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#3 Guzarish [My version D3] Parts 12-18 - Page 18

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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: anniemathias

congo for nxt treat
and awesome update loved it


Thank you! Glad you loved it :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: ruchitasaphire

fabulous update

letter was awesome i cried while reading that
finally rey knows the truth and i know destiny  will bring them together
pls update the nxt part soon 


Aww.. I'm sorry for making you cry 😳 Though I'm glad you loved it :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: cool_star14

awesome update...

loved it...
finally rey knows d truth


Thank you so much! He does...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: damonelena

Beautifully written Khushi.

The letter actually made me cry. :')
Swayam is such a good friend. 
It hurts to see Rey so hurt and the scene where he tells that he wants to meet Kria...i died. :(
I hope they meet soon. I will be praying for it too. :)
Hope Swayam finds the reason soon as to Why Shar slapped Shivam for hurting him. 
Update soon. :)


Aww I'm sorry for that Sneha 😳 
I'm sure they will ;)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: asmaju

Amazing one Khushi..

gosh  Y did I feel that I missed this more..
Pata nahi Yaar had a strange feeling reading the letter..
have read many letters on KR  reunion but still Vaishus and Urs are more spl in this one..makes me happy to know this... 
the way the pain was uprooted was fantastic..
Swayam showing the care of friends..
Rey reading the lettwer in Swayam presence..
The pain that the other felt..
And what it is thats with Vishika..?? you'll see... 
Kya mai bhul gayi ya phir u didnt tell it yet.. i haven'tt yet.
Chjalo mai woh check kar leti hun...

 And to the greatness now seeing swayam and still having contacts with Kria even  when she is nt here..Superb one...it's not swayam.. it's vish who does..

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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: NocturnalBeing

The letter just got tears in my eyes. I'm sorry for that 😳 😛 


I so wished something like this happened on the show too .. !! But unfortunately, it seems they have forgotten Kria ..! I wish the same! What irks me is that they've made it as if a person named Kria never existed! I mean even if the couple parts and new one's come in, you just don't forget them all together! Some things remind you of them constantly -_-

Okay, let's not get into this! :D Right.. I was about to write more above when I stopped myself in time.. 

Amazing, Superb, Awesome Update Khushi!! I really loved it.. Aww thank you! 

Keep writing more, and please, make sure the next update is sooner! :| As I've promised.. every other day :D

Cheers,
Nivriti

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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: Madhukumari

Hi. . . .
1st of all
Wish u a very HAPPY DIWALI. . . . . . . . . Thank you and Same to you 🤗 
And at last,
we got to read the lettr. . . .
Haiyye rey ki condition dekh ker toh,i was literaly crying. . . .
Thanks to my sis 4 giving me hankerchief. . Really? ðŸ˜² ðŸ˜³
Nw,lets sey wat does vishakha have 4 rey. . .
And,swayum asking his ans 4m sharon. . . .
Hmm. . . . .
Interesting. . . . . .
Nw i realy wanna read it. . . .
Update soon. . . . .
Happy diwali 1ce again,
and see IF gave me a gift of diwali. . . .
I became goldie frn senior member. . . . . Aww it did. Congrats!! 
M soo happpy. . . . . .

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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: ..first.rain..


Abhi replying to comments. Phir going for homework. Aur uske baad update.. so abhi so jaa.. subah uthke you'll see an update =)

Plomise...????😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: kriyansh24


okay so pehle mazak part:

writing match karna - yeh sab tere hi dimag mein aa sakta hai sirf,,,...😆 ROFL! Agent in making 😉 

i loved the letter part...

it was sweet and emotional...

sabse important toh tha P.S...

but it wasn't P.S: i love u...😆 haha yes.. i don't like it when ppl do that! 

i know main phate huye maar rhi hun...

it was beautiful...

the way u pulled out everything... glad to know :D

mereko swayam ka nhi samjha... sharon na defend kare toh problem... defend kare toh problem... what is the guy's problem?????😆 aww aisa mat bol re =P

agle part mein no rey??? 😔 i might if the swaron scene turns out smaller.. or else no.. 

i wanted to know the P.S:


1oth thread... the way the thread is spammed and everything... it wudn't be the 8th wonder... hahahaha! Let's hope for the sake of everyone that they meet before 10th thread 😛 

see i told u nah i wud be there to comment on the part... yes.. 🤗

thank god tune upar letter likh diya title mein...😃 ROFL thought i should..

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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: Born2Dance

Plomise...????😳


Pakka wala 😃 As long as my net doesn't time out.. It gave me a problem when I was trying to log in as soon as I got home..