#3 Guzarish [My version D3] Parts 12-18 - Page 11

Originally posted by: pallavi.14

congrats dear for new thread...
and i just wish that u cross many more thread like dis... aww thank you so much dear! 🤗 

really nice update...

i'm lovung dis sharon... acha kiya uss shivam ko thapad maare... one from my side too... haha i guess he should get millions from all of our sides ;) 

and swayam what can i say about him...why he has to be so so good and charming...uske gusse mein toh aur bhi bura haal hojta hai...awwiiee...

i really liked d way vishakha comforted sharon... glad to know :D 

and d most waited part...letter is wid dem now...YIPPIIIEEE!!!!! Yup... kuch ghanto ki deri hai... 

just waiting to see what's in it... i wanted to read rey's reaction towards it... eagerly waiting...almost impatiently...

so update really very soon... really soon.. promise :D

thanks for pm...

Originally posted by: ruchitasaphire

awesome update

bechara shivam kitne thappad pade usko par wo isi ke layak hai

i am just waiting for the next update pls do it soon

thanks for pm

Originally posted by: anjalijayan

congratulations for new thread

awesome update

 

Originally posted by: eshachawla26

Awesome updte...

luved sharon's violent wala avatar very much..!!..

waiting eagerly for nxt chappy..!!...

updte soon n thnx for the pm..!!...

Originally posted by: Roxxy47

Wah kya plan tha 👍🏼...

Well Sharon ki acting he itni achi thi ke Shivam ko toh phasna he tha 😉...

N then that 'Dangerous Sharon' ...

Shivam ka chehra dekhne layak hoga 😆...

It was amazing 😃...

She really cares for Swayam 😊...

Haye Loved it ❤️...

Eeep waiting to know what's in that letter n Rey's reaction as well 😃...

Thanks for the pm 😊.

Originally posted by: aishu3003

woww awesome update👏

jus luvd it😃

shivam got 4 slaps

loved sharon n dis update

waiting for d next part😊

Originally posted by: yogini64

Congoz a ton khushi darls 🥳  thank you so much yogi di 🤗 
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  aww that's cute! thanksss!
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superb update . . . . . Loved it 😃  glad to know!! 
the plan was really tactfull . . . . . It was'nt lame 👍🏼 aww yayy! I feel happy now :P 
swayam & vish gave such an awesome support to remove her nervousness...   YUP! xD
us looser ke sath to aise hi cheat karna chahiye 😈 I thought he deserves much worsr 😆
sharon acted as extra sweet . . . . . . Trapped him in her innocent plan 😆
& vish managed to get the treasured letter . . . . Wat a scene 😎 I could imagine 😛 
iss shivam ne to swayam ko bhi hinsak bana diya . . . . . . Zaban se hi sahi 🤣 ROFL!!! 
aur sharon ka to pakka hath hi dard ho gya hoga . . . . . . Swayam ko bol thoda massage kar de ☺️ . . . . Aakhir ek slap to usko hurt karne ka bhi tha 😉 tum bhi kya kya ideas deti ho 🤣 
I just hope . . . . The contents of letter are untouched . . . . . . But i'm damn sure she have'nt mentioned any truth in dat . . . . . Aur rey ko kuch khas pata nhi chalega 😭 You'll see :D 
kriya ko bhi jaldi vapas la . . . . . . Don't tell me that u'll wait till 10th thread 🤣ROFL nai nai. Mai utni bhi zalim nai hu -🤣 🤣

Originally posted by: GayatriJethani

Firstly congo for new thread... 🥳  Thank you so much!! 

secondly sorry for not liking nd commenting on previous update... aww that's kay. I can understand... 
Busy with my ipcc exams ... Hope u understand.. Nd dnt stop sending me pm thanks for letting me know =)

coming back to update...
Awesome nd amazing updates...
Sharon helping them to find out kriya's letter for rey... So sweet of her glad you like that! 

I really love the way vishaka stood by sharon nd encourage her.. me too :P
Serial me toh aisa dekhne milta hi nhi h...seriel mai toh kuch bhi nai dikhate =( 

Shocking part of this update was sharon's avatar..
Nd she care for swayam.. Truely from heart but she never show it.. yes... i wanted to show that it was always there. she never brought it up or realized it.. 
But now after slapping shivam bcoz he had hurted swayam, clears that she truely care for him

Really loving the way u r taking this story..thank you!!
Eagerly waiting to see what kriya had written for rey..

Update soon
thnx for pm

Originally posted by: lovely7010

Amazing update
loved sharon here..
shivam deserves this
eagerly waiting for the next part...

Originally posted by: kritzzz_ArSha

awesome