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Swaron FF - Jab Dil Miley - Page 22

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Posted: 11 years ago
That was scorching hot. Awesomely done. To see the change in Swayam was amusing but also good. But the precap left me confused. Eagerly waiting for the update.

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Monica.. thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
AMAZING update..dat was reallie a long update..
I like every incident frm d starting..wen sharon panics over wearing saree,..n den da party n ofcrs deir clasroom convo..dat was nice,.looks like dey've got new names."monkey n little monster":p
i loved deir confessn but after reading d precap i gues kuch gadbad hone wali h..
Precap looks verie intresting..waiting 4 d next update..
Do updbte soon..
Edited by SwaRonLuver - 11 years ago
Ria_SwaRon thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG...!!!!!!! 😲
OMG...!!!!!!!!
maana k u were going to surprise me ... but... but... ye surprise nahi it was a jhatka...!!!
i mean main abhi tak shock se bahar nahi aayi ...
i was like ...
OMG...!
Ohh Freak...!!
WTH!!!1 

Freak...!!
 
No wonder y u said that u write fire nicely..!! :P

 mere paas abhi bhi kuch word nahi hai...!!! Shock se baahar aaungi toh hi kuch update k baare mein bol paaungi...!!!
and aakhon se paani aa gaya continuously stare karke bina blink kiye cell se itna bada update padhne k baad...!!! 

*speechless*
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btw awesumly, ...
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                      - Ria...<3
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Posted: 11 years ago
This content was originally posted by: riafulwani

OMG...!!!!!!! 😲

OMG...!!!!!!!!
maana k u were going to surprise me ... but... but... ye surprise nahi it was a jhatka...!!!
i mean main abhi tak shock se bahar nahi aayi ...
i was like ...
OMG...!
Ohh Freak...!!
WTH!!!1 

Freak...!!
 
No wonder y u said that u write fire nicely..!! :P

 mere paas abhi bhi kuch word nahi hai...!!! Shock se baahar aaungi toh hi kuch update k baare mein bol paaungi...!!!
and aakhon se paani aa gaya continuously stare karke bina blink kiye cell se itna bada update padhne k baad...!!! 

*speechless*
*still speechless*
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*still speechless*


btw awesumly, ...
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*(still speechless) *
written...!!!
                      - Ria...<3




Hahahahahaha...you seems quite shock..i hope you have not tasted flies..hehehe

Yeah i know it was shockin..
luv u too ria..

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Posted: 11 years ago
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pehlanasha. thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
This content was originally posted by: riafulwani

OMG...!!!!!!! 😲

OMG...!!!!!!!!
maana k u were going to surprise me ... but... but... ye surprise nahi it was a jhatka...!!!
i mean main abhi tak shock se bahar nahi aayi ...
i was like ...
OMG...!
Ohh Freak...!!
WTH!!!1 

Freak...!!
 
No wonder y u said that u write fire nicely..!! :P

 mere paas abhi bhi kuch word nahi hai...!!! Shock se baahar aaungi toh hi kuch update k baare mein bol paaungi...!!!
and aakhon se paani aa gaya continuously stare karke bina blink kiye cell se itna bada update padhne k baad...!!! 

*speechless*
*still speechless*
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*still speechless*


btw awesumly, ...
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*(still speechless) *
written...!!!
                      - Ria...<3


And yeah iska next part bhi surprise..no discussion on that too..😉
I will update that after 2 days..till than i need some rest..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Alright, even I didn't expect them to make love so soon but I guess the attraction was just undeniable !! Wonder what happened that Sharon ends up making Swayam so angry yet again !!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Steamy☺️ OMG what an update, I am literally🤪Sharon in a sari is a wonderful sight, and our majnu never can resist her. Both of them forgot about their revenge and became one. Well it is interesting to see how you are going to write the next chapters. Well done for a very romantic udpate.Looking forward for the next one. Tanya👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
RES
UNRES
Luvd the Update darling...One word Hot :)
Edited by Karen_sharon - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
That was one hawtt update! :P
Loved it from the beginning when the girls were panicking about wearing saree...and the way Swayam saw her when she entered...And the dori scene in the computer room...
Swayam as King and Sharon queen...expected. :D
Oh! AVP raat ko bhi kaam deti hai...Lekin in dono ne kuch aur kiya...Prank se shuru hua and then...
Precap mei what happened to Sharon? Why is she saying this?
Loved the whole update. Update asap.