Arjun Episode 26: Old Sins cast Long Shadows

Posted: 11 years ago

Folks,

I hope you like this title for yesterday's episode, for it fits both Leena Samant and Mary Fernandes to a T. For both these women, their ugly past catches up with them. As Chotu says, Leena pays for her sins, and her being a loving and protective mother changes nothing in this. So does Mary, and so justice is done, after a fashion. This is what the ancient Greeks called nemesis (in their pantheon, Nemesis was the goddess of retribution).

In this gloomy tale, there is hardly any good to be found (outside the ETF). Both the murder victims were themselves criminals in their earlier days, nor is there any trace of repentance in either. Leena lives happily off the proceeds of a bank robbery,  and Mary on her earnings from the foul drug trade (which is, in effect,  mass murder), using them for her beauty salon. Their common boyfriend, Bruce Braganza, is a hardened and  unrepentant gang leader, killer and supari-giver. To cap it all, the murder culprit turns out to be a serving police officer moonlighting (doing another job apart from his regular one) as a contract killer!

It is really more like  a Raymond Chandler or James Hadley Chase novel than the usual TV crime story. The sole representative of innocence, the young Chitra aka Mona, is saddled with a genetic inheritance of the worst kind, as her parents are a thug-cum-murderer and a gangster's moll-cum-thief. It cannot get much blacker than this, would you not agree? This is not a criticism, but rather a compliment to the writers, who are obviously not afraid to probe the dark corners of  human nature. 

I also see that many of you feel that the episode felt incomplete and that, as in the case of the pseudo-Naxalite kidnapping case, the ending seemed rushed and too pat. Part of this is true, but I feel that there is much to be found here that is important for the series as a whole, in terms of character development and the relationships within the ETF. So I would request you to join me as we analyse these aspects.

To begin with, Arjun's unique powers of observation and deduction are on full display here. It is  thanks to him that all the key elements in this case come to light: the cash hoard in Leena's spare water tank, the vital importance of the stick it note with the number 1001.90/ on it, and its real meaning, the link between Mary and Leena, and the location of Bruce's new target in Mumbai. That he happens to smear his finger with butter, has to wash his hand, and the dry water tap in the washbasin then leads him to the cash, is one of those lucky chances that Providence provides for the best detectives! Now for the rest.

Arjun clearly dominant: While Rathore had seemed to be coming into his own in the last Checkmate  episode,  playing a crucial if not the decisive role in solving the case, here Arjun dominates visibly at every juncture, so much so that it seems at times as if he is heading the ETF! Rathore is practically overruled by Arjun repeatedly. When he says that the money found in the flat could not be traced as Shikha was making all her payments in cash, Arjun immediately states the opposite, and instructs Shree to trace the source of the Rs.2.6 crores. Shree duly does this, linking the money to an old unsolved bank robbery. Next, Arjun practically instructs Rathore to have the source of the rare drugs traced, and then himself orders Chotu to get this done  thru his informers. When Rathore sees no link between the two murders,  other than that the loot found in Shikha's flat had come from a bank robbery in which Mary was involved (he forgets the identical drugs used in both cases), Arjun immediately contradicts him, by patching  together the 2 halves of the photo of Mary, Leena and the baby, with his trademark Samjhe ys samjhaun? (an impertinent habit that the writers would do well to drop, especially when it is directed at the ETF chief).  

While Rathore decides to split the ETF into 2 teams to work separately on the 2 murders (his saying Is that clear?  is unsual, and seems to be an attempt to reassert his authority), the fact is that Arjun uses both Shree and Chotu continuously thereafter. Who is then left to work with Rathore? No one, and he is seen doing next to nothing in the rest of the case. All the crucial interactions with SSI Damle. For example, are  done solo  by Arjun.

When Rathore, ever the conventional police officer and man of action,  wants to raid Bruce's habitual addas  to try to nab him, Arjun insists on going to the BKB complex housing the new diamond trading offices, which he sees as the only likely target. Though this seems to an inspired guess, not a deduction based on facts, he proves to be correct. However,  repeated instances like this one make Rathore look ineffective, and undercut his authority over the team.

