Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain


Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain
Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain

SO A Painful Story

indian10 Goldie

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Posted: 11 November 2012 at 4:50pm | IP Logged
Hello friends I have come back with a brand new story and predication for the future. It will be a conversation between Swamini Bua and Jeevika after Bua ji has accepted Karan as her son.

So this how it goes Swamini bua watch karan fell of to sleep peaceful as she strokes his hair gently crying remember all those years she been incomplete without him and there not been a day where she has not missed him.

Bua ji had not had dinner that day as she found difficult that the most person she love and trusted the most betrayed her, and that was he own father. Who always talked about truth and honest but he had betrayed his own daughter by keep her own son away from her due to the fact that her father did not like the person she feel in love with as he was poor and had not status. Dadji bua ji father believed that the boy Swamini bua fell in love with was just after her money so he did what was best for her his daughter by keep her away from that man and anything to do with him.

Bua ji finish putting karan to bed, she went to her rocking chair and thought everything that happen past few days and cried in pain. When Jeevika walk in with the tray of food.

Jeevika knot on the door and said " Can I come in." But Bua ji did not respond, so Jeevika had knocked again but still no response. Then Jeevika walk in with the tray of food and notice Bua ji carrying Dadji photo and holding tight and crying in pain.

Jeevika went and put the tray of food on the table and went up to Bua ji and put her hand on the shoulder to comfort her. Swamini Bua felt something and she turn around and notice it was Jeevika. Swamini bua was so emotional she just gave Jeevika a hug and cry. Jeevika could understand Bua ji pain of losing a baby as she loss her baby few months back but the different Bua ji got her child back. Jeevika silent comforted Bua ji as she calm down. One thing Jeevika understood why Bua ji was so upset why she adopted her to save Maanvi as she went through of losing a baby after given birth. Jeevika thought to herself "all this time I thought you where stone hearted but actual fact there so much pain inside you Bua ji you kept all inside you." Jeevika silent held bua ji in arm until she was ready to talk and break her silence.

To be continue...

Edited by indian10 - 11 November 2012 at 4:51pm

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afreenkansal Goldie

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Posted: 11 November 2012 at 8:22pm | IP Logged
very good
continue soon
sanjana_cool IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 11 November 2012 at 8:31pm | IP Logged
it's awesome!!
plz continue and pm me!
radzzz123 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 11 November 2012 at 9:09pm | IP Logged
good start
continue soon
and do pm me when u write next

wish u a safe and happy diwali
SJ6... Goldie

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Posted: 11 November 2012 at 9:17pm | IP Logged
great start pm me wen u update nxt.. x
kusharberry IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 12 November 2012 at 9:53am | IP Logged
Smile good start please pm me when u updateClapStar
vaiku Senior Member

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Posted: 12 November 2012 at 12:30pm | IP Logged
Too good! Cant wait for the rest! post soon! 
pinky.padda IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 12 November 2012 at 5:30pm | IP Logged
superb start cannot wait please pm me when you update thanks

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