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#3 Guzarish [My version D3] Parts 12-18 (Page 11)

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Posted: 12 November 2012 at 12:59am | IP Logged
congrats dear for new thread...
and i just wish that u cross many more thread like dis...

really nice update...

i'm loving dis sharon... acha kiya uss shivam ko thapad maare... one from my side too...

and swayam what can i say about him...why he has to be so so good and charming...uske gusse mein toh aur bhi bura haal hojta hai...awwiiee...

i really liked d way vishakha comforted sharon...

and d most waited part...letter is wid dem now...YIPPIIIEEE!!!!!

just waiting to see what's in it... i wanted to read rey's reaction towards it... eagerly waiting...almost impatiently...

so update really very soon...

thanks for pm...





Edited by pallavi.14 - 12 November 2012 at 1:30pm

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Posted: 12 November 2012 at 1:32am | IP Logged
awesome update
bechara shivam kitne thappad pade usko par wo isi ke layak hai
i am just waiting for the next update pls do it soon
thanks for pm

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Posted: 12 November 2012 at 1:54am | IP Logged
congratulations for new thread
awesome update
 

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Posted: 12 November 2012 at 2:26am | IP Logged
Awesome updte...
luved sharon's violent wala avatar very much..!!..
waiting eagerly for nxt chappy..!!...
updte soon n thnx for the pm..!!...

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Posted: 12 November 2012 at 3:20am | IP Logged
Wah kya plan tha Thumbs Up...
Well Sharon ki acting he itni achi thi ke Shivam ko toh phasna he tha Wink...
N then that 'Dangerous Sharon' Ouch...
Shivam ka chehra dekhne layak hoga LOL...
It was amazing Big smile...
She really cares for Swayam Smile...
Haye Loved it Heart...
Eeep waiting to know what's in that letter n Rey's reaction as well Big smile...
Thanks for the pm Smile.

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Posted: 12 November 2012 at 3:34am | IP Logged
woww awesome updateClap
jus luvd itBig smile
shivam got 4 slapsDancing
loved sharon n dis updateDay Dreaming
waiting for d next partSmile

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Posted: 12 November 2012 at 3:41am | IP Logged
Congoz a ton khushi darls Party
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superb update . . . . . Loved it Big smile
the plan was really tactfull . . . . . It was'nt lame Thumbs Up
swayam & vish gave such an awesome support to remove her nervousness... Approve
us looser ke sath to aise hi cheat karna chahiye Evil Smile
sharon acted as extra sweet . . . . . . Trapped him in her innocent plan LOL
& vish managed to get the treasured letter . . . . Wat a scene Cool
iss shivam ne to swayam ko bhi hinsak bana diya . . . . . . Zaban se hi sahi ROFL
aur sharon ka to pakka hath hi dard ho gya hoga . . . . . . Swayam ko bol thoda massage kar de Blushing . . . . Aakhir ek slap to usko hurt karne ka bhi tha Wink
I just hope . . . . The contents of letter are untouched . . . . . . But i'm damn sure she have'nt mentioned any truth in dat . . . . . Aur rey ko kuch khas pata nhi chalega Cry
kriya ko bhi jaldi vapas la . . . . . . Don't tell me that u'll wait till 10th thread ROFL

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Posted: 12 November 2012 at 5:41am | IP Logged
Firstly congo for new thread... Party

secondly sorry for not liking nd commenting on previous update...
Busy with my ipcc exams ... Hope u understand.. Nd dnt stop sending me pm

coming back to update...
Awesome nd amazing updates...
Sharon helping them to find out kriya's letter for rey... So sweet of her

I really love the way vishaka stood by sharon nd encourage her..
Serial me toh aisa dekhne milta hi nhi h...

Shocking part of this update was sharon's avatar..
Nd she care for swayam.. Truely from heart but she never show it..
But now after slapping shivam bcoz he had hurted swayam, clears that she truely care for him

Really loving the way u r taking this story..
Eagerly waiting to see what kriya had written for rey..

Update soon
thnx for pm

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