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Virman OS - Party Disaster (Page 7)

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Posted: 12 November 2012 at 10:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sapphhire

cute.
hehe thanks dear Hug

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Posted: 12 November 2012 at 10:38am | IP Logged
Originally posted by hangok

ohh this was really manvi & virat couldnt think better one of them, :-D haha true!

thanks for the pm no probs dear  Hug 
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Posted: 12 November 2012 at 10:39am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ehmmbhrocks

aww id is soo cutee.luved ur OS Heart.little virmaan more cuter dan bigger ones lol hahah...are they?! thanks for ur feedback dear! Hug  .
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Posted: 12 November 2012 at 10:43am | IP Logged

this is just superbTongue... i loved it.. totally awesome n i mean it..ur os remind me of my childhood days..n  birthday parties, cakes,gifts...Embarrassed...miss those days..coming to ur os,  lil virat n lil manvi they r adorable , naughty bt they r just super cute.. i know its a os bt can u plz write a sequel to it???? Big smile

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Posted: 12 November 2012 at 10:44am | IP Logged
Ohh mine u reminded me of the punishment that i got for beating up a boy in my class when i was small!!! LOL I am not mentioning the punishment!! Hahaha!! Ok let me come back to the story!!
I am love with it!!! Viraat and maanvi were really possessive haa! And really cute and sweet at the same time. I felt pity for their parents who had to see their kids fighting like this!! LOL 
Ohh i want to read it again!! I am totally loving it!!
Keep writing !!
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Posted: 12 November 2012 at 10:46am | IP Logged
Originally posted by meera.chaudhuri

this is just superbTongue..thanks dearHug. i loved it.. totally awesome n i mean it..ur os remind me of my childhood days..n  birthday parties, cakes,gifts.awwhh..Embarrassed...miss those days..coming to ur os,  lil virat n lil manvi they r adorable , naughty bt they r just super cute.. i know its a os bt can u plz write a sequel to it???? Big smile awwhh no yaar. this is just it dear. no sequel..thanks for commentinHug

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Posted: 12 November 2012 at 10:49am | IP Logged
Originally posted by gsrocks

Ohh mine u reminded me of the punishment that i got for beating up a boy in my class when i was small!!! LOLhaww?! omgg!! u are a total sherni arnt ya!  I am not mentioning the punishment!! arre yaar...its bad habit to leave someone guessing Hahaha!! Ok let me come back to the story!! okay!
I am love with it!!! Viraat and maanvi were really possessive haa! And really cute and sweet at the same time. I felt pity for their parents who had to see their kids fighting like this!!every parents must have gone through this phase LOLLOL 
Ohh i want to read it again!! I am totally loving it!! awwhh!! thanks soo much dear! Hug
Keep writing !!
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Posted: 12 November 2012 at 10:49am | IP Logged
OhMyGosh Gal that was so freaking adorable!!
I loved the concept of it...<33
Haha, their friendship, hatred, possessivenes, jelousy..
it felt so real, i could totaaly imagine it..infact not only them,
but i could imagine myself there...

Beautifully written! i remember when last year in english we had to write stories in the POV of kids,
and oh gosh..it was hard!

But you have seriously carried this out so beautifully!! It is difficult...i think..and u have done a brilliant job!!
<333

 

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