There is a brief moment of like-mindedness when Rathore approves of Arjun's idea of tracking down drug overdose cases with the same cocktail of drugs used on Mona, but that is about it.

This is not  to suggest that Arjun is trying actively to sideline Rathore, and he is the main lead, after all. Still, if the show is not to become completely one-sided and Rathore is not to look largely irrelevant, which will hurt the show, the writers need to do a balancing act soon. The ETF is a team, and it should be shown functioning as a team, not as a one man show. Rathore and Arjun need to be shown as moving, even if slowly, towards a mutually tolerant and co-operative relationship.Rathore stood up for Arjun and saved him from being suspended for having attacked Pathan; now Arjun should reciprocate.

Chotu's back story: This comes out of the blue, and is as surprising as it is moving. It produces a rare moment of concern and warmth from Arjun ' he puts his hand comfortingly on  Chotu's shoulder ' and Chotu feels reassured enough to respond likewise. Later Arjun also asks Chotu to be the first to break the news of her mother's death to Mona. The main purpose of this back story seems to be to bring home to Arjun that there are others in the ETF who too have suffered personal trauma, if not as great as his with Roshni, then at least approaching it in gravity. This should indirectly help him cope better with  his own loss and suffering. I am also sure, going by Shaleen's recent remarks about Arjun, that every character here has  a back story (barring Riya, unfortunately), that Rathore has one too, which might be as bad in its own way as Arjun's. The difference is that Rathore is far more stoic than Arjun and never betrays his feelings, focusing on being a conscientious and  responsible ETF chief.

Moral ambivalence: This is a story of varying shades of black, with very little white. So the villainy is a matter of degree. Arjun is of course totally justified in raging at SSI Damle for being a blot on the reputation of a police force which has any number of honest and efficient officers.  What Damle does, out of sheer greed, is totally criminal, and is that much worse because he is  police officer, duty bound to uphold the law, not to break it so badly. He deserves the harshest possible punishment.

But look  at the other side. Mary Fernandes was a longstanding and large scale drug peddler, and in a country where the penalty for this kind of crime is capital punishment, as in Malaysia, she would have been executed without question. Leena has been with Bruce in all his criminal activities, very likely including murder, and if she had been caught, she would have gone to jail for life. Instead, she leads a quiet life for over 20 years before the long shadows of her old sins catch up with her, and she is forced to commit suicide. Should one feel sorry for her just because she ends up like this, and for Mary just because she is forced to swallow a deathly dose of the same drugs that she sold, which ruined so many lives in the old days? I think not.

There was also an instance of dismaying  moral ambivalence, this time concerning the ETF. A police officer can kill in the line of duty, but only when there is no other option. In India, they are far stricter about the unnecessary use of force than, say, in the New York Police, who can shoot as soon as their target resists arrest (as in the infamous Diallo case, where an unarmed Somalian was shot 41 times by several NYPD officers). But here, the ETF indulges in a spectacular, no holds barred shoot out  straightaway,  as soon as Bruce produces his gun. (However, those slowmo  aerial acrobatics by Rathore, looking his best in sheer black, were  a visual and aesthetic delight!)  Then Chotu, having shot one of the thugs in the chest, then puts his gun into his mouth and finishes him off. Though the victim was clearly a thug, it was a shocking act, and if there had been any witnesses to it, Chotu would have been arrested on a murder charge.

He has never before been shown to be so violent, and probably the idea that it was this gang that was responsible for Leena being murdered, and Mona almost killed as well, must have preyed on his mind. But that cannot possibly excuse what he is shown as dping, and the CVs should never have shown this scene in that manner.

Question marks and mistakes:  How did Damle locate and steal Rs.2 crores from the cash hoard in the water tank? Did he discover it by chance, and if so, why did  he not take the whole of it?

