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#3 Guzarish [My version D3] Parts 12-18 (Page 95)

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Posted: 01 December 2012 at 2:20pm | IP Logged
eekkksss... I ws just abt to go to sleep... Thank god i saw ur PM at ryt tym.. LOL ... Ur update... As usual... Amazing... I really love d way u write... Big smile ... Sharon as usual confused..bt u knw wat..in ur dis story..i really like swaron a lot... Atleast d way how sharon feels... Though its d same as in d epi..bt still... Smile ... Okay now... Moving on... So... The gang also finally knows abt kriyaansh... N RDX having a plan... Wow... Me shocked... And haan plzzz kria ko jaldi se leke aao na... Ab bht hogya... Taani ko beech m laana bht zaruri hai kya..???? :/ ... Urggg... Jo bhi hai...atleast tumhare 4th thread pe kria to aa jaani cahiye... :/ ... And u giving nxt update kal..??? :O ... Wwwooopppiiieee... Me waiting eagerlyyy... Big smile

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Posted: 01 December 2012 at 6:51pm | IP Logged
For part 16.
I like it dear. The way things turned around seem so realistic. Each one has their own way to address to things happening around. Simii kind of pulling Rinni's leg was cute. These small moments increase the feel while reading and help to imagine the story easily. Sharon's reaction is totally justified as she is herself in confusion about the things happening lately around her. RDX comments over there was suprising. Loved the way all understood that what Rey must be going through. Though swaron are the ones who undertand it the best.:) . The swaron conversation was beautifully expressed. The way in which swayam understands her and sharon being stunned at this way of accepting things when it comes to her.<3 With regard to note. Reading your works has always been a stress buster. So it goes with I must say that you updating Guzarish is great full admist your schedule.

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Posted: 01 December 2012 at 7:08pm | IP Logged
Khushi me loves you too. Pata nahi guess i missed to read that comment. Na i have read it so it was my short term memory loss

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Posted: 01 December 2012 at 10:13pm | IP Logged
Superb Update!!
RDX's entry was sooo unexpected but I'm definitely not complaining as I think he would be helpful in terms of getting Rey and Kriya back together..
The SwaRon angle was a tad bit disappointing though I'm sure you've figured out a great storyline aheadBig smile
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Posted: 01 December 2012 at 11:18pm | IP Logged
its awesome loved it

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Posted: 02 December 2012 at 12:33am | IP Logged
Wow. . .
Awsome update. . .
Full of swaron. . . .
Gosshh m realy waiting 4 kriya's entry. . . .
I realy dnt knw how i vl tolerate taani,
bt,i can manage. . .
Pls jaldi se kriya ki entry do,m waiting 4 it. .
Pls nxt part jaldi update ker do.

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