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#3 Guzarish [My version D3] Parts 12-18 (Page 19)

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Posted: 13 November 2012 at 2:39am | IP Logged
Beautifully written Khushi.
The letter actually made me cry. :')
Swayam is such a good friend. 
It hurts to see Rey so hurt and the scene where he tells that he wants to meet Kria...i died. :(
I hope they meet soon. I will be praying for it too. :)
Hope Swayam finds the reason soon as to Why Shar slapped Shivam for hurting him. 
Update soon. :)

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Posted: 13 November 2012 at 2:40am | IP Logged
Amazing one Khushi..
gosh  Y did I feel that I missed this more..
Pata nahi Yaar had a strange feeling reading the letter..
have read many letters on KR  reunion but still Vaishus and Urs are more spl in this one..
the way the pain was uprooted was fantastic..
Swayam showing the care of friends..
Rey reading the lettwer in Swayam presence..
The pain that the other felt..
And what it is thats with Vishika..??
Kya mai bhul gayi ya phir u didnt tell it yet..
Chjalo mai woh check kar leti hun...

 And to the greatness now seeing swayam and still having contacts with Kria even  when she is nt here..Superb one...

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Posted: 13 November 2012 at 3:14am | IP Logged
The letter just got tears in my eyes.

I so wished something like this happened on the show too .. !! But unfortunately, it seems they have forgotten Kria ..!

Okay, let's not get into this! :D

Amazing, Superb, Awesome Update Khushi!! I really loved it..

Keep writing more, and please, make sure the next update is sooner! :|

Cheers,
Nivriti


Edited by NocturnalBeing - 13 November 2012 at 3:14am

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Posted: 13 November 2012 at 3:20am | IP Logged
Hi. . . .
1st of all
Wish u a very HAPPY DIWALI. . . . . . . . .
And at last,
we got to read the lettr. . . .
Haiyye rey ki condition dekh ker toh,i was literaly crying. . . .
Thanks to my sis 4 giving me hankerchief. .
Nw,lets sey wat does vishakha have 4 rey. . .
And,swayum asking his ans 4m sharon. . . .
Hmm. . . . .
Interesting. . . . . .
Nw i realy wanna read it. . . .
Update soon. . . . .
Happy diwali 1ce again,
and see IF gave me a gift of diwali. . . .
I became goldie frn senior member. . . . .
M soo happpy. . . . . .

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Posted: 13 November 2012 at 3:20am | IP Logged

okay so pehle mazak part:

writing match karna - yeh sab tere hi dimag mein aa sakta hai sirf,,,...LOL

i loved the letter part...

it was sweet and emotional...

sabse important toh tha P.S...

but it wasn't P.S: i love u...LOL

i know main phate huye maar rhi hun...

it was beautiful...

the way u pulled out everything...

mereko swayam ka nhi samjha... sharon na defend kare toh problem... defend kare toh problem... what is the guy's problem?????LOL

agle part mein no rey??? Unhappy 

i wanted to know the P.S:


1oth thread... the way the thread is spammed and everything... it wudn't be the 8th wonder...

see i told u nah i wud be there to comment on the part...

thank god tune upar letter likh diya title mein...Big smile

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Posted: 13 November 2012 at 4:13am | IP Logged
pmz sent.
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Posted: 13 November 2012 at 4:29am | IP Logged
awesome update khushi...the letter was very emotional and heart touching...waiting 4 next part...

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Posted: 13 November 2012 at 5:10am | IP Logged
it was mindblowing amazimg
lovely

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