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Posted: 17 November 2012 at 7:18am | IP Logged
super awesome dear...Thumbs Up

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Posted: 17 November 2012 at 9:43am | IP Logged
OMG! You finally continued! I was thinking when you're gonna continue.
Thanks for the PM <3


Edited by desigirl1 - 17 November 2012 at 9:43am

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Posted: 17 November 2012 at 12:54pm | IP Logged
Dear Tina,

I am very pleased that you have managed to make this chapter funny while avoiding the ridiculous. It is nicely balanced now. I particularly liked Riya's cheeky retort: "Yes, how intelligent you are that you guessed it on your own. To chale? And yep smile please," which captures the spirit of the whole exercise perfectly.

If I were Arjun and wanted to get my own back for being not just dragged into the mandir, but also forced to touch the pujari's feet,  I would burn the toast, turn the scrambled eggs into a hard, indigestible mess, and water the orange juice to a Tang-like consistency. After all, Riya has said nothing about the breakfast being edible!Wink

Shyamala Aunty

[QUOTE=haruhi26]thanks to everyone for their wonderful ideas, will try to use most of them and please enjoy this ride...
It's only meant to be funny, and hope everyone like itEmbarrassed
Sorry i know i havent been able to comment on any other friends stories, havent got much time lately, but i promise i will do it laterEmbarrassed
So let's not bore you people anymore, so here's Chapter 2:

Chapter 2


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Posted: 17 November 2012 at 8:14pm | IP Logged
so funny... like it
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Posted: 18 November 2012 at 7:17am | IP Logged
Bechara Arjun...
 
Ab pta nahi 24 hrs kya kya karna padega... LOL
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Posted: 18 November 2012 at 10:43am | IP Logged
i couldn't stop myself from laughing out loud.Big smileBig smile

so nice of riya

liked arjun's reaction

waiting for more
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Posted: 18 November 2012 at 11:03am | IP Logged
Super cool update dear...bechaara Rawte...yeh kahaan phas gaya??

i liked the blessings from the priest...i guess that was part of her plan too...lol 
loved it...want to know how Arjun prepares her breakfast!!! 
cont soon...
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Posted: 18 November 2012 at 8:16pm | IP Logged
Lol wat a precap...arjun vl do all dis!!!dats really grt...awsum updt...plz pm me when u updt nxt...

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