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Posted: 07 December 2012 at 10:15am | IP Logged
That was great update Tine...
Enjoyed it!

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Posted: 07 December 2012 at 10:47am | IP Logged
omg he poured water on her head...LOL

He is messaging her head too...i guess she will never have a headache up till years...he he..

I am waiting for remaining hours...

nice update

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Posted: 07 December 2012 at 11:35am | IP Logged
Just beautiful...
 
 
Aisa laga jaise serial dekh rhi hue.

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Posted: 07 December 2012 at 11:40am | IP Logged
No, no, Tina, you do not have to worry  about this chapter at all. You have a flair for gentle comedy, and that is exactly what the doctor ordered! It is good to see that Arjun has a sense of fun, which was possibly  a subterranean trait till now, and can joke about massaging Riya's throat!

Shyamala Aunty

Originally posted by haruhi26

and finally the Chapter 5
This part wont contain much comedy, so please bear with me and read it.Embarrassed

Chapter 5

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Posted: 07 December 2012 at 11:50am | IP Logged
OMG Tina...

amazing work...i like d part where u wrote abt Arjun realizing his feeling for Ria

i loved d scene wen he actually poured water on her

n ria After wat he did ...she was  still concerned abt d lady who gave her makeup which was not water-proofLOL

sorry for a late comment ...Embarrassed

par i guess...mujhe yeh update dikhi nahiCry

Continue soonSmile

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Posted: 07 December 2012 at 7:06pm | IP Logged
Wow...amazing

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Posted: 07 December 2012 at 7:42pm | IP Logged
First i say sorry for late comment
this is my one of fav ss
so i wana to read this in free time
now come to yr ss
it was lvly dr
i cant imegine Arjun massage riya
opps poor arjun
kuch or to nahi dabana m'am
hehehe lved it
n throw water
bechari ko dubara nehla diya
n uska compari chudel se
mind blowing no one can thoght like that
again sorry
n plz plz conti soon i wana to know what hapeen next
u made my day
thank for this lvly ss

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Posted: 07 December 2012 at 7:55pm | IP Logged
omg  realy  realy  wonderful  update!
arjun  became  naughty!
arjun  ko  bhi  kya   chance  mila  riya  ke  head  massage  kar  ne  ka!ROFL
continue  soon  dear!!!!!!!ClapHeart

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