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Posted: 12 January 2013 at 2:50am | IP Logged
waiting 4 more fun di
continue soon.

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Hey ...
The part was great ...
Very funny indeed ..
Loved it ...
Riya understands Arjun soo well ..
Cont. soon ...

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haha! arjun scared to go on roller coaster ride! amusing but understandable after reading abt his past experience! poor thing... well on the bright side.. we got to see that riya cared for him more so she backed out of her plan... haha! riya asking him to sing a song for her and he sang a patriotic song! onii arjun can do that! haha! please update soon! can't wait to read more! already looking forward to the next update already!

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tina :

first of all, a big thank you for not quitting this FF. and regarding the FF, it wasnt boring at all, in fact it had me in splits when riya ordered arjun to sing and he immediately started Nanha Munna Rahi LOL..reminded me of the scene from SRK's Main Hoon Na ..waise now since riya had ordered him to sing a romantic song, which song wil it beWink ? update soon,


ps : why not change it to riya singing for arjun "yeh ladka haye allah kaisa hai deewana " and someone from the team overhears themWink ? kaisa rahega Wink? too bad Ouch? okay then continue with your own ideas.Smile

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a big thanks to all those who have liked my update
and also a big thanks for such lovely commentsWink

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Chapter 11

"Theek hein," Arjun said after some time, "since you are taking me as a juke box, you have any special song for me to sing," Arjun asked sarcastically.

"Yes, i have," Riya beamed at him.

Arjun didnt believe that he was going to sing a song, that too for a girl.  His male ego was really hurting inside.  But his pride at not accepting defeat made him agree to the song.  After all he was the great ACP, who wasn't scared of anything or anyone, what's with a small song.  He however didnt know what song Riya was going to make him sing.  If he even had a hint, he wouldn't have felt so confident anymore.

Riya looked at him and thought what would be the perfect song that she could make Arjun sing for her.  Finally she had the perfect song.  She didnt say it loudly, went near to him and whispered it in his ears.  And immediately rushed away from him and took a seat again on the bench waiting for Arjun to start.

Arjun was a bit surprised when Riya had come and whispered something in his ears.  But the biggest shock had been the song Riya had chosen.  He was very angry and was going to refuse to sing it, but he stopped himself from saying anything.  He knew he would be wasting his time arguing with Riya.  Since all the time they had spent together, he knew just how stubborn Riya could be, and once she had decided something, no one could stop her not even him.  But how can he sing something like that.  He looked around to see if there was anyone near.  It was humiliating even singing that song to her, and having an audience would have been even worst on him.

He closed his eyes and started to sing:

Dil mera har baar yeh sunne ko bekarar hai..
Kaho na pyar hai
Kaho na pyar hai
Haan tumse pyar hai
Ke tumse pyar hai

In pyaari baaton mein anjana ikraar hai
Kaho na pyar hai
Kaho na pyar hai
Kaha na pyar hai
Kaha na pyar hai

Pyaar jahan mein hota nahi, phir bolo kya hota

Pyaar jahan mein hota nahi, phir bolo kya hota

Duniya mein dil koi kabhi na dadkha hota

Dadkha hai dil, aa yaar mil, yeh pyar ka izhaar hai
Kaho na pyar hai
Kaho na pyar hai

He couldn't sing more than this, his self-esteem wouldn't let him do more than that.

Kaha na pyar hai
Kaha na pyar hai

                           

He opened his eyes to see who had sung the last part.  Riya nodded her head in a negative way and asked him to look on his right side.  He turned and saw a mother and her small daughter looking at him with amused eyes.  It was the small girl who had finished the song for him.  He felt so embarrassed that he didnt know where to look and wanted to hide himself somewhere.

The woman was looking with a smile on her face at Arjun, turned towards Riya and said, "Bahut lucky ho? Mera husband to kitna unromantic hein! Ab jaldi se hain boldo, mat tarpaho ousse!" saying that she went away with her daughter. 

Arjun took a breath of relief, but little did he know that his misery had just started.  He looked on his left side and was shocked to see an even more shocked Rathore there and looking at him.

(Rathore is married in my story)

Rathore had reached home, only to find his wife angry with him.  He had promised to take her out, but like always he had forgotten about it.  He pulled his ears and asked sorry to her, and when she had agreed, he finally had taken her all to the nearest amusement park.  Little did he know that he would receive the biggest shock of his life in this park.  When he had just entered, he had seen Riya and Arjun in the crowd.  But then he had thought that maybe he was mistaken since Riya and Arjun could hardly be together and that too in a park.  But after walking for some time, he had heard someone singing that song.  The voice resembled so much to that of Arjun that he had to go and find out.  And what he had seen and heard was too much for him to digest.  He asked his wife to pinch him, because he felt that he was dreaming.

But it was the truth.  His most stubborn and undisciplined second hand was in a park, singing "Kaho na Pyaar hain" to one of his co-workers Riya. Rathore continued staring with disbelief for a long time, but he was too shocked to say anything, so he just turned and grabbed his laughing wife and went away from here.

"Yeh kya hogaya? Rathore ne mujhe dek liya? Ab mein kya karoon," Arjun was thinking when he heard a chuckle.

He turned towards that sound and glared at Riya.  But Riya was finding all this too funny, and finally she exploded with laughter. 

"Bechara Arjun ab phaas gaya," she thought to herself.

 

Thats all for today, so how was it???

Tell? Tell??

No precap


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Edited by haruhi26 - 14 January 2013 at 7:57am

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Posted: 14 January 2013 at 8:22am | IP Logged
Not only.. even i am out of my breath from laughing.. can't stop my tears.. OMG!!! Just Imagine Rathore .. saw arjun singing "Kaho na pyaar hain" song to riya.. ROFL..

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Posted: 14 January 2013 at 8:32am | IP Logged
wow...i just cant stop laughing aftr reading this part...it s too nice...
so rathod s married and also he saw arjun.nw wat next...
no i dont want arjun to scold riya.
bt definetly want rathod to tease arjunWink

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