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RaYa OS:"O Re Piya.."(KC Special) Part 3 on Pg 7 (Page 7)

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Posted: 14 November 2012 at 5:25am | IP Logged
Awwiiie Pallavi! Clap What an OS!! I think you should make it not 3 but 30 parts atleast and take us through RaYa Karva Chowth and Diwali...we dont mind Christmas as well.
 
Kitni acchi likhi ho yaar,...fantastic creativity.Star  The candle, the power off, the blouse hook...ufff!!!
Ab third part ke liye wait mat karao please...
 
Ab problem ho gaya ki hum itna hi pyara expect karne lagenge in the show...aur EK tho itna accha nahi dikhayegi. Confused
 
Good job dear!!
 
-Arathi Narayan

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Posted: 14 November 2012 at 5:34am | IP Logged
Thats was awesome... Ye pura hook wala part kab dhekne ko milega pata nahi... Eagerly waiting for the next.. Loukar update kar tai...
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Posted: 14 November 2012 at 5:40am | IP Logged
Thanks for liking the 2nd part..Here goes the last part.. :)
 
                                                                 Part 3:-
 
She cannot believe what she's seeing..Its Ram in front of her.Wearing a golden Kurta (The one he wore in C-nite promo Wink).. He approaches towards Priya..Her heartbeats become fast..
Her pooja is now complete she puts the seive down and touches Ram's feet.Ram makes her drink water and breaks Priya's fast.She gets teary eyed.None says a word during the process and there's hardly direct eye contact. Priya turns to leave when Ram holds her wrist.She stops in her place,doesnt know what to make out of Ram's sudden action.Ram pulls her a bit she turns...there eyes meet...
 
Ram: (in slow voice)Jane ki itni jaldi kyun hai tumhe?Mere pas tumhari kuch chize padi hai jo main tumhe lauta na chahta hun..Vo sirf tumhari hai,sirf tumhara haq hai un chizo par..
(Priya wonders what he's talking about when Ram pulls out something fom his pocket) Priya sees what it is..Its her Mangalsutra and Sindoor box..Shez still confused..Why did he bring this?
 
Ram slowly moves towards Priya and ties the Mangalsutra around her neck.Shez stunned by his actions.He then takes a pinch of sindoor and applies it in her hairline..She shuts her eyes taking in what just happened.Tears roll down her cheeks..
 
Ram:Ab lag rahi ho tum "suhagan"..Ab lag rahi ho tum meri Priya.. (Priya is happy hearing it BG aa aa aaa...) In chizo par sirf tumhara haq hai Priya aur ye haq tumse koi nai chin sakta..
Priya doesnt say anything Ram's eyes are filled with tears too.Priya throws herself into his arms.He holds her as tight as possible...Both stand like this for sometime.Nobody wants to let go each other.Its after 5 years dey are this close..There's no need of words silence and the hug has said it all..Ram softly plants a kiss on Priya's hair and says:
Fir kabhi mat jana mujhe yun chodke.Main nahi jee paunga tumhare bagair Priya.. (FB Ram on his knees 12th MarchWink)
 [Nange pairo pe angaro chalti rahi..haye chalti rahi..
Lagta hai k gairo me main palti rahi...haaayeee...
Le chal waha jo..mulk tera hai..jahil zamana dushman mera hai..
 
Priya:Nai jaungi Mr.Kapoor kabhi nahi jaungi.Vo meri zindagi ki sabse badi galti thi aur uski saza main bhugat chuki hu..Am sorry Mr.Kapoor am Sorry... she sobs...
O re piya...hayeee.. o re piya...
 
Ram:Maine tumhe maaf kiya Priya lekin ek galti k liye main tumhe maaf nahi karunga.Priya pulls apart from Ram.A bit scared  asks in low voice "Kaunsi galti Mr.kapoor"??
 
Ram:Yahi ki 5 saalon me mujhse dur rehkar tum mera nam bhool gayi...
(Priya understands what he meant.She blushes and playfully hits him on his chest..Kya Mr.K.. umm Ram aapne to mujhe dara hi diya tha...and hugs him again)
 
Ram:Priya.. suno..
 
Priya:Hmmm...
 
Ram:Vo kya hum aj puri rat yunhi aise ek dusre ki bahon me yaha chat par khade rahenge..? Mere pair dard kar rahe hai yar...Big smileBig smile
 
Priya laughs and before she could say anything he shuts her mouth in his way and lifts her up in his arms...Priya breaks free and asks: ye aap yun mujhe kaha le ja rahe hai?
 
Ram:Tumhare ghar..Tumhara to yaha saman hai lekin Peehu ka to nahi hai na..To lane lekar  ja raha hu... Tumhe kya laga?? LOLWink
 
Priya blushes and holds him tight hiding her face in his arms...He takes her towards his car..
 
Piyaaa...O re...Piya...
 
 
                                                                         * THE END*
(Chalo aj epi mein jo hoga vo hoga.I re-united them.I can cant see them apart more now..Patience khatam ho gaye mere..)

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Posted: 14 November 2012 at 7:03am | IP Logged
Aww Awesome update!!! Loved it! Beautifully written!
Yaar I could imagine the entire scene with the BG! Day Dreaming Embarrassed
*sigh* how I wish this could happen today!

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Posted: 14 November 2012 at 8:11am | IP Logged

Pallavi... awesome OS yaarClap

Read all 3 parts at one go enjoyed it a lot.. shows it comes from a true RaYa fanSmile

Now the highlights:

Part 1 : Ram ne toh conda se shaadi kar li... ROFL PK calling Ayesha Conda...

Part 2 : Pihu ka dialog.. help mil gayi Wink

Part 3: liked ur line.. Ram is wearing 12th March promo wala kurta .. u were so specific LOL!

And then of course the whole story!!!

Thanks a lot Pallavi.. and keep writing more !!!! 

 

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Posted: 14 November 2012 at 8:31am | IP Logged
hayyyeee...loved it!!! awesome...but u earlier mentioned dadi was also there naa???? unke saamne hi?? ;)
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Posted: 14 November 2012 at 8:46am | IP Logged
superb...finally...u reunited that was the best part...
thanks for such a nice ff...
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