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#3 Guzarish [My version D3] Parts 12-18 (Page 124)

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Posted: 08 December 2012 at 1:27am | IP Logged
sorry 4 late commend...
 
both updates wer awesome
 
loved vicky & nil both wer awesome...
 
loved itBig smile


Edited by siliya21 - 08 December 2012 at 1:35am

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Posted: 08 December 2012 at 1:35am | IP Logged

Awesome update...Clap

i loved curtain fall...swaron romance was awesome...

missing kriyansh...hope 2 c them soon

rey's imagination was beautiful...

update the next part soon...

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Posted: 08 December 2012 at 2:03am | IP Logged
loved it and awesome and amazing...  update res of the chapter soon...

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Posted: 08 December 2012 at 2:42am | IP Logged
RDX aur Nicole dont have their Family and friends kya??? that they are making their students manage the wedding..? Stern Smile ...
event management company ko bata dete, curtains wagera lagane koLOL paise bachne ki kya jarurat thiTongue
anyways...chodo ab toh shaadi ho chukiLOLand thank you for ending it in one update itself..taking the torture of imagining them as event management students was a tough jobLOL*jus joking*

start intro of the update was nicely done...liked kria-smiriti part...finally, soon her mom might succeed in getting back to talking terms with her daughter... waiting for that...Approve

i liked the rey teasing swayam part...that nano SwaRon moment under the curtains was lovely, nicely put...
no time to watch the episode..but i still do have it in my mind...

i Really loved the way you have handled SwaRon in this update...from they being in the room part to the after wedding the lift part...*sorry not giving detail review, running out of time but i really loved it*

the rey's imagination part was nice too..liked how u involved kria in the wedding...
and yeah can understand vishaka's situation too, being a spectator of someones hurt feeling's is really a tough job...and its worse when u know both the sides of the coin...

all in all...long and a fast pace update...thanks for the pm...

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Posted: 08 December 2012 at 2:43am | IP Logged
Awesome update
It was indeed a long update n thank u for this.
Loved swaron part good that finally their story is proceeding.Their romance n nok jhok was really cute.It really remind me of my old unpredictable swaron.
Rey imagine kria was really sweet.Hope we get back kria soon.

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Posted: 08 December 2012 at 3:07am | IP Logged
Amazing Update dear...

Aww I loved it very much..
this was perfect..
The feel great  .
And the way the Shoes were kept into font act was fabulous..
Twists me not going ton tell..
Dimag mai bohut sare aa rahe hai..
Swayam drop-ping Sharon..Aww I so feel I could see such scenes soon..
Those cute scenes increase the charm of the show..Ab I'm surely planning to do few things..
Koi CVS ko bulao..Plz unhe yeah padao...

Rey remembering Kria ans the Diwali moments..Having the pics and the sweet memories..
Kria's reaction to Smritti was bit pensive I n feel..
I mean cant Smritti feel ki Kria is upset and at-lest tell her the truth for the decision... ruko kahi yeah tho twist nahi hai nah...
And Vishika noticing Rey..I don't have words to explain how happy i feel seeing the true friend side of Kria  <3

And to note  Acha I never though  so ki u have discont with the likes cause you are not one to stop writing as such..
And i TOO HOPE YOU GET UP THE LIKES SOON AND nEXT THREAD YAAY  Me waiting eagerly...

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Posted: 08 December 2012 at 3:15am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ..first.rain..


Haan ji. Himu ko bhi kuch zyada nai maluum Tongue 
I'll tell you more about humare kaarname Wink 



me too... roz baat hoti hai par aaj nai hui.. =(
msn jaldi jaldi bana lo.. roz baat karne ko milegi partner se :D

Ji ka asar.. kya kare.. partners hai LOL


 Haan 10 more days..Aaj 10th hai..
Kal woh silly net wqala aalke check marega ki prob kya hai uske anmol net mai..
Baad mai I',m free shayad usse bhi pehele download kar lun agar woh kal jaldi aake check kar lke tho..

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Posted: 08 December 2012 at 3:21am | IP Logged
Awsome khushi
love da way you made entry of kria in rey's mind
n his feeling dam awsome

wah!!! kria soo rude to his mom hehe...no seriously i hvn't xpected dat...bt i lyk da dialouges

swaron track nyc
as usual sweet scenes
overall awsome update

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