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#3 Guzarish [My version D3] Parts 12-18 (Page 133)

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Posted: 08 December 2012 at 12:01am | IP Logged
Kriya's rudeness to her mom is natural . . . . . . She's still not over her anger Pinch
but she should think & let her mom explain the reasons . . . . . I guess,,, tabhi kuch comeback scene ban payega Day Dreaming
Wedding ceremony . . . . . Kriya ke jane ke baad bas yahi enjoy kiya tha maine,,,, but still wished for her presence Hug
rey's somewhere acting as a cupid for swaron . . . . . & nicole helped to get their dance Cool
wat a beautiful n pure imagination . . . . . . I can see that. . . . Kriya in orange,, walking wid her swaying dupatta on rey's face Tongue Day Dreaming
but still its a daydream . . . . . I can't put in words,, wat I felt reading this particular moment of pain Cry
lol . . . . . Sharon's car is meant to break down if & only if swayam has to paas from there next LOL
hahaha . . . . . Wat made her sit on backseat ROFL
he won't drive her that way . . . . . He's not her driver ofcourse Silly

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Posted: 08 December 2012 at 12:39am | IP Logged

Amazing update khushi

loved it

i know i might sound wrong or rude...

But whatever kria said to her mom was correct...acc to me..

So the marriage started...

hehe rey is really great...purposely let the curtain fall...and then swayam ko puch ta bhi hai "perfect timing"

*rofl*

and swayam
again...i dont how many times you wil make me say this..." i love him..."

firstly waiting for her till her driver comes...then when she give up and sits in his car, he dont drive
i mean obviously driver thodi na hai

finally sharon got it...aur koi option nai hai*lol*


cont soon...

Sorry cant write more...mere internals chal rahe hai... :(



Edited by --Kinjal-- - 08 December 2012 at 3:40am

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Posted: 08 December 2012 at 12:39am | IP Logged
Super awsome update. . . . . . . .
The wedding was realy fun. . . . . .
Seeing swaron scenes i realy missd kriyaansh.
Kriyaansh ki bahut yaad aa rahi h,
hope to see them 2gethr soon. . . . . .
Rey imaging kriya,
bt,i didnt get 1 thng,
y did rey's heart filld wit hatred wen he thought of the lettr?? . . . .
And wat was that??. . .the lie which he thought the truth?. . .
Wat happnd to rey?
He should be happy na?
I realy didnt get it. . .
Pls do clear it. . . . .
Swaron last part was realy awsome. . . .
Nxt part jaldi update krna. . . .

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Posted: 08 December 2012 at 1:16am | IP Logged
awesome...
rey's imagination was beautiful...
thnx for pm...

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Posted: 08 December 2012 at 1:27am | IP Logged
sorry 4 late commend...
 
both updates wer awesome
 
loved vicky & nil both wer awesome...
 
loved itBig smile


Edited by siliya21 - 08 December 2012 at 1:35am

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Posted: 08 December 2012 at 1:35am | IP Logged

Awesome update...Clap

i loved curtain fall...swaron romance was awesome...

missing kriyansh...hope 2 c them soon

rey's imagination was beautiful...

update the next part soon...

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Posted: 08 December 2012 at 2:03am | IP Logged
loved it and awesome and amazing...  update res of the chapter soon...

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Posted: 08 December 2012 at 2:42am | IP Logged
RDX aur Nicole dont have their Family and friends kya??? that they are making their students manage the wedding..? Stern Smile ...
event management company ko bata dete, curtains wagera lagane koLOL paise bachne ki kya jarurat thiTongue
anyways...chodo ab toh shaadi ho chukiLOLand thank you for ending it in one update itself..taking the torture of imagining them as event management students was a tough jobLOL*jus joking*

start intro of the update was nicely done...liked kria-smiriti part...finally, soon her mom might succeed in getting back to talking terms with her daughter... waiting for that...Approve

i liked the rey teasing swayam part...that nano SwaRon moment under the curtains was lovely, nicely put...
no time to watch the episode..but i still do have it in my mind...

i Really loved the way you have handled SwaRon in this update...from they being in the room part to the after wedding the lift part...*sorry not giving detail review, running out of time but i really loved it*

the rey's imagination part was nice too..liked how u involved kria in the wedding...
and yeah can understand vishaka's situation too, being a spectator of someones hurt feeling's is really a tough job...and its worse when u know both the sides of the coin...

all in all...long and a fast pace update...thanks for the pm...

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