If Mary worked with Leena in stealing the Rs.6 crores and then helped her to disappear, surely she would have taken a share of the loot? Why was Leena able to keep the whole? And what did she spend R.1.4 crores on, seeing that she had not bought her flat but only rented it?

How did the security guards not see Damle come into the building that night? They  tell the ETF that no one came.

Why was that photo of the three - Leena, her baby and Mary - cut into two parts, and why did Leena and Mary each keep the part showing herself,  and not the other, as would have been logical if it was  a memento?

The couple of  mistakes were minor: Rathore, after examining Shikha's documents, notes that her passport and PAN card (used for income tax purposes) were obtained in November-December 2011, whereas the date on the passport is clearly seen to be September 10, 2011. More seriously, Arjun states that Mona is Chitra,  since both had the same year of birth, 1996, which is ridiculous. The fact os that both had the same date of birth, Febrary 2, 1996, which is the clinching factor.

Sole glimpse of hope: At the end, there is a slight silver lining among all this darkness, as Mona finds a safe refuge with her dadi, Bruce's mother Jenny Braganza. It should make Chotu feel a bit better, though what he should really pray for is in spite of her having such parents, and a father in jail for the rest of his life to boot, Mona still manages to live a normal, simple life.

Shyamala B.Cowsik

Edited by sashashyam - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
i cant agree more!!!!
specially rathore's..he is being sidelined as always..
as all i remember his intelligence came into play only in the truck case..
Posted: 11 years ago
Also in the chess episode, Priya, for besides finding the diamond earring, it was he who pointed out that Kevin D'Costa, being a Catholic, would have been buried, not cremated, and so his body would be available for a post mortem.

Shyamala B.Cowsik

Originally posted by priya00147


i cant agree more!!!!
specially rathore's..he is being sidelined as always..
as all i remember his intelligence came into play only in the truck case..
Posted: 11 years ago
Hey dear, a very nice analysis. u mentionned each and every interesting, important part. there were sone arrors in the show but very minimal expect the Chotu one.
Coming to samjhe ya samjhaoun, they should never drop as most of the people wait for his trademark. i do agree rathod is the chief but seeing the first episodes it feels like they shared a past too, probably they were friends and i think this is the reason Arjun permits himself to say this to Rathod as he never behaved this way to anyother senior (commisionar). Besides that, i also felt that rathod should get more power of words as no matter what he is the chief. just my view i did not mean to offend anyone.

Apart that all the points were well described.

Luv u<333
Kashish
Posted: 11 years ago
Dear Faiza,

I agree with the points you have made @red,  and I really did not expect it to be dropped, as it has become a trademark sort of thing! But now that Rathore is in charge and he and Arjun do not seem to get on very well, Arjun should not be shown using it with him. It will have a bad effect on the younger team members. If he uses it for the youngsters, it is quite different.

Thanks  a lot, both for your comments and for reading the post so carefully.

Shyamala B.Cowsik

Originally posted by kashishk


Hey dear, a very nice analysis. u mentionned each and every interesting, important part. there were sone arrors in the show but very minimal expect the Chotu one.
Coming to samjhe ya samjhaoun, they should never drop as most of the people wait for his trademark. i do agree rathod is the chief but seeing the first episodes it feels like they shared a past too, probably they were friends and i think this is the reason Arjun permits himself to say this to Rathod as he never behaved this way to anyother senior (commisionar). Besides that, i also felt that rathod should get more power of words as no matter what he is the chief. just my view i did not mean to offend anyone.

Apart that all the points were well described.

