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Swaron FF - Jab Dil Miley (Page 75)

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Posted: 30 November 2012 at 2:56pm | IP Logged
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Their sleep was disturbed by cold wind and sun peeping from the curtains..Their bodies were tangled with each other'he was over her flatly..his head was resting on her chest..and his hands tightly holding her waist..whereas her hands were in her hairs..and one leg on him..

Sharon opened her eyes'and saw swayam laying on her..with his head on chest..crushing her chest..she turned a deep shade of red..she stroke his hairs..and make him awake..He in half sleep hide his face between her mound..she turned more red..and suddenly she pushed him..he fell from the bed directly to the cold flooorrr'and start rubbing his bum..

Sharon starts laughing looking at Swayam..

Sw:acha tu my pain is your laughter..

Sh:oh please itna philosophical hone ki zarorat nahi hai..she said and starts laughing again..

Swayam jumped on her'and lay flat on her..hold her hand..interwined with his and pinned them to both side of her..

Sh:kya karrahe ho tum?

Sw:say you love me!

Sh:swayam'choor mujhe..she said while smiling and trying to freed herself..

Sw:Say you love me sharon..

Sharon looked deep in his eyes..

Sh:I love you..

Sw:now kiss me!

Sharon was still looking in her eyes..

Sh:Now kiss me!

Sw:kiss me!

Sh:Kiss me..

Sw:u are irritating me Sharon..

Sh:what I am just obeying you swayam..

Sw:oh god..is larki ko thori akal de..aur mujha thora sabar..i asked u to kiss me.not to say it..

Sh;shutup swayam..i am not kissing you..

Sw:oh yeah?

Sh:oh yeah!

Sw:Okay'don't kiss..i will find someone else..he said trying to stand from her.

Sharon grabbed her collar and kissed him..It was a shirt and sweet kiss'sweeter than honey..

Sharon leave him..swayam's eyes was still close..he was tasting her lips on his lips till now..

He smiled and open his eyes'and Sharon urgently hugged him..by which swayam again layed flat on her..

Sh:now go..i need to go to the washroom'we have to go college..now u go ur home..

Sw:no..i will go with you from here only..i just want to freshen up..

Sh:okay'she said and left for the washroom..

After half an hour or soo..She called from the washroom..

Sh:swayam I forgot to take me clothes with me..please cupboard main se who pink wala dress de du na..She said with a pout.

Swayam opened her cupboard and start searching for dress..

Sw:oh god..tumhare paas itne saarai kapre hain..gosh bohat sarai pink hain Sharon'tumhe konsa wala chaiye hai?

Sh;who..woh pink aur silver wala..

Sw:there are 3 pink and silver'konsa wala chaiye hai..To himself..yeh girls itne dresses kyun kharredti hain'

Sh;wahi hai swayam..woh wala'

Sw:Sharon I cant find it..

Sharon got irritated and ccomes out from washroom..wearing white small towel around her body..swayam was awestruck looking at her'

Sh:don't look at me like this swayam..move let me take the dress! She pushed him aside.

Sw:Um'why don't you forget your dresses out from washroom quite frequently..

Sharon rolled her eyes to him and show him her tongue..

She took the dress in run into washroom..swayam tried stopping her but she was fast..she closed the door before winking at him.

Sharon come out wearing her dress..her hand was on her back..she was nervous on something..

Sw;what happened?

Sh:umm..nothing..can u zip the dress..? she said while lowering her gaze.

She goes and stand in front of mirror..he smiles at her cuteness and goes behing her..he slowly zipped her dres..he hugged her from behind..she started drying her hairs with towel..some of the splashing were sprinkling on his face..he removed her hair from her shoulder and kissed her shoulder..she closed her eyes..and smiled..he looked at her into the mirror..and starts kissing her again on her nape and neck..she was mean while combing her hair..and he was keep kissing her in between..

They reached rehearsal hall and their team blast a bomb in them..

R:Guys..you know footloose is coming..we are in a big mess!

Sw:What mess?

Sh:KR's? don't tell me rey..they are taking the advantage of my win for their college! SHIT!

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Next update after nehal and manasie update..and even deeps too..

And yes next chapter after page 105..so spam because i am planning to update tomorrow if you guys complete my demand..

And read the note on page 93

Thankyou!

-TANYA-

 




Edited by Tanya_Swaronluv - 01 December 2012 at 6:40am

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Posted: 30 November 2012 at 3:01pm | IP Logged
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that was a super cute update tanya...
loved it totally...
sharon sharing her feelings with swayam..
awww...the letter was very nicely done...
sharon has an elder sister...
now thats seems like a big twist.is.in our way...
swayam brought chocolates for sharon
adorable he is...
loved the morning..
swayam making sharon say i love u to him
and then the cute banter...
omg...wat was rey talking about.
eagerly waiting.for the next chappy
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Edited by --NishaGoyal-- - 30 November 2012 at 3:24pm

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Posted: 30 November 2012 at 3:43pm | IP Logged
OMG..!!
2 Chapters in day..!!
Gud going
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Posted: 30 November 2012 at 9:05pm | IP Logged
tnx for the long long long update

it was fabulous
n well written
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Posted: 30 November 2012 at 9:05pm | IP Logged
WOW...lovely update swthrt...
Mindblowing...
The cuteness & sweetness through the update was evident...
I loved the way you shifted the moods...
from gloomy to happy and than naughty & romantic...
WOW...hats off to u swthrt...beautiful flow in writing...
I loved the way she shared her past with him
& it took only few minuts for him to change her mood ...and a chocolate...
Awww...the kiss was so cute...yet hot...

he was not kissing but slowly slowly..and seductively licking her lips with his tongue..he starts tasting the chocolate..but he bet her lips were more sweeter than any chocolate..Sharon felt heart raising its speed..swayam felt a soft tug in his hairs..which turned him on..and he took her bottom lips in between his and suck it smoothly..sharon too did the same..now they both start kissing each other passionately..swayam swiped his tongue on to her lips..asking for permission..she opened her mouth and gave him entrance..his tongue was doing tickling in her mouth..making her moan in her throat..They break the kiss finally due to the lack of oxygen..but Sharon kept giving him sweet small peck on his lips.BlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushing

Finally they confessed ...awww...loved the part when he was teasing her and she was being naughty...lovely...they are so adorable...m loving this new swayam

Sw:Okay…don't kiss..i will find someone else..he said trying to stand from her.

Sharon grabbed her collar and kissed him..It was a shirt and sweet kiss…sweeter than honey..

Sharon leave him..swayam's eyes was still close..he was tasting her lips on his lips till now..EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed



The bathroom bit was beautifully described...AMAZING...they r so much in LOVE...can't wait for the next part dear...plz plz update soon




Edited by deep_Tanha - 01 December 2012 at 2:01am

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Posted: 30 November 2012 at 10:10pm | IP Logged
a verie cute update..i loved d new bonding between swayam n sharon..
N sharon's chase for chocolates was awesome..so dey confess deir feelings again..lovely
waiting for d next update..
update soon..
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Posted: 30 November 2012 at 10:34pm | IP Logged
double dhamaka...
both the updates were awesome tanya...
finally both of them confessed their love for each other...
n their chocolaty kiss was so cute...
will be waiting for the next chapter...
update soon... 

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Posted: 01 December 2012 at 12:52am | IP Logged
amazing
finally swaron confessed 
now whats the twist?
waiting to read further
update soon :D

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