Virman OS - Party Disaster - Page 3

wow what a concept yaar
loved it
plz dont stop here plz continue

unres
gosh sia dis was so cutee n adorable..i salute ur imagination n wriitng skills..being 5 yr old🤣
aww loved it..
can u turn it into ff..n take a leap in ur story😉
Edited by viratmanvi - 11 years ago

Aww that was lovely!! It would be so cool if you could turn this into a SS...Would love to read what happens after they meet after years!! anyways thnx for the pm!!

awww... sooo cute...

awee this is very cute chhotu maanvi and chhotu virat... perfect one...the convo about chocolate... all was very cute... luved it .. well done 👏

awww...that was cho cho cho chweet !!!!!


i loved it so much specially the desi and videshi part .


i could very well imagine all those scenes where virat is pushing her to the ground and also pulling her hair .


it was fabulous !!!!


thanks for the pm dear .

virman as kiddies.loved it and it was funny.

OMG... Dis was awesome OS.. loved it... D way u explain Dadagi nd SB was hilarious.. And Jealous Virman... Awh.. cho sweet... Plz continue this OS.. I really wanna knw story aftr 15 yrs.. Small part as part 2.. But plz continue na... 😛

hayee it was so cute os i loved it rofl tit for tat 

Awee it was so sweet n cute!
Lovd virman of 8 n 13age they r same
thank u fr pm