Luv u<333
Kashish
Posted: 11 years ago
'One leak will sink a ship and one sin will destroy a sinner'
This line truely reflects what happened with leena n mary.Their own sins became the reason for their destruction.Leena & mary helped bruce in illegal activities and that sin of theirs became the reason for their death.Mary n leena were drug dealears and destroyed the lives of so many people without know what this drug will do to them in future.they were not repentent on their deeds but lived a silent life coz of fear.They both were criminals of higher order.I Would have some sympathy for them had they just been roberers n not drug smuglers bt we know what menance this drug creates in society.
Now coming on the case like u said there was no innocent party in the case both the sides were criminals n this is the first kind of story which depicts the true nature of humans till now in arjun.
Arjun was at his best detective skills from his assumption of that no to be related to murder to guessing the target of bruce.He showed it why he is called the super cop.
What i disliked is that rathore's character is shaping to show us how intelligent arjun is they r deglorifying rathore's skills.It is not necessary to show rathore dumb to glorify arjun's skill .they can show us without that.i really felt rathore was a mute spectator of the case's proceedings
Now coming on chotu's story i really felt bad for him bt as u said his story will make arjun realize he is not the sole person with sorrows there are more others n life doesnt stop with dead person it has to move on.
And coming to ur analysis it as always a treat to read.A Beautiful written piece.for this epi i have only to say
'sin is a viper that does always kill where it is not killed'
thanks n regards
samiya
Posted: 11 years ago
Very well written ...

Dere is a quote in hindi  which is sumthing like :"Jo Boya hain ...waise he payoge"

Which means : One has to pay for dere deeds sumwhere sumhow in life

Same was d case here...
The 2 ladies had done a lot of wrong deeds in their lives...they were a part of sum gang...involved in sum or other cases ...n den dey betrayed dere boss after realizing wat dey did was wrong n dey didnt want d child (Mona) should suffer because of them.

But still even after escaping for years ...d past came bak to haunt dere present n d young girls future...

I m sorry for d poor girl ..because she has to pay for her parent's deeds ...
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Second point : i didnt understood how d money was distributed : 6 crores was d money wid 4 crore wid Leena ...n 2 crore Damle stole ...Does dat mean : mary didnt took her share ...

i also didnt understood d point 
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thirdly,

Rathore was sidelined in the episode ...i like his detectives skills ..he played  a important role in Episode 25...

but dis episode ..he was not much to do ...
Arjun was d one who used Shree n chotu to find more n more about d case 

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i think dat if arjun has not noticed Damle's ID card ...dey would have definitely not come to know about his corrupt motives ...
1001.90/- : i expected the number to b more fruitful ... i was thinking to crack d code behind d number ..

n wat it came out to b a inspector's ID number ...


Love n regards 
Purva
Posted: 11 years ago
well long and nicely written post
N as usual you put out some strong points
yep feeling sorry for Leena and Mary, will be a bit too much, cause they themselves had probably killed or lead to many people's death when they were young
And as they say, "one Reaps only what it sows!"
and our past never ever leaves us,one day or the other it will come back
N i also felt, despite loving Arjun a lot, Rathore's role is being underestimated, comeon he's the Chief, he should act like one, but nowadays it's only Arjun leading everyone, somehow even i dont like it that much.
N well despite such families, lets hope that Mona/Chitra manages to gather her life and be something good unlike her parents, and manges to deal with the pain also!
N finally i also felt that sometimes the ETF people shoot a bit too much at people, without first trying to only hurt them or immobilize them.
I mean they could easily shoot in the hands, feet and throw the criminals' guns away, but nope they also shoot in the heart, in the head and now in the mouth!
I think they are putting too much violent acts by the ETF. 
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by sashashyam


Folks,

I hope you like this title for yesterday's episode, for it fits both Leena Samant and Mary Fernandes to a T. For both these women, their ugly past catches up with them. As Chotu says, Leena pays for her sins, and her being a loving and protective mother changes nothing in this. So does Mary, and so justice is done, after a fashion. This is what the ancient Greeks called nemesis (in their pantheon, Nemesis was the goddess of retribution).

glad to see ur post aunty..😛 n i like the title...it suits to situation perfectly..👏👍🏼

