.Prem is numb.
Heer announces:This party is to inform everyone that i'm getting married to my sweetheart Yudi.
Nimmo and Kunal are shocked.Nimmo goes near Kkusum:What is this mom?
Kkusum is silent.She goes near Abhay.
A:Don't ask me anything.
She goes near Heer:What is this Heer?What about Prem?
Heer ignores Nimmo and walks away.
Yudi:Yudi..how did you guys decide to get married?
Yudi looks down silently.
The song 'Labon Ko..'{Bhool bhulaiya} is played.Kunal-Nimmo and Yudi-Heer dance.Prem can't tolerate it anymore.He leaves the place.

Nimmo is sitting in her room with a sad face.Kunal sits near her:Nimmo!
N:I can't understand anything Kunal.What happened to Heer?Poor Prem.
K:Nimmo..let us leave everything to fate and destiny.It decides ou life.Look at our life.Did we ever thought that we will fall in love with each other?
He caresses her hair and comforts her.

Prem is thinking of Heer and singing with pain:

Tere bin main yun kaise jiya
kaise jiya tere bin
lekar yaad teri raaten meri kati
mujhse baaten teri karti hai chaandani
tanha hai tujh bin raaten meri
din mere din ke jaise nahi
tanha badan tanha hai ruh nam meri aankhen rahe
aaja mere ab rubaru
jeena nahi bin tere
tere bin main yun kaise jiya
kaise jiya tere bin...{Bas ek pal}.

Heer is weeping in her room.She thinks:Because of me Nimmo lost her love.Now she is forced to live with someone whom she does'nt love.I have to return her true love.