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Swaron FF - Jab Dil Miley (Page 35)

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Posted: 27 November 2012 at 7:11pm | IP Logged
nice part... but really sad one too...
Swayam woke up alone in the bed, finally Mr. Arrogant fell in love but Sharon wasn't there... the way she told him that it meant nothing to her broke my heart to read further...
Swayam trying everything to remind her how beutiful was their last night together and that his feelings were true but she refuses to acknowledge them and straight away tell him ki she hates him...
ab dono ke alag alag path hai...
next part was also nice where Ayesha could see that Sharon was crying and has not slept properly and also where Swayam ki halat bhi kuch same hi hai...
Now waiting for the next update eagerly to see inn dono ke different paths ab ek kaise hote hai...

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Posted: 27 November 2012 at 7:17pm | IP Logged
amazing

seriously e great swayam shekhawat is in love!!!!

Didnt expect it wud turn out this way

well done 4 ur works




update sooo0ooo0ooon

Edited by frankyfio - 27 November 2012 at 7:17pm

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Posted: 27 November 2012 at 8:52pm | IP Logged
 
update update update LOLLOLLOLLOL
 
1st dem emotional  sharon kkya kiya ConfusedConfused
poorswayam
 
par jis love story mein dard na ho wo love story boreing ho jatiLOLLOL
 
n
 
2nd
 
new swaron LOLLOLLOL
 
 
 
waiting next update  SmileSmile
 
                    Heartlove swaron


Edited by nature2 - 27 November 2012 at 9:55pm

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Posted: 27 November 2012 at 9:57pm | IP Logged
Awesome update...!!it ws really written very nicely...
Luvd it...

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Posted: 27 November 2012 at 10:15pm | IP Logged
Sorry for not commenting before...par dhamki tho aaj derahi nah ki pm nahi karogi... Tongue
Ok now coming to the last two updates...I was left speechless...I have never read openly anything so Bold...so can only say one thing Hotness personified... Smile
Swaron again fighting is so sad..Sharon doesn't know that she is hurting herself...ahh think maybe Ayesha might help them out...anyways do pm me the next part...abb toh comment bi kar dia... Wink

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Posted: 27 November 2012 at 10:21pm | IP Logged
Amazing update
Poor swayam he truly love sharon but on the other hand sharon still didn't want to accept that she love him too.Second part was really emotional
Ayesha n sharon part was cute.Now they both r on different path Waiting for next part hope they sharon realises her love soon.
Waiting for next part eagerly

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Posted: 27 November 2012 at 10:31pm | IP Logged
awesome update !!! Clap
loved it !!
thanx for the PM.
waiting for the next update.

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Posted: 27 November 2012 at 10:42pm | IP Logged
WOW...i was waiting for this part...to see their reaction...& u surprised me...
wat a twist yaar...hats off...swayam was the spoilt one..
but sharon took revenge ...that too...like this...
.i didn't see this coming...i loved swayam here...
he changed...love changed him...his pain..her pain...
the love was crystal clear...my fav lines..

..

Sw:No Sharon..you hate me…mene maan lia..but I love you…u dunt remember last night..mene maan lia..but I do..meri zindagi ki sabse beautiful night thi kalki raat…you don't feel anything when I touch you…mene maan liya..but I feel so..yeh khoon jo nikal raha hai na..woh bhi mujhe takleef nahi de raha hai jitna hurt tumne mujhe kya hai…Aaj se tumhare aur mere raaste alag hain Sharon..We are nobody to each other..Hum sirf ek team..ek college ka part hain..aur kuch nahi…He said and a lone drop rolled down his eyes to his neck..followed by many other.

LOVED IT dear...plz plz update soon



Edited by deep_Tanha - 28 November 2012 at 12:12pm

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