In this gloomy tale, there is hardly any good to be found (outside the ETF). Both the murder victims were themselves criminals in their earlier days, nor is there any trace of repentance in either. Leena lives happily off the proceeds of a bank robbery,  and Mary on her earnings from the foul drug trade (which is, in effect,  mass murder), using them for her beauty salon. Their common boyfriend, Bruce Braganza, is a hardened and  unrepentant gang leader, killer and supari-giver. To cap it all, the murder culprit turns out to be a serving police officer moonlighting (doing another job apart from his regular one) as a contract killer!

i didn't pity those two women, i would have had a little respect for them if they had earned a living by themselves n fed their children with their hard-earned money instead of raising them up on that bank-robbery money...👎🏼

It is really more like  a Raymond Chandler or James Hadley Chase novel than the usual TV crime story. The sole representative of innocence, the young Chitra aka Mona, is saddled with a genetic inheritance of the worst kind, as her parents are a thug-cum-murderer and a gangster's moll-cum-thief. It cannot get much blacker than this, would you not agree? This is not a criticism, but rather a compliment to the writers, who are obviously not afraid to probe the dark corners of  human nature. 

she was the only one who actually suffered in all thischaos... poor soul... the writers sure brought out some dark realities..🤢👏

I also see that many of you feel that the episode felt incomplete and that, as in the case of the pseudo-Naxalite kidnapping case, the ending seemed rushed and too pat. Part of this is true, but I feel that there is much to be found here that is important for the series as a whole, in terms of character development and the relationships within the ETF. So I would request you to join me as we analyse these aspects.

To begin with, Arjun's unique powers of observation and deduction are on full display here. It is  thanks to him that all the key elements in this case come to light: the cash hoard in Leena's spare water tank, the vital importance of the stick it note with the number 1001.90/ on it, and its real meaning, the link between Mary and Leena, and the location of Bruce's new target in Mumbai. That he happens to smear his finger with butter, has to wash his hand, and the dry water tap in the washbasin then leads him to the cash, is one of those lucky chances that Providence provides for the best detectives! Now for the rest.

that's what arjun is all about...his out-of-the-box thinking n cracking cases when everyone else see dead ends...👏👏

Arjun clearly dominant: While Rathore had seemed to be coming into his own in the last Checkmate  episode,  playing a crucial if not the decisive role in solving the case, here Arjun dominates visibly at every juncture, so much so that it seems at times as if he is heading the ETF! Rathore is practically overruled by Arjun repeatedly. When he says that the money found in the flat could not be traced as Shikha was making all her payments in cash, Arjun immediately states the opposite, and instructs Shree to trace the source of the Rs.2.6 crores. Shree duly does this, linking the money to an old unsolved bank robbery. Next, Arjun practically instructs Rathore to have the source of the rare drugs traced, and then himself orders Chotu to get this done  thru his informers. When Rathore sees no link between the two murders,  other than that the loot found in Shikha's flat had come from a bank robbery in which Mary was involved (he forgets the identical drugs used in both cases), Arjun immediately contradicts him, by patching  together the 2 halves of the photo of Mary, Leena and the baby, with his trademark Samjhe ys samjhaun? (an impertinent habit that the writers would do well to drop, especially when it is directed at the ETF chief).  

it's a one-man's show...from the name of the show itself...
har yug mein aega ek ARJUN!!! so can't blame anyone except the CVs for this...😕

While Rathore decides to split the ETF into 2 teams to work separately on the 2 murders (his saying Is that clear?  is unsual, and seems to be an attempt to reassert his authority), the fact is that Arjun uses both Shree and Chotu continuously thereafter. Who is then left to work with Rathore? No one, and he is seen doing next to nothing in the rest of the case. All the crucial interactions with SSI Damle. For example, are  done solo  by Arjun.

i cracked up during that scene...🤣 one part of the team was ARJUN n the other part shree-rathore-chotu...😆 (missed riya so much in this one)

When Rathore, ever the conventional police officer and man of action,  wants to raid Bruce's habitual addas  to try to nab him, Arjun insists on going to the BKB complex housing the new diamond trading offices, which he sees as the only likely target. Though this seems to an inspired guess, not a deduction based on facts, he proves to be correct. However,  repeated instances like this one make Rathore look ineffective, and undercut his authority over the team.

