#3 Guzarish [My version D3] Parts 12-18 - Page 51

Originally posted by: asmaju

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Khushi dear   this was fab...
By my luch i had the song being played and it increased the feel.. oh wow. NICE! 
The gift  hmm never guessed she would return all these..But S memories that will be ever cherished by Rey..they will be... 
Guess now he'll kep these stuff even more safe than ever..
Vish  its really very sweet and humble of her to  give hi space to see what he wants..
About the Sharon  she is still in a confused state..Hmm kabhi kabhi ek decision lena kitna muskil ho jata hai nah.. sachi mai.. it's as if life and death decision.. 
And Swayam  hope that he is strong enough tpo see things clear and be able to manage situation as he does not have much ones to supportt him nopw..
And Kria crying reading the mail from Vishika .She has none beside her now..Hope she still opens up with Vishika always and shares all her pains...hmm maybe... 
 The sight of the moon in the dark and the scene that happened wioth all four its superb...
Loved it very much..aww glad you loved it! 

Khushi DD is going to her home by Dec 1st..So madam ji is inactive for a month...
She will be back by jan i guess.. oh acha... i miss her.. if you talk to her, tell her.. one whole month is long time =(

Originally posted by: lil_devil_himu

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Awesome update

Loved it

Kriyaansh😭

Swaron😭

Waiting for next update

Originally posted by: Krishnaluv94

Great update! Can't wait to read more! Thanks for the update :)

Originally posted by: arjuhiswaron007

Beautifully penned👏

And yeah..the song was so apt for the situation..it really blended well with the thoughts  and ideologies of the four individuals.

Pls update soon😃

Originally posted by: d3lover90

Loved it..
U r a great writer
this story is far better thn d3..
Update soon :D

Originally posted by: anniemathias

it was awesome loved it 
brilliant

Originally posted by: pallavi.14

loved it..
i'm speechless..
wonderfully described the pain and desire they all have for each other...

i just loved the way used lyrics of song...
 it is just beautiful!!!
and the things which kriya gave to rey they have gr8 significance...

thanks for pm..
update soon...

Originally posted by: kriyansh24

i can read the first part as million times as possible especially the memories part and rey's reaction to it... awww.. 

sau dard hai tera fav gaana hai????? nai toh... I was just looking at my playlist to see what song to listen to while typing and this just seemed so apt. 

haan so it was beautifully described...

just loved it totally... thank you!! 

so pure it was...

but i do have a question... rey don't wanna think logically but i do...

so i wanted to ask... mask uske paas aaya kaisa????

did she climb up at his house??? ROFL! Of course not. let's pretend she sees it once in Rey's bag 😆 Logical mat jaa na re. 

shivam ki party ke baad ke samay jacket diya toh uska kya huya??? Voh toh wapis nai de diya tha? 🤔

main subah se hi 10-15 baar padh chuki hun...

totally loved it...