#3 Guzarish [My version D3] Parts 12-18 - Page 49

Ameena

@Roxxy47

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 11 years ago

Superb part Khushi 😃...

Kria left 'Their' memories for Rey...

But Kria still has Rey's Black jacket the one he gave her on the way back from Shivam's party , right??

The song sequence was great, described very well...

Everyone in pain 😒...

Ah well hope everything comes back to normal..

Taani's entry , it sounds interesting cause as u said she is not the 'Immature' one in your FF...

Will be waiting for the next part...

N thanks for the pm 😊.

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Aanchal singh

@Artistic_Stroke

IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

fabulous update

i wish kria comes back soon

song it was awesome and the way u potrayed it was amazing

thanks for pm

update soon

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 11 years ago

awesomeee update👏

loved itt😊

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Gayatri Jethani

@GayatriJethani

Goldie

Posted: 11 years ago

awesome update...
loved it
kriyansh nd swaron 😭 😭 feeling bad for them
song selection was good...
update soon
thnx for pm

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Nikki

@HR-DMG4life

IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 11 years ago

Loved the update and thanks for the pm =)

Nikki <3

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629164

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

Short update...but i liked it...

the awkwardness between rey and vishakha was nicely put...for they had never spoken to each other as friends, its understandable...i liked the part where vishakha giving him privacy to open the parcel...

coming to the contents of the parcel...m sorry i dnt remember them and the moments attached to them...but m sure kriyansh fans will be having their memories attached to it...i liked the way u have penned that part, he remembering abt each and every memory behind those things she has given was nicely put...

the way u channelized their feelings with the song lyrics was beautifully done...

waiting to read about Sharon's decision and as u had said earlier that coming updates the gang will be having their parts to play, so yeah waiting for that too...

do update soon...

thanks for the pm...

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Yogini

@yogini64

IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 11 years ago

Ye wale gifts kriya ke paas kaise they? 🤔
ye wali jacket to kriya ne show me vapas kar di thi . . . . . . . . Tere ff me nhi ki hogi 🤣
it seems ki usne sab hi de diya . . . . Apne paas kya rakha h fir? 😔
khushi tu bahot rulati hai . . . . . . Jaldi se kriya ko vapas la na 😭
swayam ne pehle toh bol diya josh me sharon ko decide karne k liye . . . . . . . . Now he's regretting 😆
poor sharon . . . . . Strict orders hai,, decision to kal hi dena h 😈
this song is so painful . . . . . Never wanted to see them going through this situation 😵
I don't have any problem wid taani if she don't have any crush or so on rey 😊
khushi,, u r going inactive na,,, but why did u locked all ur previous OS . . . . . .??
the 1 associated wid guzarish as well 😔

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esha

@ArShaAngels

IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

Awesome updte khushi..!!..

just luved it..!!..

the songs fits the best to their situation..!!.

thnx for the pm..

updte soon ...!!...

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Akanksha

@Effacious

IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

OMG... I have no words to explain how i felt... The things which Kria left for Rey...the song sequence... Woahhh... Dat was really vei touchy... Lovedd ur update khushi... Really sry cnt comment big wala as my xams r going on... :( ... Plz apologies... :( ... Btw mjhe iska pm ni aaya... :(

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luv_arsha

@luv_arsha

IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 11 years ago

awesome update...loved it very much

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