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#3 Guzarish [My version D3] Parts 12-18 (Page 103)

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Posted: 03 December 2012 at 4:17am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ..first.rain..

.note
 Part 18 and 19 will be MAJOR turn arounds for the FF.
sounds interesting... 

Keep guessing why ;) You'll be in a dilemma whether you 'like' the twist or 'hate' the twist WinkEvil SmileROFL 
This surely is about Taani...right??
 I have a major unit test on Thursday 
all the best..answer well...
 

 
Originally posted by ..first.rain..

Originally posted by shaani2209

PS: Last 2 chapters mein perfect perfect sunke paith bhar gaya kya??? phirse coloring issues... Sachi?! dimwit. I try so hard to not mess up to get perfects from you! =( 
sharon aur nilesh ke colors mein ghotala kiya...is it because their colors are similar looking..?  aur swayam aur simmi ke colors mein bhi -_-
Yeah i guess thats what gets u and the readers confused...but with nilesh's and sharon's color::: u change the shade of sharon's color so frequently that now u have ended up getting it similar to nilesh'sLOL but coloring issues doesn't make it that confusing as u write in such a way that u mention who has said it...so chill i jus tell u so that if u want to consider it and modify, then u can do so :) 

coming to the chapter 17...
liked how u have got whole gang into distracting rey's mind...
LOL vicky part was amusing...and his sudden out of the plan freaking, on the shaadi thing...and to that the gangs reaction was nicely put too :)
nicely put simmi-nil part too...simmi questioning and nil answering...hmmm not badWink 

i really liked the SwaRon part...that is so swayam...protective and caringEmbarrassed and sharon remains the diva... acknowledging yet denial mode...nicely done...

rey going blank at swayam's comment was nice reaction n well penned...

arghhh u made them students of event management schoolSleepy

everything seems to be out of the plan LOL...RDX on temporary leave...good...sharon's concern on the situation making rey miss kria was beautifully put...and then the kria-vishaka part was nicely penned too...


Edited by shaani2209 - 03 December 2012 at 4:18am

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Posted: 03 December 2012 at 4:37am | IP Logged
Awesome update
Starting part was amusing.Nilesh reaction about rdx n nicole marriage hilarious lol.I pity himLOL.
Kriya n vishakha convo was good
Waiting for next update

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Posted: 03 December 2012 at 4:49am | IP Logged
awesome update...
all r passed ..Smile
nilesh's reaction..LOL
kria n vishakha's mail r too good..Big smile
loved it to d core...Smile
waiting for d next update eagerly...

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Posted: 03 December 2012 at 5:34am | IP Logged
Hi khushi. . . . . .
1st of all congrats 4 d 100 page completion. . .
The update was nice,
now we vl read rdx and nicoles mam marriage in the absence of kriya. .
I so wish kriya wud be thr. . . . .
I jst hope 4 d bst. . . .
Nxt part jaldi update ksna. . . . .
Waiting 4 it. . . .

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Posted: 03 December 2012 at 5:48am | IP Logged
Awesome update Smile
The gang is making efforts to make Rey happy
Looking forward for the twist

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Posted: 03 December 2012 at 6:43am | IP Logged
nice and loved its... update res of the chapter soon...Thumbs UpThumbs UpThumbs UpThumbs UpThumbs Up

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Posted: 03 December 2012 at 7:08am | IP Logged
Awesome :D

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loved it khushi

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