There is a brief moment of like-mindedness when Rathore approves of Arjun's idea of tracking down drug overdose cases with the same cocktail of drugs used on Mona, but that is about it.

This is not  to suggest that Arjun is trying actively to sideline Rathore, and he is the main lead, after all. Still, if the show is not to become completely one-sided and Rathore is not to look largely irrelevant, which will hurt the show, the writers need to do a balancing act soon. The ETF is a team, and it should be shown functioning as a team, not as a one man show. Rathore and Arjun need to be shown as moving, even if slowly, towards a mutually tolerant and co-operative relationship.Rathore stood up for Arjun and saved him from being suspended for having attacked Pathan; now Arjun should reciprocate.

well i prefer to stay mum on this one, don't want to hurt anyone...😳

Chotu's back story: This comes out of the blue, and is as surprising as it is moving. It produces a rare moment of concern and warmth from Arjun ' he puts his hand comfortingly on  Chotu's shoulder ' and Chotu feels reassured enough to respond likewise. Later Arjun also asks Chotu to be the first to break the news of her mother's death to Mona. The main purpose of this back story seems to be to bring home to Arjun that there are others in the ETF who too have suffered personal trauma, if not as great as his with Roshni, then at least approaching it in gravity. This should indirectly help him cope better with  his own loss and suffering. I am also sure, going by Shaleen's recent remarks about Arjun, that every character here has  a back story (barring Riya, unfortunately), that Rathore has one too, which might be as bad in its own way as Arjun's. The difference is that Rathore is far more stoic than Arjun and never betrays his feelings, focusing on being a conscientious and  responsible ETF chief.

chotu's past was quite touching...and they also gave a good message with it as well...👏 n yes i want to know rathore n shree's past now...😛 as for riya (hate u CVs)😡😡

Moral ambivalence: This is a story of varying shades of black, with very little white. So the villainy is a matter of degree. Arjun is of course totally justified in raging at SSI Damle for being a blot on the reputation of a police force which has any number of honest and efficient officers.  What Damle does, out of sheer greed, is totally criminal, and is that much worse because he is  police officer, duty bound to uphold the law, not to break it so badly. He deserves the harshest possible punishment.

But look  at the other side. Mary Fernandes was a longstanding and large scale drug peddler, and in a country where the penalty for this kind of crime is capital punishment, as in Malaysia, she would have been executed without question. Leena has been with Bruce in all his criminal activities, very likely including murder, and if she had been caught, she would have gone to jail for life. Instead, she leads a quiet life for over 20 years before the long shadows of her old sins catch up with her, and she is forced to commit suicide. Should one feel sorry for her just because she ends up like this, and for Mary just because she is forced to swallow a deathly dose of the same drugs that she sold, which ruined so many lives in the old days? I think not.

There was also another instance of moral ambivalence, this time concerning the ETF. A police officer can kill in the line of duty, but only when there is no other option. In India, they are far stricter about the unnecessary use of force than, say, in the New York Police, who can shoot as soon as their target resists arrest (as in the infamous Diallo case, where an unarmed Somalian was shot 41 times by several NYPD officers). But here, the ETF indulges in a spectacular, no holds barred shoot out  straightaway,  as soon as Bruce produces his gun. (However, those slowmo  aerial acrobatics by Rathore, looking his best in sheer black, were  a visual and aesthetic delight!)  Then Chotu, having shot one of the thugs in the chest, then puts his gun into his mouth and finishes him off. Though the victim was clearly a thug, it was a shocking act, and if there had been any witnesses to it, Chotu would have been arrested on a murder charge. He has never before been shown to be so violent, and probably the idea that it was this gang that was responsible for Leena being murdered, and Mona almost killed as well, must have preyed on his mind. But it would have been  much better to have avoided that shot.

damely disgusted me bigtime...😡😡 he should be given the harshest punishment possible (as u said) the two ladies, they did sow what they reap...😳

Question marks and mistakes:  How did Damle locate and steal Rs.2 crores from the cash hoard in the water tank? Did he discover it by chance, and if so, why did  he not take the whole of it?

