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LOL I loved that tit for tat from Arjun, fabulous that he is not relaxing and playing jokes on her too.
 
It was not boring at all, in fact I really enjoyed it, most especially the end part. Update soon.
 
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without wasting anytime,please find the next chapter for this story
Hope you all like it and appreciate it as the previous ones.

Chapter 6

Arjun had just finished the massage, when someone knocked on the door.  "I'll check it out, perhaps the pizza has just arrived!" Arjun said and went away. He returned within a few minutes with the pizza.  He sat down on an adjoining sofa, and started eating, but Riya wasn't eating all.

Arjun looked at her sceptically, and asked why she wasn't eating.

She was looking at him eating the pizza, and thought how it would feel to have him feed her by his own hands.  And when Arjun asked her why she wasn't eating, she said that she'd only eat if Arjun feeds her with his hands without thinking.

"What? You want me to feed you! Koi dood peeti bachi ho kya? Ki main tumhe apne hant se khana kilaoun!" Arjun said with frustration.

"Mr. Arjun you don't have the right to say no!" Riya reminded him. Finally, though with lots of grudges against Riya, Arjun fed her some pizza till Riya was no longer hungry.

Riya murmured a thank you.

"Did you say anything?" Arjun asked.

"I said Thank You for feeding me," Riya said with a smile.  Arjun was mesmerised with her smile, and both shared an eyelock for sometime, when suddenly Arjun's mobile started ringing.

Arjun took out his mobile and saw that Rathore was calling, he asked Riya to remain silent, and answered the call.

"Hain Rathore,bolo kya hein?" Arjun asked.

"Arjun, we have just been assigned a case! A body was discovered in a hotel room. And the body apparently belongs to a certain Mr Sathi, and he was the commissioner friend and he requested us to check it," Rathore said. He gave Arjun the address and asked him to inform Riya and bring her with him.

Arjun cut the call and informed Riya about the case.

"Oh no, what will she do now? As it was her time with Arjun was limited, now the case!" Riya thought sadly.

"Kya hua? Why are you looking so sad?" Arjun asked, though he already knew the reason.

"Ab chalein?" Arjun asked.

Riya asked him for some minutes, and went to change her dress to a jeans and pink top. They both took the bike till Arjun's house, and from there, they took the SUV to go towards the hotel.  Though for Riya her work was her prayer, she was still sad that the hours she had with Arjun would now be used for the case solving.  Her mood was off, and so put on some music.  When she put on the radio on, the song "bheege hont tere" from the movie Murder was playing.  Arjun looked at Riya and then quickly turned off the radio. That song made him want to kiss Riya, and he was shocked at his thoughts, hence had immediately turned off the radio.

"I wanna listen to some music.  You should not forget that you are still supposed to accept everything that i say," Riya reminded him.  Hopefully this time when she switched on the radio there was an old song playing. 

(Please go to this link for the song: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_rrSAD3p4aY)

Kyaa Yehi Pyaar Hai
Haan Yehi Pyaar Hai
Ho Dil Tere Bin Kahin Lagataa Nahin
Vakt Guzarataa Nahin

Alternately Riya and Arjun were looking at each other.  When Riya looked at him, Arjun was concentrating on the road, and when Arjun was looking at Riya, Riya was looking outside.  Neither managed to see the depth of love which was visible in their eyes for their partner.

Kyaa Yehi Pyaar Hai
Haan Yehi Pyaar Hai
Ho Dil Tere Bin Kahin Lagataa Nahin
Vakt Guzarataa Nahin

Arjun and Riya started to remember all their times spent together since the day they had met when Sheen had been kidnapped.
Pahale Main Samajhaa Kuchh Aur Vajah In Baaton Ki
Lekin Ab Jaanaa Kahaan Nind Ga_Ii Meri Raaton Ki
Jaagati Rahati Huun Main Bhi Chaand Nikalataa Nahin
Dil Tere Bin Kahin Lagataa Nahin
Vakt Guzarataa Nahin
Kyaa Yehi Pyaar Hai

Riya thought that if only she had a chance with Arjun.  She knew that she was too far gone in his love to ever be able to live without him.  While Arjun was thinking that he was not worth Riya, he promised himself to look for a good boy for Riya.

Kaise Bhuuluungi Tuu Yaad Hameshaa Aaegaa
Tere Jaane Se Jinaa Mushkil Ho Jaaegaa
Ho Ab Kuchh Bhi Ho Dil Pe Koi Zor To Chalataa Nahin
Dil Tere Bin Kahin Lagataa Nahin
Vakt Guzarataa Nahin
Kyaa Yehi Pyaar Hai
Jaise Phuulon Ke Mausam Men Ye Dil Khilate Hain
Premi Aise Hi Kyaa PatajhaD Men Bhi Milate Hain
Rut Badale Duniyaa Badale Pyaar Badalataa Nahin
Dil Tere Bin Kahin Lagataa Nahin
Vakt Guzarataa Nahin
Kyaa Yehi Pyaar Hai

When the song ended, both had tears in their eyes.  Riya looked outside to wipe her tears, and Arjun also wiped his tears with his hands.  Both were so engrossed in their pain and love that Arjun failed to see tears in Riya's eyes and vice-versa.

After that song, Arjun no longer had any courage to hear any other romantic songs, so he switched off the radio and prepared himself mentally to prevent and refuse Riya to put on the radio again.  However, Riya just kept silent and didnt fight with him over this.  That last song had shook Riya to her core, she herself was no longer in any mood for any romantic songs.

Precap:

"Happy birthday," Rathore said.

She wondered how he knew that it was her birthday today.

 so how was it?

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Edited by haruhi26 - 09 December 2012 at 4:29am

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