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#3 Guzarish [My version D3] Parts 12-18 (Page 133)

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Posted: 08 December 2012 at 11:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ..first.rain..

My kukkad is back Day Dreaming Hug
Yup Hug

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Posted: 08 December 2012 at 11:50am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kriyansh24

"He loved her but knowing the lie that he considered the truth, he couldn't keep on defending her. His heart lost the battle with his mind."

mereko iss sentence ka matlab nhi samjh...

hatred as in????? I meant how she has gone because of someone else's. He made himself believe that he will continue on for friends but every time her thoughts would pull him back and make him sad again. Makes sense..?

vaise loved the update...

par tu na jaldi se kria ki entry karva...tehehehe ho jayegi re.. 

bahut kheech rhi hai...beech mai jo hona hai voh toh hoga hi na

update was sweet...

lekin yeh bata... vishaka has a transmitter or what???

jab dekho tab vahan se bahar nikalti jahan pe rey is reminiscing abt kria...LOL lol vish ko chod de yaar... it's just how i want to show her... noticing everything about everyone but still silent and caring.

looking fwd to the update

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Lunch kar liya?
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Posted: 08 December 2012 at 11:51am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ruchitasaphire

awesome update
i wish kriya would have been there
thanks for pm
update soon

Thank you so much!
yes.. unfortunately she can't be...
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Posted: 08 December 2012 at 11:52am | IP Logged
I meant how she has gone because of someone else's. He made himself believe that he will continue on for friends but every time her thoughts would pull him back and make him sad again. Makes sense..?"

this is for the past nah... when he felt dejected??? he hates himself for the fact that he allowed his mind to win the battle????

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Posted: 08 December 2012 at 11:54am | IP Logged
Originally posted by akanksha_arsha

woahh... Nw that was definatly a hugee one... 7 pages... Samajh mei aata hai... hehe haan.. i merged like two updates in one taking pity on everyone :P Nywaz.. I was waiting for it to come... Loved it a lott... Rdx ki marriage mei swaron ka romance...upar se dat curtain wala part.. Bwahaha...dat ws just mind blowingg Wink ... Kya sahi tym pe curtain gira Rey k haath se... LOL ...hehe shows mai coincidences coindence se bohut hote hai ROFL  Nw moving to dat smriti kria convo...dat ws also amazingg...the way kria showed her anger...and whn mentioned dat she's just a machine now...*sigh..i pity her... Unhappy ...yes.. poor her... And in marriage Rey imagining kria...2 min k liye toh even i felt ki woh kha se aagyi..hehe... tehehe wasn't that cute? Embarrassed Aur phr swayam giving lift to sharon...saying dat. "i'm nt ur driver" ...bwahaha..loved that nok jhok...glad to know!!  Andd u gonna bring kria back in New year... only if the comments keep on coming and so do the likes... He bhagwann... Bht tym hai yar usmei toh... :/ ... Koini... Hum bhi wait krte hain... Spamming to ho he jayegi... Wink ... Nw coming to ur imp note... So no commebts on dat... Just waitng for the twists n turns to come... Smilethank you so much =)

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Originally posted by ..first.rain..

Lunch kar liya?
Nope aaj 10:00 am ko uthi aur breakfast around 11 ko kiya so bhook nahi hai 

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Posted: 08 December 2012 at 11:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kriyansh24

I meant how she has gone because of someone else's. He made himself believe that he will continue on for friends but every time her thoughts would pull him back and make him sad again. Makes sense..?"

this is for the past nah... when he felt dejected??? he hates himself for the fact that he allowed his mind to win the battle????

Yes.. for the past.. Before he read the letter and had negative thoughts and hated kriya for just leaving.. I suppose I should have mentioned the word 'past' so there would be no confusion Embarrassed

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