If Mary worked with Leena in stealing the Rs.6 crores and then helped her to disappear, surely she would have taken a share of the loot? Why was Leena able to keep the whole? And what did she spend R.1.4 crores on, seeing that she had not bought her flat but only rented it?

How did the security guards not see Damle come into the building that night? They  tell the ETF that no one came.

Why was that photo of the three ' Leena, her baby and Mary ' cut into two parts, and why did Leena and Mary each keep the part showing herself,  and not the other, as would have been logical if it was  a memento?

The couple of  mistakes were minor: Rathore, after examining Shikha's documents, notes that her passport and PAN card (used for income tax purposes) were obtained in November-December 2011, whereas the date on the passport is clearly seen to be September 10, 2011. More seriously, Arjun states that Mona is Chitra,  since both had the same year of birth, 1996, which is ridiculous. The fact os that both had the same date of birth, Febrary 2, 1996, which is the clinching factor.

there were some gliches in the plot n even i was confused with that pic thing..😆 but aunty, i don;t watch the show with the same enthusiasm now... so...i didn't probe deep into all these matters..😳

Sole glimpse of hope: At the end, there is a slight silver lining among all this darkness, as Mona finds a safe refuge with her dadi, Bruce's mother Jenny Braganza. It should make Chotu feel a bit better, though what he should really pray for is in spite of her having such parents, and a father in jail for the rest of his life to boot, Mona still manages to live a normal, simple life.

 hope that she does lead a normal life after knowing all this...😕😳

Shyamala B.Cowsik

my reply is in pink (or purple)😕 the colour is confusing me...😆😆
Posted: 11 years ago
Dear Samiya,

Thanks for having had the patience to go thru my detailed analysis so carefully and to offer such well-considered comments. I see from your points @ red that you agree with me on everything of importance.

Yes, dealing in drugs is much worse even than murder, especially unpremeditated murder, for here the criminal deliberately destroys so many mostly young lives, body and soul, in the most callous manner possible. Capital punishment is too good for them. Mary got off very lightly,

Yes again, this is the most unremittingly dark story in Arjun so far, with not a single character being even slightly clean or likeable. Poor little Mona, what awful parents she is saddled with!

As I have stressed in the post, there is now a  clear need to build up Rathore; he cannot  be reduced like this to an ineffective dummy.

I am glad you wrote in with your comments. Best regards.

Shyamala B.Cowsik



Originally posted by samiya.059


'One leak will sink a ship and one sin will destroy a sinner'
This line truely reflects what happened with leena n mary.Their own sins became the reason for their destruction.Leena & mary helped bruce in illegal activities and that sin of theirs became the reason for their death.Mary n leena were drug dealears and destroyed the lives of so many people without know what this drug will do to them in future.they were not repentent on their deeds but lived a silent life coz of fear.They both were criminals of higher order.I Would have some sympathy for them had they just been roberers n not drug smuglers bt we know what menance this drug creates in society.

Now coming on the case like u said there was no innocent party in the case both the sides were criminals n this is the first kind of story which depicts the true nature of humans till now in arjun.
Arjun was at his best detective skills from his assumption of that no to be related to murder to guessing the target of bruce.He showed it why he is called the super cop.

What i disliked is that rathore's character is shaping to show us how intelligent arjun is they r deglorifying rathore's skills.It is not necessary to show rathore dumb to glorify arjun's skill .they can show us without that.i really felt rathore was a mute spectator of the case's proceedings
Now coming on chotu's story i really felt bad for him bt as u said his story will make arjun realize he is not the sole person with sorrows there are more others n life doesnt stop with dead person it has to move on.

And coming to ur analysis it as always a treat to read.A Beautiful written piece.for this epi i have only to say

'sin is a viper that does always kill where it is not killed'

thanks n regards
samiya

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