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#3 Guzarish [My version D3] Parts 12-18 (Page 21)

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Posted: 13 November 2012 at 11:06am | IP Logged
finally..letter...sigh of relief...

i really loved each and every line of that letter...god she wrote her true feelings for him..d actual ones... i really loved it...

her mere i love you and simply stating the fact of him being the most precious thing she got in St.Louis was the most amazing thing...

she really hoped to meet him in future without any boundations... and had kept her hope in positive manner...

liked the way swayam calmed a broken rey and asked him to do what kriya wanted..just to for right time...

anxiously waiting for what she had given to vishakha..plzz update soon...

and thanx for pm...





Edited by pallavi.14 - 13 November 2012 at 11:55am

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Posted: 13 November 2012 at 11:30am | IP Logged
amazing!!!

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Posted: 13 November 2012 at 11:53am | IP Logged
Awsome! part khushi
da letter is too emotional
n da way rey reacted is more emotional...i wish D3 mai aisa kch dekhne ko milta...bt as you knw creatives are MAHAN of dis show

aww swayam play a role of true frnd so awsomely...da way he consoling him...i loved it alot

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Posted: 13 November 2012 at 1:40pm | IP Logged
The letter was really touchy Cry
I wanna kill shivam . . . . Jo itne precious letter ko rey tak pahuchana nhi chahta tha Censored
i'm glad kriya told him everything Smile
the way he was behaving before- cold, ignorant turned into crazy maniac uncontrollable lover Stern Smile
her pain reflected on the piece of paper holding all her emotions,,,, her love, confession, inability, pain Disapprove
she wants him to move on & not try to find her . . . . . . . She really can't hurt her mom Clap
why did this happen wid kriyaansh . . . . . . Its really heartbreaking to accept that they are separated forever . . . . . Now i'm crying more Pinch
swayam was there to hold him . . . . . He did a gr8 job Hug
vishakha ke paas kya h? . . . . I wish that'll make rey happy

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Posted: 13 November 2012 at 2:59pm | IP Logged
i just now read all the parts...n its 3.30 am here.. Woahhh... Earlier your ishq junoon deewangi also made me awake by 4 and now this one too... Hehe... Bt yeah as u said dis part ws really vry emotional... Reyam have alwaz been my fav...n in dis part... Der understadin...dat letter... Evrythng... I've words...i loved your story khushi... Bt... Cn u just tell me on which id of yours should i add u..??? ... I've missed ijd updates too... Jst scrap me once plzzz...

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Posted: 13 November 2012 at 11:26pm | IP Logged
Awesome nd emotional update...
After reading that letter.. I m crying Cry Cry
Beautifully explained the emotions through which rey was going...
Loved it loved it loved it
Really i m SPEECHLESS after reading this part
update soon
thnx for pm

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Posted: 14 November 2012 at 12:27am | IP Logged
awesome update.
loved it .

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Posted: 14 November 2012 at 3:49am | IP Logged
full on ReYam bond special and emotional update...
i really liked way you have put the letter...with message of letting go + holding on with hope, at the same time...i liked last part, the way you have ended the letter "I pray we meet again… if it's in our destiny… bas… yahi Guzarish hai Zindagi se." the way you have justified your title of this FF for kria is nicely done...waiting to read how the title justify's in others life too...
rey's reaction to the letter n then his reaction after reading it was beautifully penned...
swayam thinking abt rey's situation by putting himself into his shoes was nicely put too...
nicely penned update...
thanks for the pm...

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